Hi everyone! Well I'll just get to the point in this. I had a few reviews saying things like my character was too perfect. I don't hate anyone for critizising. In fact, I enjoy people trying to help me out. Well just to say, I wasn't trying to make her perfect. So I decided to make this story so that you guys can see that she isn't. Again, I don't hate anyone for critizising! I love it! I just want to correct some things so I made this one. It's called the same like the one I'm trying to correct. The sequel is still the same sequel. Oh, and some things you need to know before reading this story.
First of all, the characters in a few chapters are thirteen. Then it changes to fifthteen and sixteen. Her story will sound somewhat like Tsunade's but I guess it's for the best. The romance is still between my Oc and Itachi. Well I guess that's everything. Short but to the point. Now on with the corrected story!
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Travel To The Mist Village!
Tsunade sat at her desk, looking over the mission request sent in just this morning. To her it really made no sense in why this request was even sent. But either way, she needed to help out all she can. Shizune, her assistant, came in with TonTon in hands. Tsunade looked up at her. Shizune was awfully cheerful today, she noticed. Tsunade wondered why.
"Shizune, why don't you go on ahead and call Squad 7 for me?" Tsunade said. Shizune nodded quickly and left to get Naruto, Kakashi, Sakura, and Sasuke. A few minutes later, all four ninja were in front of her.
"You called?" Kakashi said. Tsunade placed the papers down and stood to face them.
"I have a mission for all of you." Tsunade stated. She waited since she knew Naruto would be doing his Happy Dance right about then. He was. He stopped later on and Tsunade sat down.
"So where to?" Sakura asked. Tsunade grabbed the papers again. She looked over them one more time, hoping that she was sending out the right team.
"To the Mist Village." She responded. Naruto was again began dancing and cheering.
"Alright! We're gonna see Inari again!" Naruto yelled. He stopped again and they all looked at Tsunade.
"What for?" Kakashi asked.
"You are being sent out to protect someone." Tsunade responded. They all looked confused. Another mission to protect someone and to the same place?
"And who would we be protecting?" Sakura eagerly asked.
"The Mizukage's most precious posession. And you MUST not fail this mission." Tsunade said. Naruto smiled brightly. He was finally being sent out on an important mission in a long time.
"Alright." Kakashi said simply. Tsunade handed him the papers for his mission and they all soon left to get packed. Tsunade sighed once they were gone. She had never imagined that her youngest pupil was still out there. She hoped for the best.
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"You must understand everything I am teaching you, Lady Koyuki." My unimaginably boring sensei reminded me once again. I sighed loudly at him.
"I get it, I get it. Sheesh!" I said. He laughed softly yet again. He began his lessons once again.
My name is Koyuki Monteshyro of the Mist Village. My boring sensei is none other than my Anbu guard, Yuka Naasuing. He's also one of my best friends. Well anyways, I stood there waiting for the session to finally be over. This had gone on long enough. It seemed weird to me though. This was never really necessary in the past. The Mizukage had requested it though. Yuka was teaching me self defense and helping me in my tai jutsu. I was never any good at it anyhow.
Two hours later, my training was done. I headed back to my peaceful Clan District that was now empty. Just passing through those ghost like roads made me remember all the wonderful things I used to do with my family. But that was long ago. There was no way they would come back.
I made it to my home and entered it slowly. It was dark. I walked in and locked the door behind me. I was accustomed to the darkness now. Not even bothering to turn on the lights, I made my way upstairs in to my room. I changed in to my nighht gown and crawled in to bed. I slept that night with another nightmare from my past. The same one I got since then.
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This was a short chapter but it'll get better. Hope you enjoyed it so far! Please review and be free to critizise! Ja ne!