Hello everybody! Wow three fanfictions in a row, Three days in a row! I'm on a roll!! :) Anyway, I'm trying my hand at an actual story instead of a drabble. I know it kinda sucks and is kinda short, I'm better at describing emotions then actual scenery or action, but I swear that it will get better and longer. Honest! Cross my heart hope to die! And if I can finish the next chapter tonight I'll post it! Just remember the more reviews I get the more motivated I get! But above all else, ENJOY!!!

DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN TOKYO MEW MEW OR MEW MEW POWER!!! (I would love to own Tokyo Mew Mew, but I would die of shame if I owned Mew Mew Power)


The large, frightening beast lashed out at the five colorful girls below it. Mint yelped in fear as the attack narrowly missed her wings. Ichigo looked up at the smirking Kisshu. He gave a small chuckle, "Well, darn, I almost had some roast bird for dinner tonight!"

"RIBBON, PUDDING RING INFERNO!"

As the giant glob of pudding came flying at Kisshu, he gave a sigh of disinterest and simply side stepped the attack, "Didn't your mama ever tell you: no dessert before dinner?"

The beast set out another deadly attack at the Mew Mews. The large beam of light bolted toward Lettuce, and Ichigo's leader instincts kicked in. She ran toward the light calculating every step to make certain she made it in time. Five seconds. Her mind thought desperately. She closed her eyes and made a leap, filling the gap between Lettuce and the attack.

Kisshu's eyes widened and his heart stopped. If a bulldozer were to have hit him, he wouldn't have noticed. Ichigo, NO! His heart and his brain screamed in unison.

As the dust began to clear, Lettuce came into view. Her entire body trembled, she look like she was about to fall over. Her mouth was open, but her mind was too overwhelmed to give it the order to scream. The bright green eyes were double their normal size and frozen in horror looking at something the dust cloud had yet to reveal.

The dust cloud cleared away, displaying a gruesome sight. Ichigo's dress was tattered and torn, and her hair was in complete disarray. Her skin was almost unrecognizable from under the many channels of blood spouting from her body. But what scared Kisshu and the others the most: She did not appear to be breathing or making any kind of movement.

Being the first to regain control of his body, Kisshu screamed in horror, "ICHIGO!"

He flew down to her and gently, as if dealing with the most fragile glass, pick-up her wrist and checked her pulse. Beneath his thumb, as faint as a hummingbird's wing, he could feel the slightest pulse. He then cradled her with one arm and created a small ball of green light in his hand. He flung the little ball at the Chimera Animal, instantly dissolving it.

Then he turned and looked at the still frozen Mew Mews, "Hurry! She's still alive, but she needs a doctor NOW!"

Not waiting for a reply, Kisshu teleported to the nearest hospital and rushed into the E.R. After safely delivering her to a doctor, Kisshu was left in the waiting room, with the newly arrived mews, to wallow in his worry and guilt.

An hour past with no word of Ichigo. Two. Three. Four. It was driving Kisshu mad, he just couldn't stay still so he opted to pace around the waiting room. Just after the clock tolled for the fifth hour, a single nurse walked out into the waiting room and right up to Kisshu.

"Excuse me, but are you Kisshu?"


O.O Whats Gonna happen to Ichigo?!?!

Kisshu: Your writing the story, you tell us!

Me: I'll never talk...