Darth Fenrir
Part 1
"Has the kid recovered from the injuries?" Jedi master Qui-Gon Jinn, asking the medical droid he has brought in his star ship, It was a pretty basic ship, used for smuggling most of the time, a captains quarter's a medical room, a living room in the center along with cargo hold and other basic essentials. "I'm afraid it's too soon to tell, he can recover from the injuries but I'm not sure how long he will remain conscious." Said the medic of the small vessel, Qui-Gon looked down on the kid, the kid was no older than three years at most, and has miraculously survived an explosion, from a distance that should have killed the kid. The kid now only had what looked to be small burns after a bacta treatment, and is now just lying on a medical bed to awake. It's been two days and Qui-Gon is getting a little worried.
"Damn it if only we informed the republic sooner," The captain of the Vessel said. The captain was probably no older than twenty, just a boy, the man 's name was Cid, he is a Gaian, a species that hail from the planet Gaia, a planet recently discovered in the outer rim, the outer most republic planet now. Gaian's look human but are made of slightly different chromosomes allowing them to be stronger than the average human, they also age slower than humans so even if Cid looked 20 he was probably 40 years old. There planet is one of the biggest habitable planets in the outer rim that is made up of rock, instead of gas or ice. Their gravitational pull is probably what made their species so strong through natural selection.
"It's not your fault my friend we came as soon as possible." Qui-Gon said walking out of the medical bay with Cid so the medic can focus. What happened was that, Cid and his crew was out getting into the smuggling business when they eventually came across a Hutt that tried to pay them to smuggle some slaves from Gaia. Cid being a patriot to his home denied the Hutt his services and it wasn't till later that he found out the Hutt sent some mercenary's to kidnap some Kids from Gaia. Normally a trip like that from the Hutt's private yacht is pretty long and would normally take a month. So by the time Cid found out he tried to get some help from the republic, by the time the republic sent in Jedi master Qui-Gon Jinn to assist. The mercenaries had already brought in an entire shipment to Rufus's yacht. So a little bit of stealth piloting and sneaking on the yacht they manage to find were the slaves were held, there was about a dozen of them the oldest looking ten, the youngest 2. When Qui-Gon and Cid tried to bring the kids back to safety aboard the smuggling ship, Rufus's guard's confronted them. So some blaster fire here and there and a thermal detonator from a careless guard, there was a hole in the ship, Qui-Gon and Cid managed to get behind something to stop them from being sucked out, while most of the guards have gone into space.
Only Four kids survived as they tried to make their way back to the ship but when one guard caught Cid by surprise and held Cid hostage preventing The Jedi from doing anything but then Qui-Gon felt something threw the force, and saw one of the slave boy's held a blaster that one of the guard's dropped, as a matter of fact it was the kid in the med bay. Before anyone could react the kid shot the guard dead, but held the trigger to long as one of the blaster shots reflected of the walls and hit the blaster, making the kid drop the gun. That wouldn't have been a problem if it wasn't a very old blaster that has been heavily modified. So being that sort of blaster it exploded when it landed, and that's how the kid ended in the med bay.
The other three survivors where all older than the kid who bravely saved the Captain's life, one boy and two girls both looking to be four, Qui-Gon can feel the force in the kids but they weren't strong enough to be Jedi, the kid in the med bay, even with his life so at risk Qui-Gon could feel the kid was force sensitive. He was going to have to take this kid to Coruscant for training that is if the kid wanted to. So that's how Qui-Gon was in this ship with a crew of Gaian smugglers and four kids. Qui-Gon made his way to the cargo hold to meditate but one of the kids, the boy, followed him.
"What is it young one?" The kid had spiky black hair and blue eyes, "Will Cloud be alright?" The boy asked, Qui-Gon guessed that was the blonde boy's name, "He is fine he will need some rest, do you know the boy?" The kid seemed to brighten up, "Well that's good to here, thanks' mister," "Qui-Gon Jinn" "Mister Jinn, and yes Cloud's my younger brother. I'm Zack by the way."
Qui-Gon smiled at the polite boy but noticed he didn't give a last name, "Do you have a last name child," The kid looked down a bit, "Cloud and I are orphans that's how those ugly guys caught the lot of us, we are all orphans." Said Zack. Qui-Gon was about to give the kid his regards until the Medic appeared, "Master Jedi the Child is awake."
Qui-Gon and Zack made their way to the medical bay, to see the blonde little spiky haired boy sitting up drinking water from a straw, but stopped once his eyes saw Zack. Zack ran up to the bed and hugged his brother and then smacked the back of his head, "Owe, what was that for."
