So problem number 1...

Grammar and Spelling!

It makes a fanfiction sound so unprofessional and immature when everything's grammatically incorrect and every other word is spelled wrong.

Which one of these sounds better?

Hey! Nice to meet you, I'm Krystal Fyre but you can call me Krys. I'm writing this as a guide of all the things you shouldn't do when writing a Maximum Ride fanfiction. And yes, the later chapters will be MR themed!

Or this one...

hey! Nice to meet you im krystal fyre but you can call me Krys. I'm writing this as a giude of all the things you souldnt do when writing a maximum ride fanfic. And yeah, the later chapters would be mr themed

The first one sounds better! Duh!

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