Disclaimer: I don't own Twilight:)
A couple facts you should know:
In this story, there is no such thing as imprinting, don't know why I made it like that I just did:p There will also be very rare moments where Edward or any of the other Cullens appear. If they do they most likely won't play a huge role in the story. Another important thing, if your a huge fan of Emily, Sam, Nessie, or Bella...you might not like some of the bashing:p I will admit, Bella isn't so bad, but a lot of the stories I've read have kind of made me dislike her. Anyways, now that I'm done rambling;) I hope you love the story! If there are any mistakes please let me know because I usually miss them. Please review! I love it when I get good feedback! With love, Ella3
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His eyes; like melted chocolate and caramel swirled together, creating a dangerous mix of temptation, luring you in just tempting you to take a lick, just one lick, but you can't just have one lick because once you take one lick you want another and another until you just loose all self-control and take the whole thing for what it's worth; yummy and amazingly delicious . His eyes; filled with so much joy and laughter that once you look into them you feel like your drowning in a whirlpool of pure love causing you to unknowingly sink deeper into his invincible trap, one he is unaware existences. His eyes; like a window to his soul, so beautiful yet dangerously captivating that once shut it leaves you yearning helplessly for more. His eyes; so powerful it can lighten a tense atmosphere just by smiling brightly with so much life that you can't help but stare in awe at its breathtaking sight. I would know. I've seen him lure girls in without even realizing the power of his enchanting eyes, not knowing how beautifully damaging they can be. They can leave a girl twirling in a river of love and happiness; they can also leave a girl broken with nothing but the feeling of emptiness within them. I've seen it all, Hell I've even had to pick up the pieces a couple times. Not fun may I add, but that's what best friends are for. There are those rare moments though when a girl will rip him apart leaving him broken and empty inside (cough-Bella-cough) and all you can do is watch helplessly as the light within him dims immensely, but he always comes back, somehow some way and every time he does his eyes shine brighter than they ever have before making him that much more powerful. In my heart I know the most dangerous thing about him is his eyes. They lure you in by their beauty and then trap you, making you feel things a best friend should not be feeling. The one rule that I have made for myself for my hearts protection was to never fall in love with a wolf. Been there, done that, not fun. Well not only did I fall in love with a wolf; I fell in love with my Alpha.
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Soooooo, whatcha think? :)