"For using a blaster you idiot, and for getting hurt, I got worried." Qui-Gon smiled at the brothers, "Hello there Young one, my name is Qui-Gon Jin and I," "Your Master Qui-Gon Jinn a Jedi" Everyone looked surprised, "How did you know that Cloud," Zack said looking at his brother, "One of those vision thingies you have every now and then." That seems to have gotten Qui-Gon's attention, and when Cloud nodded his head in confirmation Qui-Gon spoke up, "So you have vision's that can predict the future?" Cloud nodded his head albeit hesitantly, people back home never took cloud seriously, or tried to abuse his visions. "I can, but I can't control them, and I can't tell how far ahead they are."
"And what is it did you see Child," Qui-Gon smiled, the little boy hesitated, Qui-Gon motioned him to say it, while nodding. "I saw you and a boy, fighting a red man, both you and the boy were using blue glow swords, while the man used a double bladed red glow sword. The Kid made whoosh sounds as he pretended to hold a sword, as he explained. It would have been a cute sight, but Qui-Gon pail, 'had this child seriously had a vision of a Sith lord, and a Sith lord fighting me?' "Could this child have seen one of the Darth lords that are hiding, that the Jedi have been looking for a long time?'
"Cloud, what if I told you, that those vision's mean that your special, what if I told you that there is a place where special children like you learn to use their ability to help others, what if I told you I used to be one of those people. Would you come with me to learn?" Cloud looked surprised, looked at his brother then asked, "Can Zack come along?" Qui-Gon looked a Zack and took a moment to search for the force in the kid, what he found was that there was enough potential to become a Jedi in both of the young boys.
"Of course, he is special like you, just maybe he doesn't have a lot of visions, I can bring both of you with me to train, but I'm warning you it will be hard, but in the end you become a part of one big family." At the Sound of that the two boys looked at each other and smiled, "Sure when are we going." Cloud said.
"You're just going to have to wait till we drop of the girls and get to the space port where we will head to Coruscant to get you two started. The two boys got so excited that Cloud got up from the bed and ran along with Zack to do whatever little brothers do. Qui-Gon smiled, as Cid came into the med bay, "I heard your taking them to the Jedi enclave then? You do know their Gaian right, Zack is probably eight galactic years old while Cloud is six, I thought Jedi only train kids no older than four Galactic years."
"Well maybe since they are Gaian I can convince the council to train them, that and one of the visions Cloud told me," Cid was confused, "Do you mean that blonde kid," Qui-Gon nodded, he didn't mention that the pilot was blonde as well, the pilot had a sailor mouth when he gets pissed.
The rest of the flight was uneventful, with nothing but the kids playing hide and seek, the best seeker was Zack, when time came to depart, and Cloud thanked Cid along with Zack, as the young Pilot couldn't help but smile at the two young brothers. The Gaian space port wasn't big but it was grand, it was new and built as a memorial of the last great civil war, and how the planet united to make contact beyond the starts, it was the light house that let the republic Find the planet, and now there are so many visitors to be tourist, and or try to make business deals with the planets raw resources. Cloud was enjoying seeing the ships and new people and species he never seen.
"Qui-Gon what's that." The blonde kid pointed to a green man with tentacles on his head, "That man, is a Twi'lek Cloud one of the many species of aliens you will see in the galaxy." "What about those," Cloud pointed to a bug face alien, "That young one is a Rodian they are common in spaceports, and smuggling is mainly were you would see them." Zack on the other hand was having a blast watching people who arrive on the planet for the first time, because a lot of them stubble and trip due to the gravity being so much denser than they expected. They continued till they reach Qui-Gon's ship which wasn't that big, the basic republic ship, as they piled in the boy's fell asleep while Qui-Gon set the ship on an auto pilot course. After making sure the kids were asleep he went to the back of the ship, Meditated on how to convince the council to let the two kids become younglings, yes he will need this meditation.
I like star wars, but I don't know everything I would like some help about information, and anything I may have messed u on, also I just typed this out to get an idea out my head, yes Cloud will be part of the dark side, but not really like Sidious Vader or Tyrannous, he will forge his own way, second, Zack will be there for Cloud most of the time, I added the whole age slower thing because I think it would be better to make Cloud a different species similar but different to human. Something other than Mandalorian. There will be some OC pairings, maybe and a lot of Oc eneimies, if you want I can probably use some help with some bad guys or allies later on, message me if you got an idea, give me a name too if you like.