The grammar improves and the later parts are longer :)
Episode 1: Changes
Scene[Dante playing baseball match]
Dante: looks like I am up
(walks on to the batters plate, grips bat firmly and swings just as the ball comes to him)
Fred: get the ball,quick!
Dante: (makes it all the way around giving his team the winning run)
Announcer: it's over Dante has just won the The Los Angeles Dodgers the match
(time-lapse)
Scene[ Dante's house]
Dante: (knocks on the door) Krystal I am home
(the door opens, a young brunette women with a brown eyes stands in the doorway)
Krystal: (affectionately embraces Dante) i saw the game on tv you played well.
(time lapses, the two sit down on the sofa and switch the tv on)
Dante: (teasing)What's for dinner, burnt surprise
Krystal: ha ha very funny, actually is your favourite but since it's not burnt I think I'll have it
Dante: its ok I can handle the taste
Krystal: what time is Riley coming
Dante: probably about... ( roar of motorbike engine interrupts)
(Krystal opens the door, And Riley comes in).
News reporter: People are advised to stay indoors as what seems to be a disease is spreading quickly the victims become creatures who feel no emotion and lose all sense of who they were, they then begin to scratch and bite people to infect them. The military are trying to deal with it if they aren't successful, people are encouraged to grab supplies and evacuate.
(banging on the door, Dante opens to see a women with blood all over her jaw)
Dante: Shit, its one of them, Riley throw me your revolver
Riley: Bro you know I am not allowed to use it unless in self-defence or while making an arrest.
Dante: This is self-defence, this thing is what the news was on about.
Riley: ( draws his pistol aims for the zombie's head and pulls the trigger,) close the door before more get in.
Krystal: what was that thing why did you shoot it.( Krystal starts crying)
Dante: (holds Krystal) we aren't safe here we need to gather supplies and head out of the city
Riley: We should head to Chinatown as there is nearby shops and restaurants. It's perfect for supplies and there is a nearby medical centre
Dante: first we need to get mum,dad and Krystal's sister.
End
