This is my very first fic, so R&R! (flames are accepted, but please, not
too hot! ^^;;)
I don't own YYH, or any of its characters, but I do own Reiku! YYH belongs to Japan and all its geniuses. /denotes character thought/ [author's words or thoughts] *person on other side of the phone* "character speaking" (duh!) 'written note' ~~~ scene or POV change
Ch.1-"Puppy" Love
Hiei and Kurama walked in silence, each deep in thought. They hadn't spoken much since the latest case, in which they were forced to fight against the Koorime; Hiei hadn't liked it, yet hadn't not liked it. He was incredibly confused, ad Kurama understood. Hiei hadn't had to think of any of the Koorime, except for Yukina, for ages, and he was discontent. Just then, Yuuske came running up like the Hounds of Hell were at his heels.
"Konichiwa, Yuuske-kun, daijoubo?" Kurama asked in a worried tone. He had never seen his friend so panicked before, and it was a little disconcerting.
"Hai, I'm fine, but there's big trouble! Boton told me to get you and hurry back to my house, Mom's not gonna be out for much longer, and the others are waiting, c'mon!"
~~~~~~~~~~at Yuuske's house~~~~~~~~~~~~
Boton sat on her heels, oar in hand. She was ready to beat the thing to death if it did escape, but she REALLY hoped she didn't have to. Boton could feel its youki all the way across the room, and that demon was mad!! She looked at the strapping young teenage boy sitting on the cage; his eyes were closed and the blue pacifier that was constantly in his mouth was twitching slightly.
/Koenma-sama is so nervous, what could this thing be?/ she thought to herself.
Boton was about to ask if he was all right when the door flew open, and three of the Reikai Tantei practically flew into the room, sweating and gasping for breath. Hiei spoke first.
" We couldn't find the buffoon, though we looked everywhere. He had best not be with Yukina."
"Hiei, just forget about it, we're here on business and don't have time to worry about your sister so sit down!"
Boton gasped. It had been the first time that Koenma had spoken since he had found the creature, and his tone was exceptionally harsh. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hiei's POV ~~~~~~~~~~~~
I had just gotten my hand to my katana when the buffoon himself came stumbling in.
"HERE YOU ARE URAMESHI! KEIKO HAS BEEN LOOKING EVERYWHERE FOR YOU! SHE MADE ME GO FIND YOU! JUST YOU WAIT, I AM GONNA BEAT YOUR FACE IN YOU BASTARD!!!!!"
Yuuske began to laugh hysterically, and to my great luck and amusement, it only served to enrage the baka even more.
"OH YOU THINK THAT'S FUNY DO YA? WELL YOU WON'T BE LAUGHING WHEN I RIP YER STINKIN' LUNGS OUT!!!!"
By now, Yuuske was on the floor with laughter, Kurama was struggling to make his sniggers into a polite cough, but I was with Yuuske in this case and joined in on his outright laughing fit!
Just then, as Kuwabara jumped Yuuske and attempted to carry out his measly threats, Kurama nudged me and brought me from my amusement.
"Nani was that for fox? This is extremely entertaining, and can only end with baka ningen in immense pain and I don't want to miss that."
"Look to the covered object that Koenma is sitting on, only with your ki."
I raised an eyebrow at him, wondering what the crazy fox was talking about, but he had gotten my curiosity as spiked as my hair, so I obliged.
~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kurama's POV ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I watched as Hiei turned to the box-like shape that Koenma was sitting on. Suddenly, his Jagan shot open and burned through his bandana,
"What the heck is in there kitsune?! Nothing but my influence has opened my Jagan before, that is until now."
I sighed. "I really couldn't say Hiei. It seems so familiar, like I've met it but can't grasp the memory."
"Could it have possibly been a past partner, when you were still a youko? It seems strong enough for your standards, and definitely has a similar attitude from what I can grasp."
