My first FanFiction so please give constructive critisism. Please R+R. (I don't own CSI or Characters)
Will I or Wont I
7.45 am
Stella walked through the supposedly empty orchard, panting. She was speed-walking. Almost running. Hearing faint footsteps in fallen leaves a little way behind her, she started jogging; her breathing getting louder. She heard muffled footsteps in front of her. Then next to her- both sides; left and right.
11.00 am
The Ringing in her ears just wouldn't go away. Even though the ambulance sirens had been off, Stella still didn't know what the ringing in her ears was connected to. This was the noisiest darkness she had ever encountered.
3 Hours previously. 8.00 am
Detective Stella Bonasera was laying on her back, her breathing shallow. She was bleeding from a deep abdominal stab wound. The slash in her throat prevented her from shouting for help. Stella just lay there helpless. Nothing she could do but hope. Hope that someone would find her. Hope that they would find her in time. Her breathing slowed and she was plunged into darkness.
How was it? Okay? Whats going to happen to Stella? Please Read and Review. Thanks
