Runaway Experiments Idea Story

This story came to me when I was reading The Darkest Powers Series. I was planning on making one of these type of stories when I was listening to Don't Say Lazy from K-On. Weird right? Before I read the series. So tell me what you think about it. Good? Bad? No way don't write it? Change something about it? I would like your options before I write this. I will delete this on April 30th. This you guys think it's good then I'll write it. I'm also looking for a beta-reader who can correct my spelling and grammar and I'll give credit. Also for if one of you wants to become my beta-reader don't be afraid to replace some words and add some descriptive parts to it. But let me know and also read it before I post the next chapter or etc. So this is my idea:


Werewolf:Jack Atlus

Mythical Number: #3547

Attribute: Humanoid

Behavioral : Deadly and somewhat friendly

Elf: Carly Nagisa

Mythical Number: #1009

Attribute: Humanoid

Behavioral : Friendly and Dangerous

Witch: Aki Izayoi

Mythical Number: #3575

Attribute:Humanoid

Attribute:Sorcery and Medicinal

Behavioral :Friendly and Dangerous

Sorceror: Yusei Fudo

Mythical Number: #3078

Attribute:Humanoid

Attribute: Sorcery and Medicinal

Behavioral :Friendly and Dangerous

Fairies: Ruka and Rua (life size!)

Mythical Number: #3725

Behavioral : Friendly and Dangerous

Common Type: Fairies and Nymphs

Harpy: Crow

Mythical Number: #1453

Attribute: Flying

Attribute: Humanoid

Behavioral: Deadly


Story Name: Runaway Experiments

Characters: Jack Atlus, Carly Nagisa, Aki Izayoi, Yusei Fudo, Ruka, Rua and Crow Hogan.

Scenarios: A labortory is the location, romance is the theme, searching for ideal experiments is part of the story.

Random: Darkness, experiments, exterminate

First Line: This wasn't where they wanted to be.

Setting: Present. In a dark cold cell for each ideal experiments that had gone wrong.

Plot: Ideal Experiments that had gone wrong. Unable to control their powers like the rest of the experiments, The Black Bio Organization now wanting to exterminate 7 teens. As the government place them in the room together, they knew what was going on and decided to control their own fates and escape. Now on the run for their own lives, they now are labeled as Dangerous Runaway Experiments that will kill anyone who will get in their way. Along the way they have to face many hardships and romance.


Is it good? Review and tell me!