Hey, this is my first real fanfic I guess, so both positive and negative reviews will be appreciated.
My characters are gonna be real powerful, I mean, not to a point where no one can beat them,
but they are beyond S Rank(Pein or Tobi could be matched to their level, not that I even know how strong
those two are, I'm just guessing).
I ask that before you read on, you read my profile so you'll get a little insight as to why I don't say some
things in the story.
Disclaimer: I do not in any way own Naruto or related... things
Jager, a 16 year old 'man' as he considered himself, looked upward as his older brother Sopon was annointed the SentouKage of his home village, the Hidden Star.
He joined in with the waves of applause that had just begun, knowing, that in a month's time, he would be made the ResuKage, putting him in the position of second in command of this village.
"Congratulations, Nii-san." Jager said calmy as he looked at Sopon. "Or should I say... SentouKage-sama?" Sopon raised an eyebrow. "No need to be so formal Jager," Sopon laughed. "Pff... If you say so... Sopon," Jager said reluctantly. Jager's personality was, as many would say, lacking in emotion. "So are ya hungry Jager? I'm starving!" Sopon's personality was kind of unstable, switching around from time to time. "Not really... I had a mission I needed to do, so I'll see you later," Jager said as he poofed out of the room in a cloud of smoke.
'I wonder what kind of leader he'll make,' Jager thought. His mission shouldn't really be a problem, a simple kill, a weak ninja. "Ahh, Jager-sama! Off on another mission?" Asked the village's gate guard. "Indeed... I'll be back by nightfall." "Understood."
Walking throught the forest, Jager saw the early afternoon sun shining brightly. The forest was at peace. 'The peace will soon break, and a red sun will set.' Thought Jager as he came into sight of the rouge ninja's camp. Hiding himself in his approach, Jager noticed that the ninja was cooking rabit, oblivious to Jager's presence. 'Perfect,' Jager thought as he drew his shuriken, 'this will be even easier than I thought.'
Jager tossed the shuriken, it spun through the air at breakneck speeds. The ninja seemed to notice it, however, and deflected it quickly with his kunai. Most of his body was in a black cloak, so his appearance was obscured. He tossed the kunai at Jager, soon to find however, that his efforts were in vain. He watched in shock as it appeared the kunai simply bounced off of Jager's skin. He quickly tossed the three shuriken he had grabbed with his left hand, only to have the same result. When he blinked, the the strange shinobi was no longer in sight. "Pathetic," Jager said, as the ninja realized that Jager was behind him, and had just jabbed a kunai into his neck. "What a worthless mission... Why assign ME of all people to kill such a weak shinobi?"
Jager returned to the village, finding that very little time had passed since he left. "Ah! Finished already, Jager-sama? You've only been gone about an hour." "Yes, I've succeeded, as I knew I would." Jager walked into his brother's office, "Jager? Back already from your mission? Not bad!" "That's right, Sopon, it was a mission success." "Excellent!" Sopon continued, "Well, I..." Much to Jager's annoyance, "...have another mission for you. It's a B Rank." "Why give me such a lower class mission? Are you just being greedy, or was I requested? I mean, after all, it would be much smarted to use a cheaper Jounin, Anbu, or even Chuunin, than I." "You hit it on the bell, I'm just being greedy," laughed Sopon. "Anyway, here's the mission card," he said as he handed the folded card to Jager.
B Rank Mission
Goal: Eliminate the bandit threat that has been terrorizing the nearby farming villages.
Location: The bandit's camp is believed to be located just to the north of the IIkagen Village.
Price:
1250 ryo For Chuunin
1500 ryo For Anbu
1700 ryo For Jounin
2000 ryo For Special Select Shinobi
Jager eyed Sopon annoyed, "Are you sure you can't just get a Jounin to do it? It's only 300 ryo less. I have some... 'things' to catch up on." "Hmm... Well, normally I'd stick to my original decision, but... since I was just made the SentouKage today, I'll let it go and get a Jounin for the mission," sighed Sopon. Jager, while keeping a cool look on his face, grinned inwardly at his victory at manipulating his brother. Jager suddenly put on an even more serious look, "Sopon... I've been hearing some... things from friends around the village..." "And?" "Have you heard... of an organization called, Akatsuki?"
So, what did you think? Please review and know that I won't make another chapter until I have at least one review!
Thanks for reading!