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Italic - either a high pitched shout or someone's thoughts or in the past
Although this is a story for my friends, I have changed the story of Naruto a little to my own will, such as Naruto being Hokage. But I will not explain these changes, so don't bother asking why I didn't.
The following is a story I made for my mates, but it's possible for all you to read as well. It based 20 years on, from the most recent Naruto Chapter, and focuses around our own created characters, plus some people from the show. So your not lost, here's a brief description of each Character.
Ukah Irakizu – A Mist Jounin, who wishes for nothing but to be a disciple of Orochimaru, and his now greatly expanded Sound Nin army. His best friend, Rain, is a member, and he constantly pests her to find a way for him to get in. He is a strong ninja, focusing mostly around Water techniques.
Kaguya Rain – A young nin stolen at the age of 4 by Orochimaru, and has been his disciple ever since. She has forgotten her previous life, but still remembers her brother Kaguya Apoc.
Kaguya Apoc – A Powerful Leaf Jounin, extremely cocky and arrogant. However, he has a much more sensitive side when it comes to the mention of his sister, whom he had thought died ages ago.
Uchiha Exar - He was the second strongest Uchiha of his time, next to Itachi, at only the age of 14, but he died by Itachi's hands defending his parents. After 100 years training in the depths of hell (time is slower in the afterlife then on earth) he was pulled from the netherworld, by a technique developed by Hunoo sage. He broke free of Sage's control, and now lives as a Leaf Jounin. He is extremely fast and focuses around lightning techniques
Honoo Sage – The evil tyrant of his time. Like the Orochimaru 20 years ago, he is one of the strongest Nins, and works solo to conquer and create his own empire. His reputation is well known. As his same suggests, he focuses mainly on fire techniques.
Uchiha Kirai – Born in the Uchiha clan, he was sent away to Cloud village during the Itachi attack, and so his life was spared. Although his mother and father lived as well, they both died later on, when Kirai was still a baby. Without any god-parents, Kirai was driven to grow and live by himself, sometimes high in the mountains. This caused sever lack of sunlight, and a hate for mankind. Later recruited by Konoha, he is now ANBU squad leader for assassinations and torture. He is also a Jounin, but because of his Psychotic lust for killing, lying and death, he was prevented from having a team.
Shadow Brothers
Two S-class missing-nin. Twin brothers, putting their expertise to better themselves, none others. They form their paths from the Village hidden in the mists. At the age of 5 they killed their mother and father. The brothers graduated from the Ninja Academy at the Age of 8, and took to a small clan of assassins. Months after they joined into the clan, they slaughtered each member, and took leadership of it (Kemuri Clan). Many hired the assassins of this clan, even the two brothers. And thus they began their rise into the society of days. They also specialise in torture. They are Omaki and Karasu Metaru.
Kakuza- Anbu specialist and friend of Uchiha Kirai, Kakuza is a very talented Shinobi, leader of the 1st Original ANBU Leaf Missing-nin hunter force.
Shadow sketcher – A famed Leaf Jounin, expert in the arts of the "Ink Ninja" Profession. His paintings and drawings are known throughout the city, and he has the mischievous habit of making them come to life. Thus, he has been dubbed the "Shadow Sketcher"
Pyro – A cocky Leaf Jounin, he knows many Pyrokinetic techniques that have made him well known around his Jounin buddies, and given the alias "Pyro". He has a large Afro, and is proud of it. He's also the only black in the village, and he holds the legendary "B" Staff.
Ero-senin Jr. – the guy who thinks with his cock
Hyuuga Demetris – Part of the Branch family, Hyuuga Demetris is a powerfully cocky Leaf Jounin.
Akimichi Shihouin – One of the largest Akimichi's in Konoha. '….
Maiko – One of the most talented and strongest female Jounin's in Konoha. She is the protégé of Haruno Sakura, and has learnt the arts of Medical Ninjas.
Kaguya Hanari – An extremely powerful Mist Jounin, he is feared by all who know him as the most genius and talented of his age.
Hyuuga Temai – A rather strong Leaf Jounin of the head family.
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It all started that one evening. That one night, where it all began, and would eventually end. The sun struggled to fight of the enveloping darkness, but it took over, covering the city of Konoha in a valley of night. Doors were locked, windows closed, curtains drawn, all the villagers prepared for a good nights rest, in the safety of their homes. All but one.
