HI!
I'm glad someone is interested in my idea. If no one wants it, I may have time to write it later. (In a yearish? More then?)
Current date: Saturday, October 1st, 2011.
It starts out with The Noah being royalty, and the Bookman are the King's Scribe/Advisor. The Millennium Earl is King Adam, Sheril Kamelot is the crown Prince and heir to the thrown. Tricia Kamelot is his rich wife and he has Road and Wisely as Adoptive children because Tricia can't have any kids.
Tyki Mikk (Brother) is the next in line for the throne. Lavi is being trained for becoming Sheril's Personal Scribe. He has grown up among the Noble court and nothing surprises him. Except for the one man who travels like a hobo among his people, learning how His family's words about peace and prosperity differ from the truth.*
*Examples
-Bandits are everywhere.
-Akuma is the machines that the King or Earl built to "protect" (that is what Tyki was told) the Royal family
-In reality they terrorize the people
-Famine in the South (desert terrain, No food being shipped there.)
-A tree blight in the North, causing the lumber harvesters to not be able to cut down wood and freezing in the winter because there is nothing to keep them warm
-a plague affecting the animals
-unsafe working conditions: Mines, laboring class, etc.
-Naval and Land based troops have bad supplies
Tyki is found out by Lavi, but Tyki orders him to keep his mouth shut
Lavi is also an Exorcist who was sought out by the Black Order to start a revolution and get rid off the Kamelot bloodline. He is tired of all the death and injuries, his eye was lost to an infection that wasn't able to be treated, because he was to poor at the time.
The Exorcists are all revolutionists. Leenalee was kidnapped from Komui when their parents died in a "bandit raid" (AKUMA attacked because The Lee's were protesting against the Royal family.)
-The Lee family was rich.
-The Generals are in High Society as well, trying to start the revolution from the inside.
All the while Lavi is sensing unwanted attention from his boss to be. (Sheril is being perverted even though he is married and has kids.)
The redhead is slightly falling for Tyki, and his unorthodox ways. But he always bickers with the man.
Tyki finds himself desiring the younger man but hides it, feeling disgusted with himself. He becomes even more of a ladies man to distract his unwanted feelings.
-Society refuses to accept same sex couples.
-Malcolm C. is willing to sacrifice everything and anyone to kill the Noah Clan
Feel free to change anything in the story!
I want to know if anyone would be interested to write this!
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