Loss
First story so be nice :P not really, I need to be beat down to know what you guys like ^^ *DISCLAMER* (some of the things you will be reading are somewhat stolen, but incorporated into my own ideas; plus they didn't have a copyright© on it :P) Very little of it will be first person view. **sorry for the first chapter taking so long….I've had some family as well as some fiancé' issues :/
I don't own Naruto, if I did…well let's just say I don't own him for now
"talk"
'thoughts'
"kyu, other demons"
-Sfx-
*summary For chapter* What happens when the only person who kept you sane is gone?
The start of a new end
As I gaped in awe I thought back….how did it get this way?
*Long Flashback no jutsu*
-First POV-
I walked in to my house and close the door behind me, I sat my stuff down in my room. No one was home…I smiled. "Perfect".
I wiggled my mouse to awake my computer; thing has been through some tough times with me, now being 4 years old-which is really old if you think how fast technology updates and changes. But none the less, it's been there for me in the end. It awakened ready to do whatever I tell it to do; I love computers. I loaded up Firefox and Google Chrome, both having saved my tabs from last night. I checked my email and my site inboxes like newgrounds. I sighed "nothing new" I said with great boredom. So I decided to load up my favorite game…Wolfenstien Enemy Territory. I play daily, killing mindlessly and enjoying the occasional win by me and no one's help. I've worked hard to get where I was and the respect that I thought I had, killing and moving through the ranks; hoping everyday to get that invite to join the clan….until then I kill kill kill.
I was just about to get a Unstoppable killing spree when I was shot with someone who had a snipe, as I looked it was- "fucking Henkie!". I calmed down a bit after he was killed by someone's knife, I was lined up with my scope on a K43 when I heard Jake, nick, vin, and mike playing basketball. I decided to join them, giving my normal excuse to the guys I was about to log off when my phone buzzed. I looked, it was my girl. Me and my girl have been together for three years now, engaged for two. She has to be the most understanding and hottest girl I have ever had the fortune being with. Everything about her is wonderful; her black-shoulder length hair, her pink lips, her brown beautiful eyes, her curvy body, and her irresistible voice that calls to me when she needs something. I don't think there is nothing I wouldn't do for that girl, except-wait…nope, nothing I wouldn't do for that girl.
As I opened up my phone ready to read something like 'I love you' or 'hey sexy' or something along the lines of that, but I got a blank text. It happens from time to time, so I erased it and went to play outside; she would txt again. After coming all sweaty I turned on my fan that's always right next to me in the summer, then I went back on Firefox and on to CNN. Ever since I did health articles I was interested in the titles and read some things about new tech and health.
But today they had a story of a girl who committed suicide by trying to cut out her heart , and apparently almost successful. I decided to stay up and watch the news, because they didn't have a full report or a video on the web yet.
So I stayed up, mom was getting home late maybe 12 by the way she sounded, so I stayed up knowing I wouldn't have to hear nagging or her yelling for me to get into bed. They were just about to show it when mom called, It wasn't unnatural for her to call right after she hung up with you because she forgot to tell you something or tell you to do a chore. I hit the pause button for the TV and sighed, "Hello?" I asked. I may have known who it is before I pick up but it's out of habit that I say it. Mom screamed, "Don't turn on the TV or the computer, go outside and wait for vin, were going out to Denny's"…click. I forgot to charge my battery that day but I didn't bother to plug it in, I wanted to know why she didn't want me to turn on any electronics.
A paranoid thought 'maybe an electric trigger was setup to blow the house up', but I quickly discarded that thought. I was already on the computer, and the TV was already on; and if anyone messed with my computer I would know. So I just shrugged it off and hit play on the TV…the possible biggest mistake of my life.
As I watched I listened…I listened to how a girl killed herself…using a knife I gave her
*CLIFFNOTE!*
It's been awhile hasn't it fans?
It totally has been baka
Hey watch it! Anyways…I'm back, and staying; and I promise to never go back on that promise!
*Cough*
*Glare*…anyway…I came here to give u a first chapter look on Loss my new story…and…say thank you.
Wait what? I'm confused
It's simple really, I went back to my yahoo mail box and looked at all the saved reviews I had from my other discontinued stories, and those were when I was 14-15 years old. And it gave me something…something I truly haven't felt in a LONG time…
Something up your ass?
*Duck tapes mouth shut* you guys gave me motivation, something I need right now more than ever. So please if the people who read my other stories read this and review make your selves known so others who review can say thank you…to you because made it possible. And I'll post the next chapter ASAP.
Oh and for those who say it's not in the right section, it will be in about….5 or 10 chapters. It's a half and half. Half real world with fantasy and half fan fic.
Cya next time :P