" Indeed so, you could be right Hiei, but the only way to find out is to take off that cloth that covers its container."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Koenma's POV ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
After my more foolish Tanteis were done with their friendly greeting of beating each other black and blue(well, more like Yuuske beating Kuwabara black and blue, but that's not important) Hiei spoke up.
/ Finally, someone will ask about the cage,/ I thought to myself. I was getting stiff from sitting so long, and with the posture I had to keep in a teenager's form! It was driving me mad!
"What's in the box thing?" Hiei asked, attempting to repair his bandana.
/Wait, what is he doing that for? I appears to be burned in half, and his Jagan! It's open! He knows something strong is around./
"That's why I have called you here, Reikai Tantei. Inside this cage, is your next assignment. And here it is; Reikai Tantei, meet the youkai Reiku." [Okay, I know, cheesy name. But don't laugh, the best I could think of was this! It's supposed to mean something like "evil laughing spirit". DON'T LAUGH!!!^.^;;;]
"Reiku? I know I've heard that somewhere, but where?" Kurama had spoken so suddenly, that I paused in the middle I revealing Reiku.
/Could he possibly know this demon? Or maybe, he's heard of her, she is a long living legend./
"Well, get on with it you teeny-bopper toddler! We're not getting any younger, or any more patient!!"
Yuuske, of course./1, 2, 3./ THUNK!!! I grinned./Perfect timing, as usual Boton-chan!/
(Yuuske: @_@) "Now, as I was saying, meet Reiku. She is to be your next assignment. This legendary youkai\thief has been wreaking havoc on the Ningenkai. We've had a hard time catching her, since she can change forms. In fact, I believe she is doing so right now, making a desperate attempt to escape. Let me show you."
Slowly, I dragged the sheet off of the cage. They were in for a shock.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Reiku's POV ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
My youki was certainly getting a workout. I had never changed this fast before, or this often. I was going so fast in fact, that I couldn't see myself, I looked like a shapeless blob of glowing ki.
/I can't keep this up for much longer, I have to save some energy for when they let me out./ I decided to hold off on the transformations in a little while. Maybe, one of my last few forms could find a weak spot in the spell. But, before I could stop, the cover of my prison was removed, and the sudden light startled me into picking up the pace. My eyes stayed in place as they adjusted to this odd light, and ended up in a locked position on two shining emerald pools of intelligence and depth.
/That look seems familiar, yet the eyes don't. Hmm, interesting./
I noticed the form of all those in the room finally, and slowly arranged a form similar to theirs.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's POV ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kurama stared at the odd being in the cage. The eyes were the only distinguishable feature on the entire thing, and those eyes were amazing. To Hiei, who was just to the left, they were an intense shade of gold and powerful. To Yuuske, who was to Kurama's right, they were startlingly blue and attractive. To Kuwabara, who was still on the floor to Yuuske's right, they were deep, brown, and thoughtful. And to Koenma and Boton, who were to Reiku's left, they were a grayish, stormy and wrathful, boasting a look that could literally kill.
But to Kurama, who was in what might be the world's most tense staring contest, they were all of those colors. Not in crude blocks or blotches of color, but in an intricate, ornate, and smooth blend. He was enthralled. He had never seen such incredible eyes, or had he?
/Those eyes. Why do they nag at my brain so much? Where have I seen such perfect eyes before?/
Hiei noticed how Kurama stared, and how stiff he was, and wondered what was wrong with his friend.
"Something the matter, fox?" He asked with a definite tone of seriousness.
"Wha? Oh, nothing. I just realized how worried 'kassan must be."
/He's lying. Something is wrong./
~~~~~~~~~~ End of Chapter One ~~~~~~~~~~~ So, what do ya think? Well, I'd love to know so R&R real soon! I want to know if I should keep going, or just give up and go wallow in a pool of misery.( Don't worry, I won't really wallow in misery, feel free to say what you think!!^-^)
Kitsune's Girl
I don't own YYH, the credit for that goes to Japan. But, I do own Reiku!! ( Bye!!!
