The Fox of Nine and Wolf of Seven

Setsuna K. Hitsugya

Summary – Working on it

Since my original fic hasn't warranted any reviews I've decided to rewrite it. For those who've read the original fic there will be a lot of changes to this, (Practically the whole damn fic.) I will also try to deviate from focusing on my personal character but he will have some focus.

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto. Some ideas in this story belong to other writers that I fail to recall

"Speech"

'thoughts'

Demons/inner selves

Jutsus

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Chapter 1:

Namikaze Minato was not having a good day. The Kyuubi had started to attack Konoha a few days earlier, destroying several outlaying farmlands before the village could even react, and nothing the village's shinobi did could stop or even slowed the beast down. If that wasn't enough, the Yondaime's wife, Uzumaki Kushina, was currently in labor, about to give birth to their son. Normally, Minato would be ecstatic about this event, he had always wanted a son, even to the point of adopting an orphan refugee from Kumo. It would also be good for his adopted son to have someone to look after and play with. Yes, normally the Yondaime would be overjoyed about the birth of his son, but after reading several scrolls on the nine great demons and how to seal or defeat one, he wasn't feeling so great.

'The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few huh? Who the hell came up with that bullshit?!' Minato thought, glaring at the scroll he just finished reading, 'In order to save the village one should have to sacrifice the happiness of a fucking child!!'

Sighing to himself, the Yondaime made up his mind as he pulled out two scrolls. He quickly wrote on the two scrolls and sealed them with two separate blood seals. When he finished, Minato left the Hokage's and headed to the hospital to see the new addition to his family as well as make some difficult requests.

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Thirteen Years Later

BOOM!!!

A loud explosion rocked through Konoha, drawing everyone's attention to the Hokage Mountain.

Several citizens cried out in outrage, the faces of the Kage, their esteemed heroes and village leaders, had been defiled! Standing on top of the mountain was a blond-haired whisker-marked boy wearing a pair of green goggles on his forehead; dressed in a black t-shirt with an orange spiral on the front, and a pair of bright orange pants with an equally bright, equally orange jacket tied around his waist, and he was laughing hysterically.

"NARUTO!!!" shouted a pineapple-headed man, with a scar across the bridge of his nose.

The blond fell over before smiling widely and running off, quickly followed by several ANBU as well as a few chunin and jonin class ninja.

The scar-faced man sighed and shook his head, eliciting a chuckle from the dark azure-haired, crimson-eyed boy standing next to him.

"Don't worry Iruka-sensei," the boy said, "I'll catch him."

"Thank you Setsuna-kun," Iruka replied, rubbing his head in exasperation.

"No problem, its only natural for the older brother to look after the younger one," the crimson-eyed boy replied, running a hand through his messy blue hair, "I'll bring him back to the academy, okay?"

Iruka nodded as Setsuna shushined off.

An Hour Later

"Hee Hee! Looks like I lost them," Naruto laughed as he sat on a bench after briefly looking around the park.

"Think again otouto," came a voice from behind the blond.

"Aw! Man!" Naruto groaned, "how long did you give me?"

"45 minuets." Setsuna smirked," I stopped for some ramen after I left the tower. But you did lose the ANBU and other shinobi following you."

"So to the academy?" Naruto asked standing up, shoulders slumped.

"Yep, but I'll take you to Ichiraku's after you clean off the monument," Setsuna replied earning a large grin from the blond.

"Really!? Can we go training afterwards?" Naruto exclaimed excitedly.

"Maybe, depends on how long it takes you to clean the monument," Setsuna replied, smiling at the younger boy.

"Sweet! Thanks Nii-san!" Naruto exclaimed as he hugged the azure-haired youth.

"Okay, Okay, lets go," Setsuna chuckled, "I have to do a few more missions today."

"Alright let's go."

Several Hours Later

"Is that all Sandaime-sama?" Setsuna asked respectfully as he turned in his mission reports.

"Yes, thank you Setsuna-kun," the Third replied, smiling warmly as he handed the crimson-eyed youth his pay, "You must be anxious to pick up Naruto."

"Yes I promised to take him to Ichiraku's after he cleans off the monument," Setsuna smiled, "He wants to train afterwards."

"That sounds like him," Sarutobi chuckled.

"By the way, can you watch over him tomorrow?" Setsuna asked.

"Why?"

"I'm planning on heading out of the village to train," Setsuna explained.

"With IT?" the Third asked skeptically.

"A little," the azure-haired youth sighed, "Mostly I'm gonna practice a few jutsu that I would like to keep secret until the chunin exams."

"Very well, I'll take it you'll need a pass then," Setsuna nodded.

The Hokage smiled and handed the crimson-eyed teen the pass, "I will watch over him, you focus on your training," he said as the boy put the pass in his weapon pouch.

"Thank you, Oji-san," Setsuna bowed before he turned and left the reception room.

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Alright This is the first chapter of my rewritten story. Hopefully The response will be better than the last.

As for questions about Setsuna, he is a redesigned form of Shusuke; much closer to my own personality. He doesn't posses the Sharingan but he is a Jinchuriki but his back story is a little more understandable. Setsuna does have a Kekkei Genkai, called the Shukuchihou. There is also a doujutsu called the Glaspar eyes but it is a part of the Shukuchihou not a separate bloodline. I will give a better explanation in the next chapter or at the very least in the notes.