This tells the story a 13 years old boy who was shipwrecked on Isla Sorna and became friends with a raptor.

The main character is half-Puertorican and half-white.

He has white skin despite his Puertorican blood.

He's about 5ft 5 inches tall with slight muscle.

His eyes are a dark shade of purple which really surprised most people.

His hair was about neck length and thick and was a deep black color.

His only weapons are two spear guns and two staffs he made by breaking the paddle off of an oar. Can he survive with that and his ability to talk to animals?

Dialog: Damned compy

Thoughts: Damn it to hell

Mind speaking: Damned human

Disclaimer: I don't own Jurassic park, or any of its copy righted material.


Chapter one: I really hate my luck/ first day on Isla Sorna.

I've had rotten luck my entire life.

I've been stuck in bad orphanages in various American cities and been part of some rough crowds.

I had a couple families take me in but they were the kind of people to adopt just to get the state benefits that came with it.

I would stick with them for a few weeks and then run away till the cops managed to find me and put me into another children's home.

I went through this cycle till I turned 12 and the state decided enough was enough and sent me to live in costa Rica with a fisherman named Manny.

He was a tough parent but I eventually bonded with him.

So of course my bad luck decided to rear its ugly head after a year of living with him.

During a 3 day fishing trip we got too close to Isla Sorna of las cinco muertes.

The second night brought a freak storm that blew up out of nowhere.

Our ship was thrown onto the rock spikes dotting the shoreline destroying its hull.

Manny was thrown overboard and I didn't need to look to see what happened to him because the sickening shluck sound of his body falling onto a rock spike told me everything.

I always used to think dad was really smart because of his habit of packing the boat full of shipwrecked supplies whenever we left for a voyage.

Those supplies would come in handy now.

I grabbed a duffle bag and put my spare clothes inside it along with the med kits.

I took Dad's back pack and emptied it before refilling it with sweet's, fruit, and wrapped meat along with three cans of spam, four cans of Vienna sausages, and a few cans of chunk pineapple in heavy syrup.

I also grabbed two cans of pineapple juice and a couple bottles of water.

Dad had been planning to scuba dive during our trip so he had packed two collapsible spear guns with 20 spears in a small case.

I grabbed them both and started looking for other weapons.

Instead I discovered some bug off and mosquito netting.

I packed it into another bag along with the spear's cases.

I was about to exit the small cabin when two wooden oars on the wall caught my eye.

I grabbed both and snapped the oar's top off it leaving me with two 5foot long staff's.

I used some rope in a bundle to tie the staffs across my back and put the rest into the netting bag.

I had to make a choice so I chose to go ashore and find a place to sleep away the night because the boat was in danger of being washed out to sea.

I slung the three bags over my shoulders and leaped into the shallow water as wind and rain blasted into me.

I reached the sandy beach and saw a 20-30foot high tree with a nice looking nook near the top and sprinted to it but skidded to a sandy stop ten feet away when a chitter of a beast that had died out 65 million years ago came from my right.

I looked and saw the Chiwawa of the dinosaurs: the Compysaurus

I pulled one of the staffs out and quickly broke its neck with a brutal swing before it could call its buddies.

Nice try ya little green bastard I said putting the staff back onto my back and climbing to the nook.

I sprayed bug off onto myself to keep tree bugs from crawling on me and covered the nook with the net before letting my exhaustion take me into sleep.

I woke to the sun shining brightly so I guessed it was about noon.

I emptied my bladder over the edge of the tree and opened the food bag and pulled the aluminum foil wrapped meat out.

I pulled the foil off to discover the damn bugs had slipped past Dad's crappy folding job and infested the meat.

The rest of the non-canned food was infested as well so that left me with only a few cans and a couple bottles of water.

Shit I yelled and instead ate one of tossing the spoiled the Vienna cans before food into the water.

I resprayed myself with bug off and pulled one of the Staffs off my back.

I reached into the ammo case for the spear guns and pulled a 12 inch spear out along with the bundle of rope.

I quickly and tightly knotted the spear onto the staff's end to form a makeshift 6 foot lance.

I repeated it with the second staff and loaded the spear gun before putting the lances across my back again.

I then tucked two of the spears into my belt loops in a way that they were secure but wouldn't be too difficult to pull out to reload the gun.

I climbed down the tree after packing everything back into the bag and walked into the jungle.

I walked deeper scanning for signs of recent animal activity while using my lance to scratch a trail into the trees.

I must have been walking for about 3 hours when I heard a Dino screeching in pain from a clearing a few feet from me.

I ran into the clearing to spot a black raptor with red back stripes with its right leg caught in a bear trap.

The downed raptor was being attacked by a group of 8 little green bastards (Aka compys).

I charged the group with a flurry of stabs from the lance and killed them.

I saw the bone in the right leg was broken cleanly in two and I knelt next to the raptor's head.

I told it to stay still after I locked eyes with the raptor.

Your legs broken I spoke into its mind I need to set it in a splint to allow it to heal.

I'll try the female spoke as I freed her leg.

I used a flat branch splint the leg and used bandages to wrap the splint after pouring a bit of alcohol into the puncture area to disinfect it.

I did the same with the green bastards bite wounds and put a couple Band-Aids across them as they were not that deep.

I picked up the compys and gave her them to eat once I saw how thin she looked.

She scarfed down 4 of them before speaking again.

Who are you and why are you here? She asked cautiously.

My name is Carlos I answered.

My boat was smashed onto the rocks during last night's storm and my dad was killed when he fell onto a rocky spike.

I was hunting when I heard you so I came to help out.

What's your name? I asked curiously as she ate a fifth compy.

It's Akane she answered as she swallowed the compy.

Akane I hope you realize that until your leg heals you can't defend yourself or gather food so you need me.

Why are you mentioning that?

I said that because I'm exhausted after walking through the jungle for three hours so I need to rest a bit.

If a carnivorous dinosaur is nearby bite me hard enough to wake me up but not puncture my skin too much.

I'll wake you if something comes near us she said curling up to rest lightly as well since her instincts would wake her up if something was near.

I curled up next to her and said a quiet good night before passing out.

I didn't think humans could be this trusting or nice because of my cruel first meeting with them Akane thought.

You showed me that some humans could be kind and trusting; maybe in time my pack will meet someone like you to show them that not all humans are evil. Akane thought before joining Carlos in sleep.


That's the end of chapter 1

What happened to Akane and her Pack to cause such fear and hate towards humans?

Will Carlos make it off the island eventually?

Only I know and you guys will by reading.

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Till the next chapter

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