Hey, so anyone who knows me (through Too Good to be True) I would like to state, that this is only a two part drabble (2 related chapters) that I am only doing cause the idea has been haunting me. Normally for the Record I only work on one fanfic at a time (just easier on my part) this is a special case.
Not that anything I just said matters-what I am about to say does;
READ THIS part of my insanely long AN
this story is a character mystery-the Flock is at school (a school I am basing off of my middle school- even though they are in 10th grade) but who is/are the flock? and what role do the other characters play. will be further explained at the end-just don't get mad at me cause its seems like the Flock aren't in here.
Disclaimer-don't own Maximum Ride, sorry JP does.
I looked up from my book as three new students walked into our class. It was the first day of the 10th grade at Kloon Secondary School, and they where coming in an hour and a half late.
The three of them carried them selves strongly, heads held high but they kept glancing around the class, like they expected a ghost to just jump out at them. Not that I doubt that there are dangers lurking in the dark. I glanced over at my brother, Matt silently asking his opinion; he just shrugged, typical.
Ms. Marquard walked over to them at the door, and in her hush-hush miss pris tone started to talked to them.
I strained my ears to hear what was being said. I'm not that social, hence why I was in a corner reading not over gossiping with Tara and the gang.
"Good you made it." Ms. Marquard was saying.
"Yeah, sorry I'm late- younger sibs wanted help getting settled in and my parents needed to be on call." The girl was saying.
Ms. Marquard nodded "That's fine Abby, we haven't started anything yet."
"Thanks." The girl, Abby was gorgeous, she wore a pesaint skirt, and a floral blouse. Her hair was white blond, and long cascading down her back.
"Is there anything I can do to help you get settled, before I call meeting?" Ms. Marquard asked the kids.
"Uh…" One of the boys with a dark gloom hanging around him looked uncertainly at Ms. Marquard. "We aren't with Abby, I'm just dropping Jake Wooser off."
Ms. Marquard gave a small, barely noticeable embarrassed smile. "Sorry, David of course. Abby you can go find a seat." Ms. Marquard dismissed Abby while leading David and the other boy, Jake too her desk.
I knew what was happening there, see Jake is blind and technically my neighbor but we've been friends since we were really little-more like sibling, kind of like Matt and I (who where technically only sibling through the foster care-in the eyes of the government at least.) They were going to discuss his special needs in class-would he need brail text books? Or would he be using audio? What would he use for note, and writing projects? Just the basic stuff that the school board required the teachers to do. Same thing happened last year (our first year here at Kloon).
Max's POV…
And then I got a message from Angel.
Max, something is wrong-we are in trouble.
I jumped up, gave Fang the signal, and ran over to grab Iggy. Startling Ms. Marquard and many of the other kids. I wasn't going to sit around and wait to find out what was wrong.
So above I said something about Mystery character thing here's what you need to do-
1) Review saying who you think is who-Max might be the Narrator or Abby, Fang might be... oh and you also need to find Iggy (hint he's pretty obvious).
2) Check back here when ever I post the second part (should be like next Tuesday-ish) and say if you think you got it right in a review (like from the first reveiw)-this should be pretty obvious. and I will answer you and tell you all just plain out straight forward in a review reply.
I know this idea is kind of lame, and the AN is longer than the text, but its been haunting me so I just had to get it off my back.
-Thanks A.S Lee
PS. If you read this when its complete you can still participate-just you get the answer sooner.
PPS. hey I'd love critique reviews too but by no means do you have to go out of you way to do that... just thought I'd let you know.
PPPS. Step two will be easiest for you if you put this on alert- for no reason other than you know when I post the second part with the answers.
-A