Our school has a Creative Writing Club, and this is the story being posted by the Girls team in our club. As President, I would like to say, FANTABULOUS START!!! Can't wait for more and hope the girls can keep it up! Reviews help give this team Bonus points! :D So in other words, PLEASE REVIEW!

(The Boys Teams story can be founded as a FAVORITE STORY on the Girls Fanfiction Profile Page)

Enjoy!

Chapter 0ne - My Adventure

Once upon a time there was a mermaid named Ariel, now this story is not like most stories. Ariel was just about to turn sixteen. Usually when a young mermaid turns sixteen it is thier time to go above the sea. Ariel was very excited, she had heard many stories about the sea above from her sisters. Ariel's father was very worried for his daughter since he knew how much his young daughter loved the outside world. Now this was Ariel's first time to see the surface.

Ariel woke up one morning and got ready for her advernture. She swam down stairs and her sisters and father were waiting for her. Her father warned Ariel about the surface, he told her to not have any contact with the humans, because they were very dangerous. Ariel's father was very protective of his young daughter ever since his beloved wife had died. Ariel never really knew her mother since she died when Ariel was a young girl. Just when Ariel was about to leave the sea castle, she saw her grandmother. Ariel loves her grandmother; especially her stories. When Ariel's grandmother was about her age, she was in love with a human. Ariel's grandmother was saved by the human, but the human did not live. Ariel felt very close to her grandmother and was very interested in human life.

"Grandmother!" Ariel yelled out, "What are you doing here? I thought you said you weren't coming!"

"Do you really think I'd miss my favorite granddaughters birthday! Now I have a very special gift for you."

Ariels Grandmother pulled out a box. Ariel opened the box and found a beautiful ring.

"Oh Grandmother! I love it!" Ariel said.

"It was your mothers you know? I have another gift for you... see that sea horse?"

"Oh no you didn't... Oh my gosh, I love it! Thank you so much!" Ariel responded.

"Now Ariel this is a very special day for you, and I know how much you love the surface, but you still have to be careful. Not all humans are safe." Gandmother said.

"I know, I know. I might not even see one today."

"Come on Ariel!" Her sisters yelled out, "it's time!"

"Okay are you ready Ariel?" Jasmin asked.

"Yes I am sister!"

Ariel began to swim faster, then suddenly began swimming higher, and had finally reached the top. "Wow! What is this place? I have never seen so much color before!" Ariel said.

Ariel had seen fireworks for the first time.

"What is that?" Ariel asked.

"It's a ship..." Jasmin declared.

Ariel started to swim faster to take a closer look.

"Ariel stop! Come back!" Jasmin yelled.

When Ariel got closer, she saw a human for the first time.

"He is beautiful." Ariel murmured to herself.

She had felt something that she had never felt before, which was called, Love.

By Asiya.