The Perfect Girl?

This fanfiction is based on the Japanese series 'Yamato Nadeshiko Shichi Henge' which has become my favourite series of the moment. Edward, Carlisle, Jasper and Emmett are about the same age – but they aren't brothers at all, they're just students earning their way into society.

Twilight is owned by Stephenie Meyer and YamaNada is owned by Tomoko Hayakawa.

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"Boys, I have an important announcement to make," Auntie said, drinking her glass of champagne, whilst reclining on her luxurious seat.

Carlisle, Jasper, Emmett and Edward sat anxiously on the sofa opposite her.

"I've decided to find my love by travelling around the world, but you may stay here if you wish to, as long as you continue to pay the rent," she mused, swirling around the remainder of the champagne in her glass.

Edward exhaled deeply. Emmett and Jasper relaxed in their seats. Carlisle frowned at the idea.

"But, if you would consider it, I could give you free rent," Auntie compromised. The four boys, sat up with want in their eyes. They looked at each other and smiled.

"If you promise to do me a favour in return," Aunt finished. Edward stood up immediately.

"Yes, we'll do it!" Edward exclaimed without consulting the others first. Carlisle pulled him down.

"What's the catch?" Carlisle asked, with a suspicious look in his eyes.

Auntie laughed loudly, as though as the idea was ludicrous. Edward elbowed him, with a dangerous look in his eyes.

"A few days ago, I received news that my darling niece was to live here, all I want you four to do is make her into an elegant lady and then you may have free rent," Auntie explained.

"How old is she?" Emmett asked, with a seductive glint in his eye.

"Your age," Auntie answered.

"YES!" Emmett said, punching the air, "This one is totally mine."

"I have to warn you, Bella is a black belt in martial arts, you don't want to get on the wrong side of her," Auntie told them seriously, all trace of humour gone.

"I wouldn't listen to Emmett, Auntie. He just is excited that a girl of our age is coming," Jasper said, putting his hand over Emmett's hand.

"And if we fail to make your niece into a lady?" Carlisle said. Edward made a sudden movement to him as if to strangle him. Jasper, letting go of Emmett reached for Edward instead. They both tried to hit at each other, but unfortunately Emmett was in the way and he received both of the punches. In anger, he started to fight with the other two.

"Well, then I triple your rent," Auntie said. Edward, Jasper and Emmett dropped their fists and their jaws dropped simultaneously. Carlisle looked at them, as if to say, 'No way are we doing this,'

"Deal," Edward said, standing up. Carlisle made sounds of protest, but Emmett muffled them.

"Right, then. I'm off!" Auntie said putting her glass on the table. There was a soft tapping on the window behind her and she ran to open the window. Carlisle, Edward, Emmett and Jasper all looked around her and saw a ladder. She climbed awkwardly in a skirt out of the window onto a floating ladder. Judging by the loud sounds coming in from the outside and the wind blowing violently on the trees, that it was a helicopter. The boys were awed by the large entourage that were taking her around the world.

"Adios, amigos!" Auntie yelled in Spanish, much to the confusion to the boys.

"At least we have a few days before this Bella comes to have the mansion to ourselves," Edward said lightly.

"Then who's going to cook?" Carlisle said slyly.

The colour from Edward's face went.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" was heard from the mansion.

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What do you think? Should I carry this on?