hey they removed this story because of punctuation and spelling problems... well after my suspension i fixed it and wrote more. here you go.

DISCLAIMER: Idon't own Inuyasha or anyone from the show... i do own characters that will come next chapter though

Chapter 1

"Inuyasha I sense a jewel shard coming closer." Inuyasha's ears perked up upon hearing this. The group stopped and looked over their surroundings. Kilala soon began to growl and her fur stood out. In the distance, trees could be seen falling and landing with a loud thud. Miroku, Sango, Kagome, Shippo, and Inuyasha all looked north to wear forest proudly stood. There was a moment of silence, and time seemed to slow as the thuds of the trees stopped. In an instant what was left of the trees came crashing down and a huge beast broke free of its foliage.

A loud growl escaped its throat as it looked upon the group of travelers before him. The beast revealed a dark smile, its mouth filled with rows of sharp jagged fangs. Its eyes glowed a fiery red and its claws dripped of fresh blood. Its body was covered in fur, except for a few bald spots where previous enemies had ripped at the flesh. The creature stood up from its crouching position, and stood on its hind legs. "It's a bear youkai" Miroku announced as Inuyasha unsheathed the Tetsaiga. Kilala had already transformed and Sango was ready with her weapon.

Inuyasha pushed Kagome back with his forearm. Kagome ran to her bag and retrieved her bow and arrows. She readied an arrow. The youkai snarled and she shot. The arrow pierced the youkai's right arm, running right through it. The arm detached, and fell to the ground. The youkai screamed in pain, and Inuyasha took the advantage and charged. Inuyasha jumped up and came down on the youkai, but the attack had little effect as he hit the rock toned head. Regaining his footing on the ground, Inuyasha charged again. As he jumped up once more, the decapitated arm reached out, and grabbed his foot. Inuyasha was pulled down and slammed into the ground. As he hit the forest floor the Tetsaiga slipped from his hands, sliding yards away.

Kilala sped toward the youkai with Sango on her back. Sango launched her attack with her weapon. It flung into the youkai's large skull, leaving a dent but not breaking the skin. The weapon refused to come out afterward, so Sango was now weaponless; seeing as she didn't think to bring the sword she keeps at her side. Kilala fell back over to Miroku. Inuyasha continued his attempt to escape the clawed hand that had grasped around his whole body. He was loosing air with each attempt to wiggle away because the claws squeezed tighter with his struggling. Finally the pressure was too much and Inuyasha could no longer breathe. His eyes began to bleed a deep red color, and his claws extended.

The others hadn't noticed the transformation yet as Kagome shot another arrow. It pierced the creatures' stomach, but nothing more. The creature simply brushed it away. "Why didn't the arrow work" Sango gasped. The arrow fell, broken, to the ground.

Suddenly, the others heard a loud snarl come from Inuyasha. They all looked over just in time to see the youkai's removed arm be torn apart by an angry, transformed Inuyasha. Inuyasha's knuckles cracked as he smirked up at the youkai. They both glared and exchanged growls before Inuyasha charged. Driven by animalistic fighting instincts Inuyasha extended his claws to strike. Being so large the youkai moved slow compared to Inuyasha's speeds and Inuyasha hit the youkai dead on, slicing through its gut. The youkai let a loud screech of pain escape its throat as it fell back down on all three paws. Inuyasha panted heavily, still glaring at the dying creature. The youkai suffered as Inuyasha continued to strike it until fell completely to the ground and blacked out into death.

Inuyasha still wasn't satisfied. A blood lust ran through his veins as his eyes wandered over to his friends. He poised, ready for another attack, this time towards the group. "Inuyasha" Kagome quietly squeaked. Inuyasha turned his attention to the oddly dressed girl. He could smell the fear emanating from her. Kagome took a step back when an evil smirk appeared upon his face. He pushed off the back of his foot, speeding toward Kagome. Readying to strike her, he outstretched a claw, but before he reached her a blur hit him knocking him to the side. Everyone stared as Inuyasha slid into a nearby tree. In his place in front of a frightened Kagome, stood a kitsune.

Unlike Shippo, this kitsune had large fox ears on top of her head. Shippo's tail was more of a ball of fur, while this kitsune had a long slender fuzzy tail. Her fur was a snow white and her ears were tipped with a fire red.

Inuyasha picked himself up. He glared at what hit him, and his ears flattened. He launched an attack at the kitsune. The kitsune stood in her spot as Inuyasha came closer. He swiped his clawed hand at her, but she only had to sidestep him. Bringing back her arm, she hit the back of Inuyasha's neck with her elbow. Inuyasha's red eyes faded back to their normal coloration as he fell into unconsciousness.

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