I saw...

xox

LDrago: Well, what can I say, but it´s from N´s point of view. I don´t think it´s good, so I need to ask you to tell me what you liked and tell me what I could do better. Oh, and I don´t own anything of this besides my Idea.


Oh and I will be taking requests for poems and Pokemon Oneshots. i will take Poem request til I´m up to my 100th poem.


xox

I saw agirl

She was, despite having a friend with her alone

Alone with her Pokemon

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I saw the girl, again

She was alone

Alone with her Pokemon

I know her name, but I don´t care enough to call her by it

xox

I saw the girl, again, againShe was alone

Alone with her PokemonI know her name

I call her by it

I told her

I know, she´s hurt

xox

I saw White

She was with her friends

I felt alone

She´s called White, but she is nothing like that

She is grey

we battled

I fought and lost

xox


LDrago:So, this was it. Please tell me if you liked it or if it was crap.

You can give Points. 10´s the best and 1 the worst.

Bye and review