Ukah Irakizu lay awake in his small run-down shack. He twitched nervously as the sun faded and night drew, for he knew his time to prove himself would be soon. The brown fringe from his hair was now soaked in his sweat, and he shakily wiped his brow. He had begged and groaned for the last month, for a chance to prove himself worthy, but he didn't expect this. He remembered how it had all happened…
Irakizu stumbled slowly through the thick grass, as he made his way into the forest. This was the first time Rain had asked to speak to him on behalf of Orochimaru. It was usually always Irakizu who asked her, countless times, to tell Orochimaru about "the great Irakizu" and to why Orochimaru hadn't asked for him to be a sound Nin yet. That was all Irakizu had wanted for the past 2 years. Now today, he might soon get his wish. Through the thick fog he managed to make out Rain, with her purple hair shining brightly in the grey atmosphere, and her big sparkling blue eyes as-always completely full of glee. She gave a smile as she saw her old friend, and the two warmly embraced before Irakizu started things of.
"So does he want me to join?" He abruptly yelled, the anticipation clear in his tone
"Not so loud," Rain replied "Good things come to those who wait." She winked as she pulled out a long envelope from her shoulder bag, handing it to him. "Now, I must say, I've been getting in deep shit from all the times I've been mentioning you to him, I've always been trying my best for you, bringing you up in meetings, missions, the likes, and he's clearly been getting annoyed," she frowned "But recently, I managed a breakthrough, and that's it." She pointed at the envelope
"What is it?" Irakizu said hesitantly
"It's a job. He says you pull this of, and you can guarantee yourself a position in the Sound Nin army. You might even be in the same squadron as me!" Irakizu jumped on top of Rain instantly, full of joy, and rolled around on the floor with her laughing as she tried to shove him off "Oi! Irakizu!"
"Hehe," he gave a massive grin and hugged her again "Thank you so much Rain, I knew you could pull it of!" the smile wouldn't leave his face, but Rain glared seriously at him for a moment.
"Open the envelope Ukah Irakizu" she said without tone. Irakizu blinked for a moment, stared at the envelope, and then slowly pulled it out. On it was a small text, which carefully he read through. It was a meeting, with a possible client, and Irakizu scanned for the name. As his eyes lay onto two words, his heart froze. He began to become extremely pale, and Rain held his hand assuringly.
"Its ok," she said "it's ok..."
He smacked his head to forget the memory. He had to stop thinking about the past, focus at the moment in hand. He looked at his watch, the hands met at the 12, signalling midnight. He stood up slowly, his guest had arrived. The main door creaked open, and a figure entered the room.
"Welcome," Irakizu began, "Honoo Sage."
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The darkly cloaked figure standing in the doorway lifted its head, and smirked. Sage could see the fear written all over this mans face. He liked the thought that even his presence could inspire fear and dominance over all. He lifted back his hood, to reveal his long spiky white hair, as it glowed brightly in the dense mist that surrounded the shack. The man in front of him twitched slightly and hesitantly started to speak.
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"I'd like to thank you for err, coming, Mr. Sage," Irakizu began, whilst taking the envelope out of his rucksack "these are troubled times as you know, it must have been hard for you to get here." Honoo Sage's eyes fixed onto the envelope, and Irakizu flinched at the sight of them. They were powerful eyes, eyes that demanded respect from all. They seemed to linger over him for what seemed like ages, before he finally spoke,
"I believe you'll find I can manoeuvre through my old town quite easily, thank you," His eyes sharpened "but as for you, were you followed?" Irakizu gulped. He hadn't really been thinking about the possibility of being found out. He was more worried about Honoo Sage then he was of a Leaf Ninja catching him.
"Nn... No." He stated "So, let's get down to it… I understand from this that you are interested in hiring some of Orochimaru's disciples?" His voice sounded raspy, the air in the room had become a lot thicker suddenly.
"You are correct; I will need 4 3 man teams of your highest ranking members under my command by next week."
"And are you prepared to pay the fee?"
"If I must "Sage sighed, as he through out a large coin purse to the floor in front of Irakizu, whom gave a crooked smile
"Thank you," he managed to spurt out, the heat in the room seemed to have risen greatly "Orochimaru greatly appreciates you're…"
"Be Quite" Sage suddenly snapped, and Irakizu was taken by surprise
"What..?" Irakizu could barely cough the words out, the air had become incredibly thick in the shack, and the heat was beginning to become unbearable. Sage tilted his head, he had realised they were being watched. Irakizu suddenly collapsed. He couldn't breathe, he was burning like a cauldron and the room seemed to start to melt. His eyes burned from the heat, he started to roll around in a pool of fire, his skin melting to bone. Sage tutted
"Genjutsu…" he murmured, and slowly raised his hand. Chakra visibly flowed into his palm, and he released it instantly in a bright flash "Ki!" Suddenly the melting cauldron surrounding Irakizu disappeared, and he rolled to his feet gasping for air.