I don't own YYH, or any of its characters, but I do own Reiku! YYH belongs to Japan and all its geniuses. /denotes character thought/ [author's words or thoughts] *person on other side of the phone* "character speaking" (duh!) 'written note' ~~~ scene or POV change
Ch.1-"Puppy" Love
Hiei and Kurama walked in silence, each deep in thought. They hadn't spoken much since the latest case, in which they were forced to fight against the Koorime; Hiei hadn't liked it, yet hadn't not liked it. He was incredibly confused, ad Kurama understood. Hiei hadn't had to think of any of the Koorime, except for Yukina, for ages, and he was discontent. Just then, Yuuske came running up like the Hounds of Hell were at his heels.
"Konichiwa, Yuuske-kun, daijoubo?" Kurama asked in a worried tone. He had never seen his friend so panicked before, and it was a little disconcerting.
"Hai, I'm fine, but there's big trouble! Boton told me to get you and hurry back to my house, Mom's not gonna be out for much longer, and the others are waiting, c'mon!"
~~~~~~~~~~at Yuuske's house~~~~~~~~~~~~
Boton sat on her heels, oar in hand. She was ready to beat the thing to death if it did escape, but she REALLY hoped she didn't have to. Boton could feel its youki all the way across the room, and that demon was mad!! She looked at the strapping young teenage boy sitting on the cage; his eyes were closed and the blue pacifier that was constantly in his mouth was twitching slightly.
/Koenma-sama is so nervous, what could this thing be?/ she thought to herself.
Boton was about to ask if he was all right when the door flew open, and three of the Reikai Tantei practically flew into the room, sweating and gasping for breath. Hiei spoke first.
" We couldn't find the buffoon, though we looked everywhere. He had best not be with Yukina."
"Hiei, just forget about it, we're here on business and don't have time to worry about your sister so sit down!"
Boton gasped. It had been the first time that Koenma had spoken since he had found the creature, and his tone was exceptionally harsh. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hiei's POV ~~~~~~~~~~~~
I had just gotten my hand to my katana when the buffoon himself came stumbling in.
"HERE YOU ARE URAMESHI! KEIKO HAS BEEN LOOKING EVERYWHERE FOR YOU! SHE MADE ME GO FIND YOU! JUST YOU WAIT, I AM GONNA BEAT YOUR FACE IN YOU BASTARD!!!!!"
Yuuske began to laugh hysterically, and to my great luck and amusement, it only served to enrage the baka even more.
"OH YOU THINK THAT'S FUNY DO YA? WELL YOU WON'T BE LAUGHING WHEN I RIP YER STINKIN' LUNGS OUT!!!!"
By now, Yuuske was on the floor with laughter, Kurama was struggling to make his sniggers into a polite cough, but I was with Yuuske in this case and joined in on his outright laughing fit!
Just then, as Kuwabara jumped Yuuske and attempted to carry out his measly threats, Kurama nudged me and brought me from my amusement.
"Nani was that for fox? This is extremely entertaining, and can only end with baka ningen in immense pain and I don't want to miss that."
"Look to the covered object that Koenma is sitting on, only with your ki."
I raised an eyebrow at him, wondering what the crazy fox was talking about, but he had gotten my curiosity as spiked as my hair, so I obliged.
~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kurama's POV ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I watched as Hiei turned to the box-like shape that Koenma was sitting on. Suddenly, his Jagan shot open and burned through his bandana,
"What the heck is in there kitsune?! Nothing but my influence has opened my Jagan before, that is until now."
I sighed. "I really couldn't say Hiei. It seems so familiar, like I've met it but can't grasp the memory."
"Could it have possibly been a past partner, when you were still a youko? It seems strong enough for your standards, and definitely has a similar attitude from what I can grasp."
