Star Wars
The Thin Jedi Path
For Thousands of years the Jedi have protected the republic, been ambassadors for the republic and if needed fighters with great skill. Known throughout the galaxy by they weapons. But what happens when a Jedi is through into a path that will test his every skill. Will he be able to hold onto the light side, or will he be through into the rage filled dark side. Jedi Padawan Zaor Farer has been with the Jedi all his life, he knows nothing of his parents or any family apart from the Jedi, but when he is sent on a mission with his master and finds himself in a hell he will be tested, time and time again.
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Corusant Jedi Hanger Bay
Zaor Farer, a member of the reptilian humanoids known as Fallen, he was dressed in a simple under tunic, but over that was a huge over robe held together in the middle by a black belt, with huge should blade covers which made his top half look huge, the robe was a dark black, it seemed to almost capture the light. Seating on his belt in full show was his lightsabre, the choice weapon of the Jedi Knight. For Zaor was a Jedi, he was a Padawan, his master was already inside a Jedi fighter, the triangle shaped fighter, which was fast, moveable and powerful. It was around 8 metres in length, over 3 metres in width. Able to get speeds of 12,00 kph in most atmospheres and 5,000 kph, it also held two powerful dual laser cannon.
"Zaor, hurry up, get into your fighter, we are leaving," said Zaor's Master from his fighter. Zaor used the force to help him jump from the ground up a metre of so to land just next to his cockpit, he then dropped into the cockpit closing the canopy, as he got comfortable. He had already ran his flight checks and was ready to go.
Putting power to his fighter he took over, his master was already in front of him, he gave his fighter a little bit more power and got next to his master. While Zaor could easy outfly his mater he didn't, he just sat on his wing, following his master to the Hyperdrive sockets that stayed in orbit above the temple.
"Zaor, I have just been informed that our hyperdrives sockets have been given our destinations. Once you connect with yours let it take you into hyperspace," said his master over the communications.
"Yes master," replied Zaor. He keep his glaze on the closer coming stars, they were almost through the atmosphere. Zaor was about to ask his master if he knew where they were going when he saw his hyperdrive sockets, he connected with his. And saw on his in-screen display that he would enter hyperspace in the next couple of seconds. Letting his mind at ease he watched as he entered hyperspace.
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Zaor woke, he didn't know the time, and as far as he was concerned he had only just fallen asleep. He became a alert as soon as he saw it, a huge red ball in front of him. He didn't know what the planet was; he had no idea where he was going,
Zaor could see that he was still connected to the hyperdrive; he hit the manual release button with no success. Zaor looked to his left and right, and all around him trying to see his master's fighter but couldn't. Zaor could sense fear entering his mind, trying to block it out he grappled the controls of his fighter and tried to get control, but couldn't. He ran his fingers over the controls trying to get some responses, but with no success he stared at the ball.
When hope appears to be gone... Hope will come remembering Yoda's words he didn't understand until know. But the problem was he had no hope, not that he could see or find.
"Attention Unknown Vessel! You are entering a forbidden planet. Change course right away or you will be shot down," commanded a voice from the fighter's intercom.
Zaor hit the communications button and yelled a reply. "This is Jedi Knight Zaor Farer, my fighter is not responding to any controls. Do not shot down!" but got no reply.
Zaor was about to try something when his fighter was covered in a blinding white light. Then as quick as it came it was gone, but everything had changed.
His fighter's canopy was broken, a strange smell was all around him, and the light was different, it was all red. Zaor got out of the fighter by half crawling through the broken canopy. He then turned to see his fighter completely unusable. The nose of the fighter was gone; the engine was smoking, and none of the landing pads were down, and therefore stuck. The R3 astromech droid was gone, and the back was gone as well. Zaor reached out with the force to see if he was in and danger, and apart from the sense of being lost and alone on a strange planet he was ok and not in any close danger.
He leaned back into the fighter's cockpit and looked at the controls, as he had seen earlier, the controllers where destroyed. He was stuck. Zaor jumped back off the fighter and walked around to behind it. He then tried to open the back storage compartment but it was jammed shut. Pulling his lightsabre from his belt he activated it, from the projection plate of the lightsabre a gold blade came to life. Cutting the locks of the doors he opened it and looked inside to find nothing. Cursing he turned and looked around. He couldn't feel his master at all, he knew that his master was nowhere near him, and he had to depend on himself.
Zaor walked along side his fighter and looked at it once more, and then turning away he walked off. His robe flowing out behind him, his lightsabre on his side, he would find the bottom of this, he would find what happened to his master, and most of all, who was behind it.
From the Author: Hey thanks, for reading the introduction to my story, make sure that you read the next part coming up soon. I will try to have a new chapter up around every two or three days. Each page will go from two to three pages (I Hope). Thanks and May the Force be with you.
