NCIS: A Fighter

So hey...this is just a one off story that i'm writing, not sure if i should carry on the story a bit more and add a few more chapters, what do you think?, anyway reviews are appreciated! and enjoy the fairly short story!

She was cornered and she was slowly running out of ammo, the rest of her team was back at NCIS, working out a way to find her, she took out the empty clip searched her coat pocket, finding a clip she smiled and placed the clip into her weapon, making it it click into place she put her head around the corner, and was met by a hail of machine gun bullets, she quickly brought her head back around the corner, and began thinking.

She could search ahead of her for any sort of door or any sign of an exit, but to her dismay found nothing but piles of boxes upon boxes, she aimed her weapon around the corner and hit not one but two people in the head they toppled of the top the boxes they were standing on, she wiped a few beads of sweat that were quickly forming on her forehead, she stared at her hand, her vison blurring slightly, and since non of the heaters in this god forsaken place was on, it was a sure sign she was nervous. Once again she popped her head around the corner and shot her weapon 3 more times, she quickly brought her head around the corner, she took out the clip and looked inside it and sighed "One more bullet left" She said to herself, she needed a way out and quickly but it was too late other members of the Mossad closed in on her postion, she sighed murmering a hebrew prayer to herself she rushed around the corner and fire her gun, there were mutiple automatic weapons going off and a single body hit the ground, the persons headset flew off, her head and there was a male voice shouting through it "Ziva! if you can hear this we are on our way!, repeat we are on are way! try to hold out as long as yo..." A male Mossad Agent stepped on the headset stopping the male voice completly, the male mossad agent tapped his headset and began talking "Sir...she's down...we got her" He nodded and signalled for the other members to follow him out of the warehouse into a brown car and speeding off down the street. And there she lay, dead to the world but alive in her own.