I'm the last.I'm the last thunderclan was looking at the ruins of her camp, usually it was noise with warriors talking , elders grumbling about how the warriors acted like queens these days and kits playing about. Never again she thought there is no grieving to be done because "the past is the past" Bravestar , her father had tolled that to her moons ago when her mother...died. Maybe there are other cats that survived... NO the other warriors are not cowards like me! The clans had not been able to fight off the dark forest again and had all been killed they were gone for now but they would be nuzzled her dads cold face "bye Bravestar all never forget you after that she ran never to see her camp again
ok verry verry short chap. but thats because this was not the first chap. it was a...prologue also i need at least 2-3 review also NO FLAMERS
but creative criticism is ok this is my first story REVIEW IF U WANT MORE!