Two people suddenly appeared on the other side of the room. Irakizu slowly came to his senses, and noticed them as Leaf Jounin instantly. There was a tall middle aged woman, fair black hair and black eyes, plus a middle height boy, who was surprisingly young, and had spiky purple hair plus a large Bone sticking out of the left of his hand. The woman had a seal in place, and was obviously the one who had caused the Genjutsu.
"So you finally decide to show yourself." Sage chuckled, and he turned to them comfortably.
"Baka!" The purple haired boy yelled "don't think you can be so relaxed when dealing with me!" He took a step forward, when the woman hissed
"Don't be so hasty Apoc; we don't even know who these people are"
"Who gives a shit," Apoc boomed "anybody who trespasses on leaf soil when it's my watch is going to pay for it!" He slammed his fist into his palm, and walked forward confidently. "So who do we have here," he chuckled "two washed up missing nins needing a place to crash ey? Or maybe just a bunch of shitheads looking for a fight!" he grinned, but Sage just stared lazily into his eyes. Irakizu was nervous; he wasn't sure what to do, should he fight or not? Slowly he stood, and grasped the situation. They had been found out, but his mission was already complete, he could simply vanish using Mizu Bunshin No jutsu any time he desired. He slowly looked up at sage, who tutted,
"Oh right, you want to fight? Sorry, but I don't feel like dancing…" Apoc's eyes flared
"You want to see a dance! Let's dance!" Apoc declared while a bone slowly slid out of his palm. "Dance of the Camellia!" he roared, charging head first at sage and the bewildered Irakizu.
Apoc had let his anger get ahead of him, as he dashed across the room towards sage. The floorboard creaked loudly as he pounded along it, and Irakizu desperately looked to Sage, who just stood there smirking. Within a flash, Apoc had appeared in front of Sage, swinging his clenched fist in an arc towards his neck. The bone sticking out of his palm made contact with his skin, slicing through Sage's tissue like clay. Blood was splattered all over Irakizu's face, and he backed of to the other side of the room, recoiling in horror. Apoc smirked, panting hard, and eased back. The woman behind him grimaced,
"You didn't have to kill him that hard, you've made a mess!" Apoc turned to smile at her, when something caught his eye. The newly formed hole that was gashing out of Sages neck started to bubble, and then without warning, caught on fire. Suddenly, the entire body burst into an inferno of blue and yellow flames, the explosion sending Apoc crashing backwards through the air, going back-first into the splinted wood of the shack. A figure suddenly appeared before him, and Apoc groggily looked up. Honoo Sage glared into him, showing Apoc the clear murderous intent within his eyes. At an insane speed, Sage started performing seals, and before Apoc could even realise what was happening, he was covered in a mass of burning flame. He screamed out in excruciating pain, but he was kept firmly in place by Sage's hand, which was now tightly gripped around his neck. The woman gritted her teeth, Apoc can't defend himself like that, and she dashed towards them across the shack. Irakizu knew this was his chance, and quickly performed two seals.
"Suiton, Suishouha!" He yelled. A dense fog quickly descended into the shack, and the woman stood back startled, unable to see. Suddenly, an incredible amount of water formed from the fog, wrapping around Irakizu's body. He then sent the water thrashing downwards, colliding into the Woman. Caught by surprise, she was flung instantly into the back wall, smashed through it and sent down the street behind, a river of water following after her. Sage noticed the attack, and let go of Apoc's neck, which was now severely toasted. Apoc fell to the floor unconscious, his body viciously burnt.
"I suppose we should take our leave," Sage sighed, "a shame really, I was interested in this one." He kicked the fragile body of Apoc, who grimaced on the floor, and looked over to Irakizu, "12 men, ready and waiting. I will come to them when it is time." And with that, he disappeared in a thick poof of smoke. It took a second for Irakizu to realise he was alone in the shack, apart from the injured Jounin. He quickly performed a seal, and with another poof of smoke, he was gone too.
End of Chapter Notes
Well, here's the Epilogue of the story. It gets a lot better so don't be taken of it just by this chapter. Im quite pleased with it, but well if you're not then that's ok.
Id appreciate as many reviews and constructive criticisms as possible, thank you.
