Me: I need an editor desperately! Please help me out! This is my first fanfic ever.
Chapter one: New arrivals
As Ulrich, Odd, Yumi, and Jeremie sat on a bench close to the park and a bus pulls up to the gate. "A little late for a bus to come." Odd said "Well they're dropping people off." says Ulrich. The bus pulls away and the only people who came off was a white haired kid that looked about Yumi's age. And a kid with brown hair that was Odd's age. They both had a depressed look on their faces and they trotted through the gate. "Looks like they are trying not to be noticed." Jeremie said.
They where not noticed by anyone except for the Lyoko gang and three other people. Sissi was watching the kid ad said to Nicolas and Herve "You two let me be so I can work my magic and get them to join the cooler kids." Sissi said as she walked off to greet him.
She said in her annoying voice" Hello there. Welcome to Kadic Jr. High, I'm Sissi Delmas, the principal's daughter" The brown-haired kind left instantly in the other direction. She noticed the white-haired boy was still looking down and she was slightly annoyed but kept her cool. "What's your name?" she says getting him to look up "My name is Jin Tetra" He raised his eyebrow as he looked at Sissi "Boy, you must of fallen out of the ugly tree and hit every branch on the way down because you are wearing some of the ugliest rags I have ever seen."
At the bench Odd chuckled he could always tell when someone insulted Sissi because her face always turned a bright red.
"Why how dare you! Nobody ever insults me!" Sissi walks away, pissed off. Odd walked over to Jin. "Nice insult I haven't thought of that one yet. My name is Odd I over heard you. Your name is Jin right?" Jin shook his head yes" Thanks for the complement, and yes that is my name "Why don't you come with me, I want you to meet my friends, and what happened to the kid you where with?" Odd asked "Not sure probably went to the principal's office to get his dorm room key." Said Jin as Odd introduced him to the gang the other was getting his dorm room key.
At the principal's office
"Well Mr.…." "Draconais ", "Yes Mr. Draconais, your papers are in order here is your dorm room key. You will be sharing a room with a Jeremie Belpois." The kid walked out of the office "I hate being called Mr. Draconais, I'd rather be called my first name: Patrick.
As Patrick walks out of the building he sees the Lyoko gang sitting on the bench. Patrick walks over and asks "Do you know where I can find a Jeremie Belpios?" The blond smiled I'm him, can I help you?" Yes I believe I'll be sharing a dorm room with you." The gang looked at each other with surprise.
Me: I'm very sorry I can't really write a long chapter. I'll try to write a longer one next time.