" Indeed so, you could be right Hiei, but the only way to find out is to take off that cloth that covers its container."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Koenma's POV ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
After my more foolish Tanteis were done with their friendly greeting of beating each other black and blue(well, more like Yuuske beating Kuwabara black and blue, but that's not important) Hiei spoke up.
/ Finally, someone will ask about the cage,/ I thought to myself. I was getting stiff from sitting so long, and with the posture I had to keep in a teenager's form! It was driving me mad!
"What's in the box thing?" Hiei asked, attempting to repair his bandana.
/Wait, what is he doing that for? I appears to be burned in half, and his Jagan! It's open! He knows something strong is around./
"That's why I have called you here, Reikai Tantei. Inside this cage, is your next assignment. And here it is; Reikai Tantei, meet the youkai Reiku." [Okay, I know, cheesy name. But don't laugh, the best I could think of was this! It's supposed to mean something like "evil laughing spirit". DON'T LAUGH!!!^.^;;;]
"Reiku? I know I've heard that somewhere, but where?" Kurama had spoken so suddenly, that I paused in the middle I revealing Reiku.
/Could he possibly know this demon? Or maybe, he's heard of her, she is a long living legend./
"Well, get on with it you teeny-bopper toddler! We're not getting any younger, or any more patient!!"
Yuuske, of course./1, 2, 3./ THUNK!!! I grinned./Perfect timing, as usual Boton-chan!/
(Yuuske: @_@) "Now, as I was saying, meet Reiku. She is to be your next assignment. This legendary youkai\thief has been wreaking havoc on the Ningenkai. We've had a hard time catching her, since she can change forms. In fact, I believe she is doing so right now, making a desperate attempt to escape. Let me show you."
Slowly, I dragged the sheet off of the cage. They were in for a shock.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Reiku's POV ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
My youki was certainly getting a workout. I had never changed this fast before, or this often. I was going so fast in fact, that I couldn't see myself, I looked like a shapeless blob of glowing ki.
/I can't keep this up for much longer, I have to save some energy for when they let me out./ I decided to hold off on the transformations in a little while. Maybe, one of my last few forms could find a weak spot in the spell. But, before I could stop, the cover of my prison was removed, and the sudden light startled me into picking up the pace. My eyes stayed in place as they adjusted to this odd light, and ended up in a locked position on two shining emerald pools of intelligence and depth.
/That look seems familiar, yet the eyes don't. Hmm, interesting./
I noticed the form of all those in the room finally, and slowly arranged a form similar to theirs.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Author's POV ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kurama stared at the odd being in the cage. The eyes were the only distinguishable feature on the entire thing, and those eyes were amazing. To Hiei, who was just to the left, they were an intense shade of gold and powerful. To Yuuske, who was to Kurama's right, they were startlingly blue and attractive. To Kuwabara, who was still on the floor to Yuuske's right, they were deep, brown, and thoughtful. And to Koenma and Boton, who were to Reiku's left, they were a grayish, stormy and wrathful, boasting a look that could literally kill.
But to Kurama, who was in what might be the world's most tense staring contest, they were all of those colors. Not in crude blocks or blotches of color, but in an intricate, ornate, and smooth blend. He was enthralled. He had never seen such incredible eyes, or had he?
/Those eyes. Why do they nag at my brain so much? Where have I seen such perfect eyes before?/
Hiei noticed how Kurama stared, and how stiff he was, and wondered what was wrong with his friend.
"Something the matter, fox?" He asked with a definite tone of seriousness.
"Wha? Oh, nothing. I just realized how worried 'kassan must be."
/He's lying. Something is wrong./
~~~~~~~~~~ End of Chapter One ~~~~~~~~~~~ So, what do ya think? Well, I'd love to know so R&R real soon! I want to know if I should keep going, or just give up and go wallow in a pool of misery.( Don't worry, I won't really wallow in misery, feel free to say what you think!!^-^)
Kitsune's Girl
I don't own YYH, the credit for that goes to Japan. But, I do own Reiku!! ( Bye!!!