Transformers: Lunar

by Vio Bio

Luna is a fourteen year old girl that was lucky enough not to be caught in a house fire that killed her parents. After a freak accident trying to hot-wire a random 18 wheeler she now has a robotic arm and has to face off enemies she never thought existed.

1. Chapter 1

Hello all Lunar readers,

For those that are not following along with Lunar updates on my deviantart, I am sad to say that Lunar is on a small Hiatus while I fix a few things along the chapters. I have been receiving a few reviews on the older chapters of this fanficiton. I appreciate all the constructive criticism. I will be doing my very best to rewrite some of the plot holes in the Lunar chapters in addition to adding a few more hints which would help with later chapters. I am sorry that I have waited this long to do such a task. I hope all you all understand. For now, this is the new substitute for Chapter 1 until I am ready to post the rewritten chapters. Thank you for your time. I hope to fix all of the major problems.

Vio-Bio

P.S. Once again I apologize for all TF Fans out there that I might have upset. I am trying not to excuse myself but to let you see that writing in third person is not my preferred writing style. However, I have already written 30+ chapters so I will learn to polish my writing style so it shall be more enjoyable for you all. In addition, this story is almost a year old since we first thought of it (Yes, we, I write this along with my boyfriend ) so I feel extremely bad for not rewriting these chapters sooner.