I don't own fruits basket or its characters. This is the redone one hopefully I have gotten most of the grammar mistakes. And it is easier to read through. Reviews are always welcome. I tried to capture Tohru's trusting attitude a bit more, though later in the story she will be OCC, b/c no one that goes through this is ever the same. Oh and this chapter is still rated M. Hope you enjoy

Chapter 1: Thorus Attack

"Damnit! Where's Tohru? I'm hungry." Kyo, said kicking the table

"Kyo-chan, she is working, You know that. It wouldn't hurt you to go pick her up every once in a while. Wouldn't it ?" Shigure said masterfully picking up his tea in time to avoid Kyos kick. "Did you really have to break my table?"

"That damn rat picks her up" Kyo said "I'll fix me something to tide me over."

"Yes, but Yuki, called a few minutes ago and said that he would be at the school late, finishing up some student council work. We don't want our little flower out at dark by herself." The dog smirked "Maybe I'll go pick her up? I don't get to spend enough time alone with her."

"You pervert, I'll go she should be almost home by now anyway." Kyo said slamming out the door.

Kyos so predictable. Shigure thought to himself. He sipped his tea, trying to fight off an uneasy feeling that he started having since Yuk, had called.

Wow we finished really early tonight. Tohru thought as she looked at her watch. Guess I will be able to start the laundry, after I finish studying. The sun was going down when she left the building.

"Yuki-san?", She said looking around. "Well it is still a bit early I'll just wait." She looked at her watch it was 7:45. He'll definitely be here by eight.

She tried to go back into the changing room. Pulling on the door, she remembered that the back door could only be opened from the inside. The front doors were looked when the last business man left the building. Oh well, she thought cheerfully, I'll just wait out side, it's a clear night. Yuki is late tonight, that's not like him. I hope everything is okay. I'll just start home, that's a good idea. Right mom, I lived in a tent I can walk myself home.

She had gotten to the front of the alley, when she heard a sound behind her. "Yuki-san?" She said turning. No one there. I've got to much imagination.

"Excuse miss? Can you help me?" There was someone back there. She thought turning around. He was about Shigures height he had light brown hair he's eyes where shadowed but he seemed to be really worried about something.

"Oh yes, I'd be happy too." She said smiling. She put her bag down against the wall and started walking back into the alley. Maybe he is sick.

"I've dropped my keys and I'm in a hurry, if I'm late my wife will kill me can you help me look." he said smiling helplessly. "I'm such a klutz."

She giggled a bit. "I 'd be glad to." She said walking back to the alley. A voice in the back of her head told her she was stupid and that she shouldn't be doing this. That's such an odd thought, I mean Mom always said to be trusting of people, that deep down everyone was good. Besides why would anyone want to hurt me. And Yuki should be showing up any time out of breath and apologizing for being so late. "Where did you drop them at?"

"I was throwing out the trash and I think they fell out of my pocket. Over by the dumpster back there, I know this is a little strange, but I thought I needed a good pair of eyes to help me look." He said shifting on his feet. "Getting old, well it just isn't any fun." He looked back and she was following him. "A girl as pretty as you. I bet you have a boyfriend."

Tohru blushed. "Oh no"

"So you wasn't waiting on anyone to walk you home, that's not safe you know that." He said. "I'll tell you what as soon as we find my keys, I'll give you a ride home"

"Oh, I couldn't ask you to do something like that." She stammered out. He really is just a nice man. "you work in one of the other offices I work in that one" pointing towards the door she had came out of.

"I know" He said moving closer behind her.

"You know?" She said looking up smiling

"Oh yeah, I've seen you leaving a couple of times. That's why I asked if you have a boyfriend. He is usually here to pick you up"

"Yuki-san, he is one of my best friends". She said blushing furiously, "I'm not sure why he isn't here. He usually is but he is really late tonight, and I have homework and dinner to start and laundry, so I was just going to walk myself home."

"That's not to safe," He said smirking, "A girl as pretty as you, you could run into trouble, I guess it is your lucky night, that I'm here a mean." He finished amused by the girls blushing.

Not sure what to do she giggled and turned back to the looking around the dumpster..

"You have beautiful hair" He said and reached out to stroke it.

She flinched. Maybe I was wrong, what is Kyo always telling me, when I'm by myself. "What are you?"..she said turning around

The guy grabbed her arms and pulled him towards her. She began to struggle "Please, let me go"

"Quiet stop fighting"..He moved his lips over her neck one of his hands moving up her shirt He had her arms easily pinned in his other hand above her head.

"Please stop she".she tried to scream but it came out as a whisper, "Please" twisting herself.

"I don't want to hurt you but if you don't stop I'll hit you." Shoving her against the wall pinning her with his body one hand holding her arms up above her head. "You are so pretty", spreading her legs with his knee.

"Stop it please" she said begging and beginning to cry. Yuki will show up any minute, Yuki please hurry. She threw her weight to one side when his reached her most private area. Catching him off guard she was able to get her arms free.

"You bitch", he said before striking her and throwing her to the ground.

Stars , she thought for a second opening her eyes. It was a dream. Then he was on her spreading her legs roughly with his knee tearing her panties away with one hand while the other held her. "I will knock you out and do what I want anyway, just relax you might enjoy this I said stop, do you really want to be out, I might accidentally hit you to hard, then you'd die" . He said laughing and he brought himself to her and roughly started moving himself in and out.

The pain was red hot. Pain doesn't have a color but this time it does its red. She tried to scream but her voice wouldn't work. "Mom where are you?"

"Turn over bitch!" Forcing her over on her stomach he begin to spread her ass cheeks open. "Hmmm nice" he said putting a finger in...

"NO PLEASE STOP PLEASE DON"T!" she screamed out loud finally finding her voice.

"I told you to fucking relax" taking hear head and slamming it in the pavement

I can't pass out ,she thought. He turned her back over. "I'm not done. Kiss me". He pressed his mouth around her hers forcing his tongue into her mouth, she gagged on his tongue it tasted like stale cigarettes and beer. "Put your arms around me". She shook her head. "Now bitch I'll hurt you," She felt her mind drift from her body as he started taking her again. "NOW!" She reached up and place her arms on his shoulders in the state of a sleep walker.

Mom there you are. 'I knew you liked the beach Tohru, hang on just a while longer." In her mind she was at the beach with her mother happier times. He thrust one last time and moaned. He wiped his sweaty forehead on her shirt. Why me what did I do to deserve this she thought staring up at the stars. Mom yuki Kyo shigure where are you? He finally stood up and finished dressing himself he looked around satisfied that no one was there.

"I'm sorry I told you I didn't want too hurt you." Pulling her up to sitting position. "See your not hurt to bad". She couldn't look at him, but wouldn't give him the satisfaction of any more tears. All she could do was shake. Her legs and other areas where hurting so bad, she wasn't sure if she would be able to stand again

"What are you going to do about this?" he asked. She looked at him sharply. "I mean," he continued "this was your fault, you came back in to this alley with me, and your skirt barely covers anything. No one will believe you, there's really nothing you can do." He kissed her harshly on the mouth. He stood and laughed and walked away.

She looked around panicky for a few moments, did that really happen. She touched her head, blood. Tried to stand but her legs were jelly she sat back down roughly her legs out in front of her, more blood. Oh god it really happened to me. She thought and she let the tears come, sitting in the dirty alley way she made a pitiful sight as the truth of what happened, that her being so naive and trusting, that he took something ore than just her virginity, how can she be around anyone now, they will know she is damaged and used, and that it was her fault. She laid down against the wall and cried till she passed out.