Okay...it seemed like people enjoyed the last thing i wrote... I want reveiws on this one to know where to go...or if i should even continue writing it :D.

KiddxMaka SoulxMaka

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Makas POV-

Kidd walked up to me smiling his adorable smile. The smile that made my soul melt and my knees weak. He had beautiful golden god-like eyes, he was a death-god so it made since. He walked up and tugged a pig-tail a little lower onto my head and grinned down at me.

"There now its symetrical" He explained. This was his routine though, he always fixed them.

"oh really?" i asked tugging it back up futher on my head making them uneven agian. We wernt dating. I would have loved it if we were though. But he was dating Liz Thompson, one of his partners, his guns, and now his life.

"No No No!" He exclaimed pulling the pig-tail into place.

Kidds POV-

She really was adorable, messing around with the pig-tails, she new it would drive me up a wall for them to be asymetrical. I had given myself to Liz, in an effort to forget the affect maka truly had on me. We began walking to school soon after this.

"So where is Liz?" she asked innocently, i wanted to tell her not to worry about Liz, it was me and her right now. But instead i gave her an answer.

"She is busy doing her nails and hair agian today, she takes longer to do that then i do to check and see if my house is symmetrical." I chuckled. She burst out into a perfectly even laugh. Her face, her smile, her eyes...oh her eyes. They were the sunshine hitting the leaves mid-spring. She was beautiful.

I was pulled from my thoughts by her voice.

"Kidd you okay? You dont noramlly space out" she held concern in her eyes.

"Yeah im fine." I said.

Souls POV-

She finally arrived at school. And she was with him. I hated the way she smiled when he looked at her. I hated the way he could make her laugh. I mean she was my partner, plus he was dating Liz he needed to get off her back. I loved her, I dont know if i would ever admit it out loud but i did. I wanted her to love me to, i wanted to know.

"Hey." She said happily, i gave an absent minded wave of my hand in her direction to show i heard her. "You okay? You look really upset" She observed.

"Yeah im cool." I said using my favorite word.

"Okaay..." She said slowly. She decided to leave Kidd and Liz alone. She had finally showed up, i guessed she was doing her hair. She decided to walk by me instead. So slowly we headed to our first class Professer Sids Class.

Makas POV-

Was everyone acting weird today? Or was it just me? I didnt quiet understand the feelings i had for Soul, but when he looks sad it puts a heavy burden on my heart, and i feel like i would do anything to see his cocky grin back where it belongs, on his face.

"Oi, you sure your okay Soul?" i asked genuinly worried. I wanted to see him grin, or smile, anything but the brow furrowed look he had right now.

"Yeah im fine i promise, hey! You havent even taken any notes! you sure your okay?" He whispered. Honestly i had no idea Sid had even started his lecture, i was to caught up in my worried thoughts to even consider what was going on. Before i could really even pull out pen and paper the bell rang signaling the end of class.

Souls POV-

I watched jealously as maka called Kidd over to her and whispered something in his ear turning a bright red color. Kidd just smiled down at her his golden cat-like eyes glinting in humor. And he handed her his notebook, she just smiled brightly, turned and walked towards me, ready to head home.

Kidds POV-

She didnt take notes today? I wonder what was going through her mind... She was top of the class, she never forgot to take notes during a lecture. My concern didnt go unnoticed, Liz was giving me a funny look as we began the short walk home.

Makas POV-

"Soul i cant do this anymore!" I exclaimed. He gave me the oddest look, the only way to describe it was mild shock with a touch of hope. This confused me even more, I was so worried about Soul and what was bugging him so much! "What is going on in that snowy-white head of yours?!" I cried. He gave me a look agian just this time he was lost. He didnt know what to say/

Soud POV-

What could have provked her to yell like that?
"What is going on in that snowy-white head of yours?!" her cry resounded in my head. Could i bring myself to tell her how i had loved her since i played that tune? Since she took my hand, though she knew i was flawed and twisted? Since she became my partner?

"Maka..." I started.

"Soul what are you doing?" she asked quietly, slowly as i stepped towards her, i didnt want to stand across the room and tell her this, and i needed to get it out while this burst of courage lasts.

"Maka..." I began agian. "Maka... I..I.." I stammered.

"Yea Soul?" she said softly.

'I love you' i thought, i just couldnt get the words to form. Nothing.

I sighed this was ganna get me maka chopped so hard, but the words wouldnt come out. It was the only other way. So slowly i closed the gap between us quickly and kissed her.

It was sweet and fast, it burned me with lost passion, and i loved it

Makas POV-

I heard him let out a sigh. This was taking him forever to get out, whatever it was why couldnt she just say whatever he had to say?

'What on ear...' her thoughts were suddenly interupted by a kiss. Not the kind of kiss I had been waiting on from Kidd, slow and sweet. This kiss was fast and over too soon, filled with to much passion, I loved it.

Kidds POV-

He sat in bed, thinking of Maka. He had known it for a while, but he finally admitted it.

"I love her," i said out loud, testing the words to my lips, to see how they felt. i liked them, they swept across me like a summer breeze, they felt so natural. I was going to break things off with Liz tomorrow, and i was going to tell maka how i felt about her.

"I love her," i tested the words agian, they were bittersweet, like a honey wine, I loved it.

So... I need to know if i should continue or not :) i need your alls help in this too... SO review review review :).