Final Valley
"CHIDORI"
Naruto looked down at his supposed best friends hand where his heart was 'why saskue I thought we were brothers' was the last thing the blonde thought as he felt the fimiliar tug of his mind signifing that he was going to go 'chat' with the kyuubi.
naruto's mindscape
Look at this treat," the kyuubi laughed,"not only do i get to go free i get to torment my container befor he dies." The kyuubi laughed some more until he noticed something was 'off' with his container, the boy wasnt getting angry,he wasnt crying, he wasnt even talking insted the boys eyes were glazed over, his true emoyions showing for once in his life. Pain,Betrayal,Sarrow,But most startaling of all was the burning hatred. The kyuubi flinched as he realized these were not the eyes of some idiotic prepubesent BOY, no these were the eyes of a man, a man that has been through six kinds of hell to get where he is. "kyuubi" naruto said sounding erriely calm "for thirteen years i have been your prison...for thirteen years i have takin the hatred and punishment ment for you." the kyuubi involintaraly shuddered at the boys voice as the tone got much colder."for thirteen years you have sat in this cozy cage while you mocked me for being a weakling". Naruto began to calmly walk toward the kyuubi's cage, "I have one question ohh mighty kitsune"the blonde spat out as he stopped in front of the cage, not bothering to wait for the kitsune to awnser him he said"Do you fear death?" the kyuubi started to shake as he saw the once funny,stupid blond's eyes change from their cold blue to a malicious yellow with black scalera. "What are you?" Naruto's skin changed to a pale white and he began to chuckle darkly"What am I... he he he he he he me im your exicutioner!" The kyuubi started to scream as he and the seal that had contained him in this boy for so long began to dissolve into thick streams off matter that swirled into the childs mouth, and at the moment before he was completly consumed he heard two words that would come to terrorize the kyuubi even in the afterlife "SO HUNGRY".
Final valley
Sasuke stared at his eyes gone were the two commas he was familiar with and in thier place were his twisted eyes in the shape of an atom with a puiple in the middle.'what have i done' the boy thought as he was walking away from the spot where he had given his 'brother' a new hole, suddenly sasuke was thrown across the lake by an enormous blast in pressure right from where naruto had been floating,sasuke turned around hoping to see the blonde idiot the had become his closest and only true friend,instead of that the avenger saw a figure cloaked by steam to where sasuke could only see a silouet. The figure stood at 5'11 and semmed to have a lean build the only distinguishing feature was the signature spiky hair "NARUTO!"sasuke shouted on impulse "Teme" a dark voice growled back as the figure began to walk towards sasuke. the avengers eyes began to acces the situation however his eyes lingered on the fist-shaped hole in the figures chest "n-n-naruto is that you". Sasukes eyes widned in shock as the steam cleared, the figure's skin was a pale white as was his hair and he seemed to be wearing a white coat [1]except on the top right side the jacket was ripped away to show a lean body and a fist sized hole where his heart would have been, but what caught sasukes attention the most was the fox mask[2] he wore "hehehe guess what teme im back" the man opened his eyes to stare at sasuke"and this time im not gona spare you"
[1] like ulqorria's espada outfit except with a hidan like twist
[2]go to my profile to see this
plez review and tell me how i did and if i should continue.