Hi, this is my 2nd fic posted and my very first Dragonball Z fic, posted that is. I have plenty of chapters ready to post, but I am waiting for a few reviews to show me if anyone is interested. I have noticed from reading other Dragonball Z fics that the language varies quite a bit in the stories, so my spelling may be a little different.
"Gohan, Gohan, what's wrong?" Chi Chi asked.
No reply. In his mind he could hear someone calling to him. "Gohan, help me" This mysterious voice was leading him to her for some unknown purpose.
"Gohan, you're scaring me" she said. By this time Goku had woken up by Chi Chi's calls and Gohan's change of mental energy.
"Gohan" she said putting a hand on his shoulder.
All Gohan knew was that he was not to let anyone stop him from getting to the woman. He powered up to push his mother away and she hit her head on the wall behind and slid to the ground unconscious. He acted like nothing had happened and kept walking.
"Chi Chi" Goku shouted and ran to her side. He checked her pulse and once he was satisfied that she would be OK. He would have called for Goten to help subdue his brother but he knew that at the moment Gohan would kill him if he got in the way.
Goku powered up to get ahead of Gohan. He landed right in front of Gohan and caused him to stop walking any further.
"Gohan, what's wrong with you?" Goku said.
"She needs my help, can't you hear her calling?"
"Who?".
"Elise". After saying that he powered up and flew off.
Goku flew after him. Whilst following Gohan he used his telepathic powers (newly acquired) to contact Vegeta.
"Vegeta. Can you hear me?"
"What now Kakorot?"
"Gohan is being controlled by someone called "Elise" and I can't stop him on my own without killing him"
"I'll be there in 5"
Vegeta caught up with Goku in three minutes. Goku sensed that Vegeta knew more than he was letting on, but for now he was more occupied with helping Gohan.
"Why don't we just stop him?" Vegeta asked
"Because we may not be trying to hurt him but he has no problem with hurting us. He knocked his mother unconscious for just touching him on the shoulder".
"Hmm" he replied with an added nod of the head.
A few minutes later Gohan landed in the middle of some desert. Before Vegeta and Goku could land they noticed what Gohan was doing.
"Ka-meh-hah-meh-haaaaa"
Gohan had made a deep tunnel but focused enough for him to fit in – one meter in diameter. He powered down and slid down the tunnel.
"We better follow him".
Vegeta replied with his normal nod of the head.
Goku jumped into the hole first, followed by Vegeta. When they got to the bottom they saw Gohan by a door to a buried spaceship. Before they could take another step Gohan ripped the door off its hinges. He walked inside and Goku and Vegeta followed closely.
As soon as they were inside of the spaceship Gohan seemed to be in control again as he turned round and looked straight at Goku and Vegeta.
"Dad, where are we?" Gohan said.
"I don't know son, you came here" Goku said.
"The girl..." is all Gohan got out before some robot had shot him with something.
That's it for now. I have the next chapter ready in waiting. I accept any and all reviews, but please try to keep them friendly.