okay so I decided to write another story I'm going to try to update Winds of desire I'm stuck so yeah this I hope you like this one
so it starts from Loren goes to the hospital and find out that she has pancreatic cancer she couldn't believe it she needed some space she run out the hospital and Nora tried to stop her but it was too late she was gone she tried to call her but she wouldn't answer
Nora: where could have she gone to
Loren went to her spot and sat by the tree she was crying
Loren: why me why does this have to happen to me
Nora was now home hoping Loren would be there but she wasn't
Nora: Lo please answer
Loren was still couldn't believe it
Loren: please let it all be a nightmare
she stared to draw a something on the ground with a stick she found
Eddie was at his penthouse not knowing what to do with all the Chloë drama he didn't know what to do so he decided to go up to his spot he needed o clear his mind and to get away he got his keys and left when he got there and went up the hill when he got to the top and saw a girl sitting by the tree and it look that she was drawing something he got closer
Eddie: um
Loren got scared she turn around
Loren: oh I'm sorry
Eddie: it's okay
Eddie could tell that she was hurting he wanted to ask her whats wrong but he wanted to mind his own business
Loren: well I be going
Loren stared to walk away
Eddie: wait why don't you stay
Loren: um are sure
Eddie: I could use some company only if you want to stay
Loren: I have nothing else to do oh and by the way I'm Loren
Eddie thoughts: Loren she's so beautiful
Eddie: hi Loren I'm Eddie
Loren: hi Eddie
Eddie and Loren sat down on the ground and they forgot their problems time went past
Eddie: I notice that you where crying whats wrong
Loren: oh I just found out something
Eddie: can I ask what it is
Loren: I'm not sure if I'm ready to talk about it
Eddie: it's okay
Loren: well I think it's getting pretty late and I think my mom is wondering where I am at so it was nice meeting you
Eddie: it was nice meeting you
Loren got up and she felt light headed she was about to fall when Eddie catch her
Eddie: oh are you okay
Loren: yeah I just felt light-headed but I'm fine now
Loren got up again and start to walk down Eddie got up and fallow her he wanted to make sure she was alright and Loren forgot she came here in a cab and didn't have enough money Eddie notice didn't have anything she could go home
Eddie: Loren i could give you a ride
Loren: it's okay Eddie I can take a cab
Eddie: I want to make sure you get there safe and sound
Lorenz; thank you Eddie but
Eddie: please just let me take you
Loren: okay fine
Eddie open the door for Loren and she got in and Eddie went and got in and they drove away and Loren gave him her addresses and Eddie but it on the GPS they got there and Loren got off
Loren: thank you for the ride
Eddie: you're welcome well I guess this is goodbye
Loren: I guess well goodnight
Loren close the door and made her way to the house door and Eddie watch her walk in and she close the door
Eddie: Loren Loren what did you do to me why didn't I ask her for her phone number stupid I hope I get to see her again
Eddie drove away and went to his penthouse
Loren got in and saw her mom sitting on the table drinking Tea Nora saw Loren and got up and gave her a hug
Nora: I was worried where were you
Loren: mom I'm okay I need to think
Nora: i'm just glad your home and safe we still need to talk
Loren: can we talk tomorrow I'm tired
Nora: sure when ever you ready
Loren gave her mom a hug and went to her room and lay down