This is my 1st HOLES fic, so it mite not be that gud. Let me know wat u thnk pls...Here we go


The hot sun outside was being felt by the two teens sitting inside the bus, which was already hot, and occasionally by the two adults in the front. Lillian Barlow was in for the summer of her life. See 'Lilly' always had to go to her Aunt Barlow's, or 'Aunty Barly's, DETENTION CAMP. Anyway, she always wished she could be like normal teens her age, and have fun with her friends during the summer. Instead of going to a camp full of guys…..delinquent guys.

She of course wouldn't talk to them. It's not that she wasn't allowed it was just she didn't really want to talk to them because last time she tried talking to them, she found herself being hit on by the BIGGEST PERVERT IN THE WORLD! After that, she just kept to herself all the time, or Mr. Sir or Mr. Pendenski. But most of the time, she would just write in her journal, surf the web, or talk with her Aunt…as long as she wasn't busy.

Lilly was so into her thoughts that she didn't even notice the police officer that had been in the front with the bus driver, came up to her and handed her a bottle of ice cold water from the cooler in the front. "Thank you Officer Pratt," Lilly said. "You looked a little parched. Anyway, we'll be arriving at camp in about 20 min." he replied. "Thanks." He went back to his seats as she went back to her thoughts, looking out the window since it helped.

She took a sip of water and looked at the boy sitting five seats behind and across from her. Lilly thought it polite to give him at least a small smile. To her surprise he gave her a small smile back. She again went back to her thoughts, and as soon as she finished her water, the bus came to a stop, indicating that they had arrived.

Lilly got up from her seat, grabbed her black bag, and got off the bus where she knew Officer would be waiting for her. But just as she was going down the stairs, she took one last look at the young boy sitting at the back of the bus. She gave him one last smile before he changed, just like all the boys at Camp Green Lake.


its a little small being the 1st chap. but i promise the rest we'l be longer.