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Angel of Mercy '96: Sorry it's a little scrambled. I just wanted to tell how Edmund, and Lucy got their names, and well I don't know the point of that chapter. I just wrote it.
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CRASH! I winced as something sharp enbedded itself in my leg. "Whoops" I said I heard running torwards the place in which I was.
"Edmund what happend?" Peter asked. I sighed.
"What do you think happened?" Then footsteps.
"RUN!" Peter shouted grabbing my arm pulling me along. It was that moment I noticed Lucy, and Susan were with him. "In here!" Peter said.
"We'll never fit!" Susan said.
"It's either in here, or out there!" Peter said grabbing my arm, and shoved me into the place.
"Ow!" I said "Watch it!" Then when the others got in there was pushing, and shoving and other things. When all the sudden I fell, and my hands touched something cold.
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"Wow" I said looking out at the winter wonderland.
"Why is it cold?" Edmund asked.
"Umm, because there's anouther land in the wardrobe, and it's wintertime." I said looking at my only brother. He moaned.
"Perfect just perfect. What next? Talking beavers?" I smiled, and helped my brother up.
"Edmund nothing is going to be that weird."
"I'm weird look at you!" a voice said.
"What's that?" Susan asked looking around. We all looked around. Well exspect Edmund who was just standing there shivering. Then what should come into view? A beaver.
"Whoa" I said staring.
"What?" Edmund asked obviously in one of his moods.
"There's a beaver." I said looking at the beaver in surprise.
"Well there's no point in standing there freezing!" We all jumped a mile exspect Edmund.
"Wha?" I said staring at the beaver. "You, you talk?"
"Of course I talk!" The beaver said. "Why wouldn't I?" Edmund laughed at that.
"So are you sons of Adam and daughters of Eve?" The beaver asked curiosly.
"No" Susan said "Our mother's name is Helen, and..."
"What I ment was are you human?" At that Edmund laughed.
"What would we be? Satyrs?" The beaver's eyes got huge. Which is really weird if you've never seen it.
"I've never...come with me. Into the forest hurry!"
"Wait" Susan said turning for the wardrobe. At first I thought she would leave, but instead she grabbed some coats. "We'll be needing these." Thank goodness for Susan. She handed them out, and once we had them on the beaver then said.
"Come" I grabbed Edmund's hand, and we went after the beaver. Afte awhile in the forest the beaver turned. He opened his mouth when all the sudden. A tree came to life. It's branch went straight for Edmund. It hit him in the right leg. He let out a cry as he fell to the ground. "Edmund!" I shouted just as the trees around us came to life. One hit Lucy in the shoulder. One hit Susan in the arm. When Edmund stood the tree hit his leg again, and he fell with a snap. His leg was broken. The beaver then got hit, and became unconsious. Edmund once again tried to stand though, because of his leg he couldn't really do it. A tree hit him again this time hard in the head. He let out yet anouther cry before he collasped.
"Edmund!" I shouted once again trying to get to my brother, but a tree branch hit my head. Hard enough for my to lose myself into the darkness.
Oh I the time passing page break! Where you won't know what happens until they realize what happened when they were passed out! LOL! I love my job.
I groaned sitting up. I rubbed the back of my head trying to figure out what happend. "Did we just get attacked by trees?" Susan asked in disbelief.
"The White Witch must know your here." The Beaver said. "These trees must be on her side. Is everyone here?"
"I'm here" Lucy said sitting up wincing. I looked at Susan who was favoring one arm. The Beaver who's tail was broken. Yet I had no injuries.
"Wait" Susan said. "Where's Edmund?" That caught my attention. I spun my head looking, but my little brother wasn't in my sight. I stood up, and he still wasn't there.
"Ed!" I shouted "Edmund!" No answer. The Beaver then said something that will effect us greatly.
"It's no use. I know what happend. The White Witch had her trees attack you." I sighed.
"We know" The Beaver sighed.
"What I ment was. She had them do that, so she could weaken you. Then she will send someone to find the weakest of you, and kidnap that one." That statement stopped my blood cold.
"What, what will she do to him?" I asked The Beaver shrugged. That's when Lucy said.
"Excuse me, but we never learned your name." Leave it to Lucy to try to break the tention.
"Oh my wife will have my head. I'm Mr. Beaver. My wife Mrs. Beaver will want to meet you." That's when I remembered something that will highly effect this plot.
"Wait" I said staring at them. "Edmund's blind."
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Well that was interesting? I had to find a way to tell you, and well that's my idea. Okay now then I'm sorry to say this is now over. :{( Don't worry though more Hidden Secrets! I have no clue where that name came from. I'll find a way to make the tital make sence. ADIO!
