Hi everyone who is reading this, this is my very first fanfiction, so please go easy on me. I always love advice for my story and writing tips! Constructive criticism is welcome! On to the story! Disclaimer: I don't own POJ or HoO :( Oh well!

Chapter 1

Percy's P.O.V.

I rushed past a bush and some more trees. Wondering what I'm doing? Well, first, let me ask a question. Have you ever been so angry that you just want to punch everything you see? Or people you see? Well, that's how I feel right now. My life was ruined and it was because of some stupid son of Apollo. I just hate to relive the memory, but I just feel like I have too. So I will.

Flashback

It was a stormy day at Camp Half-Blood. Never a good sign. I was just enjoying a peaceful stroll in the forest when some guy jumped in front of me. He was stout, but buff with curly blonde hair and icy blue eyes."Um, who are you?" I asked, warily. He shot me a glare. "How do you NOT know me? Everyone knows AND loves me." He sneered. I sighed. Great, he had a big ego. I hate people with big egos.

"Well, I don't know who you are, so please answer my question." He snorted. "I'm the one and only James Smith, the son of Apollo." He finished proudly. I scrunched my brow. "Hi, I'm Percy Jackson, Hero of Olympus." I held out my hand. James just looked at it in disgust, andI quickly withdrew my hand, embarrassed."I know YOU, everyone's talking about you. How you saved Olympus and blah blah blah." He waved his hand dismissively. I burned with anger. That little brat! I thought in my head."Oh, okay." I said, trying to calm down. I think he could tell that I was getting mad, because he grinned at me, before talking again.

"Well, I think that I should be the Hero of Olympus, since I'm so awesome." James grinned as he complimented himself. "Yeah, sure, okay "Hero of Olympus." I told him, making air quotes. He glared at me. " I hate you Percy, everything about you sucks. Your fighting skills suck, your name sucks, your fashion sucks, and whoever your mother is... well, she sucks too." He snarled. "What? You don't even KNOW my mother! Don't even bring her into this!" I growled softly. James grinned triumphantly. " I seemed to have found your soft spot." He said so softly, I didn't think that I was supposed to hear that.

Without hesitation, he began throwing insults about my mother. How she's stupid, and how he can't even believe how Poseidon could have even looked at her. I finally snapped. I uncapped Riptide and held it against his throat. "Don't you dare insult my mother, Smith!" I pushed Riptide harder against his throat. "Understand?' He nodded like a bobble head. I lowered Riptide and was about to step away when he blurted out, "You do know that all of those things I said are true though, right?" My eyes narrowed and Riptide was against his throat again. "If you say that one more time, I promise I will send you to Hades the hard way, you pathetic bastard!" I shouted. "I'm no bastard." James defended. I made a small cut in his neck. It was nigger than I thought it would be, and it automatically started to bled.

"P-Percy, what on Earth are you doing?" I heard someone ask. I froze and turned to see Chiron and the rest of the camp looking at me in disbelief. "Chiron, its not-" I started, but James interrupted me. "I was merely pointing out that some of his skills have become a bit rusty and he threatens me for saying that! I was just trying to help. He was trying to kill me!" James. "What? No! Bu-" I tried again, but this time Chiron interrupted me. "Percy, did you make that cut in James' neck?" Chiron questioned me. I looked at the ground. "Yes." "If I wasn't here to stop you, would he have been hurt further?" "Yes, maybe... well, he insulted me!" I shouted, growing more and more angry. "Percy, I didn't believe James, but when you confirmed it... I now believe it." Chiron looked disappointed. "But he insulted me!" I argued. "No, I only commented on his fighting." James told Chiron. "I'm very disappointed. I can't have you stay here with your... anger issues. You will have to leave." Chiron said with regret, but no hesitation.

Someone yelled, "Yeah get him outta here! He'll kill us all!" Another one yelled, We aren't safe with him here!" I looked at them, with tears in my eyes. Annabeth walked up to me and gave me a firm slap. "You bastard Percy! I can't believe you did that! Why would you try and KILL him? We are over!" she shouted. Then she turned and kissed James right on the mouth. "But Annabeth," I cried. "Percy, please, just leave." Chiron commanded. I turned and walked up to James. "Why'd you do this?" I whispered to him. "Because you don't deserve your fame, I do." And with that he shoved me towards the camp. "Get packing." he advised coldly.

I turned and sprinted to camp. When I got there, I ran to get packed. They all hate me. I slung the backpack over my shoulder and took off, running out of camp and into the dense forest.I had lost all my friends. I had nothing else to lose. I stopped to catch my breath. I decided to talk with my father. I ran to the lake, and prayed to my dad. Father, you still love me right? You saw everything he said, right? I asked him. "Percy, all I saw was you threatening him and him explaining everything. It all made sense. You do take your fighting skills very seriously, but Percy, he was just trying to point out that you were a bit rusty. I'm sorry, but you can't stay here on Olympus or at my palace. All the gods saw what happened. Zeus contacted Camp Jupiter, and of course they believed him. You're not welcomed there either Percy. Goodbye. My father said and then stopped talking. I stood up and stumbled a bit. I headed back into the woods, and hating life, I shot through the forest again.

End of Flashback

Suddenly a dark figure appeared right in front of me and I smacked into it.I flew back onto the ground. "Ouch." I moaned. "Oh my! I'm sorry Perseus." The figure lent out a helping hand. Grabbing onto it, I hauled myself up, and looked at it suspiciously. "And who are you?" I cocked my head. The figure laughed. "I'm Chaos, creator of the universe." Chaos threw back his hood to reveal a man. An old man. Not like a really old man, more like a guy in his mid sixties. He had black hair that was graying. He had black eyes and when you looked into them, you feel like you're drowning in the black depths.

"Oh, um, hi Lord Chaos. May I ask you why you're here?" I asked, trying to be as polite as I could. "I am here to offer you a place in my army. Not any place, you are to be the commander of my army. Also called the second most powerful person in the universe. Just below me of course." Chaos smiled at me. I looked at him, still processing what he said. "So, I get cool powers and stuff?" I asked eagerly. Chaos looked amused and nodded. "Yeah!" I exclaimed. "Are you sure about this Perseus? Once you agree, you can't back out." He warned.

"Yes, I'm sure. Its not like I have anywhere to go anymore." I finished bitterly. Chaos looked sympathetic. "Yes, you have been through tough times. With everyone hating you and such." Chaos stretched his shoulder one at a time. "Okay, now just relax and close your eyes." Chaos commanded. I closed my eyes and relaxed myself. Chaos muttered some words and suddenly I felt stronger, faster, and braver. I felt like nothing was as strong as me. "Okay Perseus, you can open your eyes now." I heard Chaos say. I opened my eyes and looked at my body. It was obvious that I had grown stronger and more fit. "You are now immortal, Commander." Chaos told me. "Now, let us go to the planet our armies are at." He suggested and I nodded. He grabbed me by my shoulder and we zapped to his planet.

I hope that was enjoyable and I am hoping to get another chapter done tomorrow! Bye bye! :)