A/N: Well… This is the revised version of the first Will you marry me. As I have said, My Pc crashed cries and all my files were deleted. I just didn't know that the hard drive was safe and it landed on my new PC! Now, I made it a lil better 'cause my grammar stinks. (Even now, my grammar still stinks but only a lil) Well, sorry for this who waited for my fic so long! (Well, I only have 2 admirers from my Will you marry me un-revised) Well here goes Chapie 1!

Chapter 1: The fight

At Luca high (Recess)

"STOP IT!" Yuna shouted at Tidus.

"Just ignore him! He's just being paranoid," said Rikku while glaring at the two guys.

"Yeah, Yuna" Lulu added.

Yuna grunted, very annoyed.

"OUCH!" Shouted Rikku "STOP IT YOU… YOU VERY BIG PIG!" Shouted Rikku at Gippal.

The two just continued throwing slime balls at them. -

(Next period- Chemistry)

"OUCH! STOP IT!" Shouted Tidus.

"Mr. Tidus, is there any problem?" Mrs. Caragan said

"But Yu-" explained Tidus but Mrs. Caragan just interrupted.

"No Buts Mr. Tidus" Mrs. Caragan glared "Go at the back and face the wall"

Yuna giggled

"Is there any problem Miss Yuna?" Mrs. Caragan asked

"No ma'am" Yuna said while the cheerers GLARED at her.

"Now let's continue with the topic"

(Hey I don't want to say what happened to the whole class, 'k! besides I'm getting bored)

At Lunch…

(At Yuna's side)

"Hey, have you seen Lulu, Rikku?" said Yuna worried

"No" Rikku said

"Paine?"

"No"

"Where is she?" Yuna asked.

"I don't know" Rikku and Paine said in chorus

"Let's just eat!" Rikku said, "Besides, I'm hungry!"

"Same here" Paine said

(At Tidus's side)

"It's just fun to make Yuna shout!" Tidus said

"Yeah but she'll take revenge on you Tidus!" Gippal said while laughing.

"Yeah! She kicked you're butt!" Baralai said

"Yeah and what she did was 3 times harder than yours!" added Gippal

"Hey, stop it, NOW!" Tidus said

"Oh, I just forgot. Have you seen Wakka?" Tidus asked

"No" Baralai said

"Maybe hanging out!" Gippal said

"Maybe"

"RINGGGGGGGGG!" The bell Rang.

(After class)

"Let's go out for today, darlin'!" a weird guy w/ orange hair said

"k darling!" someone said

End of chapter 1

A/n: ok! end of chap.1! I'm still not good! Flames are welcome 'cause I want to make my story better! R and R PLS!