The Utmost Experience

by lynnroth

Maximum Ride, a seventeen year old girl who is forced to move from the rural areas of Alaska to the largest city in America. New York. She moves there with her sister, Ella, her parents, her cousin, Ari, and her godson, who, after a tragic event, is her son, Charlie. What will happen on the plane ride to New York? Will Ella recognize them?

1. Prologue

Should I continue this story? I am feeling a little conflicted at this point.

The Utmost Experience - Prologue

Max POV

Hi. My name is Maximum Ride. I am seventeen years old. My mother is a doctor. A vet, to be exact. My father is a scientist who loves my sister, Ella, and I to death. My life as been no walk in the park, though. And I know what you're thinking. The snobby girl with the rich dad. No. That has never been my life. I am happy to say that my parents make Ella and I work for what ever we have. Unless it was the car that my dad bought me. That is another story. I set my mind into buying a Zenvo ST2. That my friends was a dumb mistake. The car alone costs $1.8 million. but I got it. And if you have no idea what that car is, look it up on Google. Just saying.

I was walking into my house when my younger sister, who is sixteen, Ella Martinez, barreling down the stairs running to me with the biggest smile on her face.

"You're back!" She yelled giving my a bear hug.

"Yes," I replied, trying to detangle her from me. "But I had to bring work with me." I continued, bending down to grab the baby carriage. Charlie started to fuss. Now before you go off and tell all of your friends that Max got pregnant! No. I did not. I am the nanny for the governor of Alaska. I have lived here in Alaska my entire life, and I don't plan on leaving. But things can change. I just didn't know.

"Mom!" Ella yelled walking into the kitchen of the large house. "Max is home!"

"Maxie!" I heard a yell from the other side of the kitchen. I saw my cousin, Ari, coming to me. More like running.

"Ari!" I yelled at him, unknowing that he was here. I picked up the four-year old, placing Charlie on the island in the middle of the kitchen. My mother turned around, smiling.

"Oh," Mom started. "I'm going to miss this." Her eyes went wide.

"What do you mean? Miss this?" Ella started. My mother sighed. knowing we were not going to let this go.

"Your father wanted to tell you."

"Tell us what!" Ella and I asked in unison. I guess we yelled a little too loud. My father came into the room with a look on his face, I couldn't read. And Charlie started to cry louder. I picked Charlie out of the carrier and rocked him. His sobs became shudders. Ella went straight to the point with my father.

"Why did mom say that she was, 'Going to miss this'?" Ella whisper/yelled.

"We're moving to New York in two days." He said bluntly. "The maids already started your packing." With that he left the room, leaving a sad-looking mother and two very confused looking daughters, along with two little boys.

"We're moving?" I sighed, sadly. Looking down to Charlie. "Guess I have to bring you back home." The phone rang and my mother picked it up.

I started to leave but my mother stopped me.

"Max," she started slowly.

"What now?" I asked.

"Mr. and Mrs. Prime just died in a car crash." She barely whispered. "The doctor said that Shannon said that you are Charlie's legal guardian now."

Great. I looked down to Charlie. Now I was moving to the other side of the country, and I have a son now. What are the people at my school going to think of me now?

Was it good? Please R&R! This is my very first FanFic, but not my first story! Thanks!