Ok this is my first fanfict and I'm kinda nervous

Ok this is my first fanfict and I'm kinda nervous. I like criticisum any even bashing as long as you give me a reason for bashing me and not just because you're bored. Just so you know this is about G1. And if someone has already used this plot I'm sorry I didn't know and you have the right to bash me =(

Summary: what happens when you mix a crazy rich scientist with to much time on his hands and the transformers? Find out!

Characters: Optimus prime, Ironhide, Ratchet, Jazz, Bumblebee, Megatron, Soundwave, Starscream, Skywarp, Thundercracker, Crazy scientist(he will not have a name because it is not important), and various OCs only one has a name so far (Lily)

He knew his plan would work they always did. The hard part was capturing the transformers. He also had trouble picking which ones he would use for his disturbing game.

He loved messing with people. He always had. Messing with highly intelligent robot would be oodles better.

They were all locked in a cell and were currently in a forced statis. At least the ones he was using were. The others were locked in a room in a semi permanent statis and would only awaken if he personally re-activated them.

He had selected the transformers he had he knew them the best. He was constantly observing them. It had become his obsession as of late. It had even kept him from sleeping. He was constantly going over his notes in his mind and making sure he had chosen correctly. He chose five autobots and five decepticons. He checked over his list again.

Autobots:

Optimus prime- will keep his men in line

Ironhide- will keep prime in line/ grumpy personality

Ratchet- medic

Jazz- will help keep their spirits up

Bumblebee- will be interesting to observe

Decepticons:

Megatron-interesting to observe when with others

Soundwave- level headed

Starscream- arrogant/interesting to see what a human girl could do to change that

Skywarp- odd personality for a decepticon

Thundercracker-can't have 2 seekers without the other

His note weren't elaborate but he had all the other necessary in formation in his head. He knew that when the decepticons woke up they would either try to break their way out of the cell or try and trash the autobots.

He had predicted when he had started what each individual bot would do on their own. Then being bored with that idea he thought of putting them all in one cell together.

This gave his mind something to ponder.

He decided he could think about it or he could take action and see what would happen.

He decided the later would be much more interesting.

He also made a few big changes to the robots general make up. He shrunk them down to human size and gave them humanoid organs grown from an organic metal found in the Bermuda triangle. They were now more like metallic humans than transformers and where now much less difficult to control. They could now eat, sleep and "make love" ( I bet none of you guys can guess were this is going) like humans could.

He finally, after much deliberation, decided to start his little experiment. The screen lit up in front of him and displayed the cell. His hand paused over the switch that ended the temporary statis. He would have little control over what would happen after he flipped the switch.

He closed his eyes and decided to let what ever happened happen.

Thundercracker woke up slightly drooling

'wait… drooling!' he thought as he wiped the spit away 'since when do I drool?'

He stood up. Apparently he was the last one up because Megatron and Optimus were already going at it.

'Wait…Optimus so the autobots are here too?'

Then out of no where a screen came down from a wall. Every mech in the room froze and starred.

The screen lit up and an odd human started explaining what had happened and where they were. At the end of its speech a movie started playing explaining their new systems and their functions. When this ended every mech in the room except Thundercracker was shocked so much that they fell into an involuntary statis.

So no one else saw the girl slowly creep out of her corner…

Oh weird ending. Any ways if you want to name one of the OCs (they're all girls) and pick there partners pm me. Thunder cracker is taken and so is the name Lily.