All Characters are of my creational and any use of them is prohibited, unless permission given by the author (myself). (
For Thousands of years the Jedi have protected the republic, been ambassadors for the republic and if needed fighters with great skill. Known throughout the galaxy by they weapons. But what happens when a Jedi is through into a path that will test his every skill. Will he be able to hold onto the light side, or will he be through into the rage filled dark side. Jedi Padawan Zaor Farer has been with the Jedi all his life, he knows nothing of his parents or any family apart from the Jedi, but when he is sent on a mission with his master and finds himself in a hell he will be tested, time and time again.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Corusant Jedi Hanger Bay
Zaor Farer, a member of the reptilian humanoids known as Fallen, he was dressed in a simple under tunic, but over that was a huge over robe held together in the middle by a black belt, with huge should blade covers which made his top half look huge, the robe was a dark black, it seemed to almost capture the light. Seating on his belt in full show was his lightsabre, the choice weapon of the Jedi Knight. For Zaor was a Jedi, he was a Padawan, his master was already inside a Jedi fighter, the triangle shaped fighter, which was fast, moveable and powerful. It was around 8 metres in length, over 3 metres in width. Able to get speeds of 12,00 kph in most atmospheres and 5,000 kph, it also held two powerful dual laser cannon.
"Zaor, hurry up, get into your fighter, we are leaving," said Zaor's Master from his fighter. Zaor used the force to help him jump from the ground up a metre of so to land just next to his cockpit, he then dropped into the cockpit closing the canopy, as he got comfortable. He had already ran his flight checks and was ready to go.
Putting power to his fighter he took over, his master was already in front of him, he gave his fighter a little bit more power and got next to his master. While Zaor could easy outfly his mater he didn't, he just sat on his wing, following his master to the Hyperdrive sockets that stayed in orbit above the temple.
"Zaor, I have just been informed that our hyperdrives sockets have been given our destinations. Once you connect with yours let it take you into hyperspace," said his master over the communications.
"Yes master," replied Zaor. He keep his glaze on the closer coming stars, they were almost through the atmosphere. Zaor was about to ask his master if he knew where they were going when he saw his hyperdrive sockets, he connected with his. And saw on his in-screen display that he would enter hyperspace in the next couple of seconds. Letting his mind at ease he watched as he entered hyperspace.
*~*~*
Zaor woke, he didn't know the time, and as far as he was concerned he had only just fallen asleep. He became a alert as soon as he saw it, a huge red ball in front of him. He didn't know what the planet was; he had no idea where he was going,
Zaor could see that he was still connected to the hyperdrive; he hit the manual release button with no success. Zaor looked to his left and right, and all around him trying to see his master's fighter but couldn't. Zaor could sense fear entering his mind, trying to block it out he grappled the controls of his fighter and tried to get control, but couldn't. He ran his fingers over the controls trying to get some responses, but with no success he stared at the ball.
When hope appears to be gone... Hope will come remembering Yoda's words he didn't understand until know. But the problem was he had no hope, not that he could see or find.
"Attention Unknown Vessel! You are entering a forbidden planet. Change course right away or you will be shot down," commanded a voice from the fighter's intercom.
Zaor hit the communications button and yelled a reply. "This is Jedi Knight Zaor Farer, my fighter is not responding to any controls. Do not shot down!" but got no reply.
Zaor was about to try something when his fighter was covered in a blinding white light. Then as quick as it came it was gone, but everything had changed.
His fighter's canopy was broken, a strange smell was all around him, and the light was different, it was all red. Zaor got out of the fighter by half crawling through the broken canopy. He then turned to see his fighter completely unusable. The nose of the fighter was gone; the engine was smoking, and none of the landing pads were down, and therefore stuck. The R3 astromech droid was gone, and the back was gone as well. Zaor reached out with the force to see if he was in and danger, and apart from the sense of being lost and alone on a strange planet he was ok and not in any close danger.
He leaned back into the fighter's cockpit and looked at the controls, as he had seen earlier, the controllers where destroyed. He was stuck. Zaor jumped back off the fighter and walked around to behind it. He then tried to open the back storage compartment but it was jammed shut. Pulling his lightsabre from his belt he activated it, from the projection plate of the lightsabre a gold blade came to life. Cutting the locks of the doors he opened it and looked inside to find nothing. Cursing he turned and looked around. He couldn't feel his master at all, he knew that his master was nowhere near him, and he had to depend on himself.
Zaor walked along side his fighter and looked at it once more, and then turning away he walked off. His robe flowing out behind him, his lightsabre on his side, he would find the bottom of this, he would find what happened to his master, and most of all, who was behind it.
From the Author: Hey thanks, for reading the introduction to my story, make sure that you read the next part coming up soon. I will try to have a new chapter up around every two or three days. Each page will go from two to three pages (I Hope). Thanks and May the Force be with you.
All Characters are of my creational and any use of them is prohibited, unless permission given by the author (myself). (