(A/N) I am so sorry for the long wait to all my readers but I had to take some time to look at my story and find out ways to make it better, but I failed so I had a fellow author who hasn't seen the movie look over it and she gave me good advice and that advice is starting here in the remake of chapter one. I would like to give a special thanks to Eve Hawk for helping me reach a new perspective on my story. Wow and the award for longest author's note goes to LoboTheZetaWolf

Disclaimer- I do not own Alpha and Omega but I do own any ocs you may find in the story

P.S. IF you see * than look for it in the A/N because it means I have a question for you the readers about whether or not that is in character for said character.

Jasper Park Canada
Humphrey's POV

I was enjoying a nice quiet sleep, complete with a dream of my wedding day, when I was rudely awakened by a group of omega.

"WOLF PILE!" they shouted as they all jumped in the air and landed on me.

"Get off me guys," I laughed.

"Get your butt outa my face," Salty said to the fat omega known as Mooch.

"What's with the wakeup call?" I asked, yawning and trying to get the taste of sleep out of my mouth.

"It's time for your wedding!" Mooch rolled his eyes at me, like he was saying 'How could you forget your own wedding day, numbskull?'

"OH SHIT! Thanks guys," I said as I took off running to the river to clean up and get ready for my big day.

Meanwhile in the Head Alpha's Den

Two tan female wolves were brushing a pure white female wolf's fur with pine cones. Instead of sitting still like she was supposed to, the white wolf was shaking and almost bouncing off the walls, making it very difficult for the two tan wolves to brush her hair.

"Stop fidgeting, Lilly," the younger wolf said.

"Sorry Kate," Lilly replied. "I'm just nervous…what if he thinks I'm ugly!"

*"Don't worry sweetie. If he says you're ugly I will rip off his wolf-hound and shove it down his throat, and then I'll rip off his tail and beat him to death with it!" the other tan wolf said in a sincere voice.

Kate and Lilly just stared at her, wide eyed, and their jaws dropped.

"Lilly, sweetie, I brought you something," an old grey wolf said from the entrance of the den. At the sight of this old grey wolf Lilly bolted for the entrance to hug him.

"Daddy! I'm so glad you are here!" Lilly gushed.

"I am too, my dear… and I bring a gift from Humphrey," he said as he handed a purple lily to Kate. Kate immediately took the strands of fur that Lilly had kept blowing out of her face and pinned them up with the purple flower.

"Oh Lilly, don't you look extraordinary," the older tan wolf gushed as tears started to trickle from her eyes.

"Thanks momma," she replied as she kissed her mother on the cheek.

"Never thought I would be alive for both of my daughters weddings, thought a heart attack would have taken me like it did my father," her dad said.

"Calm down Winston or you will give yourself a heart attack," Lilly's mom said.

"Thank you Eve," Winston said.

"Lilly, if you will please return to your sister so she can keep brushing you. We want to make you look as beautiful as an angel," Eve said.

"Thank you all for everything you are doing for me on my special day… Kate, you are the best sister a girl could ask for, Mom you are just… wow, there are no words to describe you. And Dad, thank you for conducting the ceremony," Lilly cried, tears overflowing from her beautiful purple eyes.

"Oh, come here," Eve sniffled, grabbing her two daughters and mate in a family hug.

"I better get going since you decided you wanted to be married on howling rock in front of the moon, after all,I do need to get cleaned up myself,and then walk the whole way to the top of the damn mountain," Winston grumbled as he started to leave.

"One second, deary," Eve said as she went after Winston. "You don't think… he…will show up, do you?"

"Hopefully not. I did banish him from the pack, but who knows… he may find some way in, so you'd better warn Humphrey of the tradition," Winston said.

"But of course," Eve said, and she took off in search of her daughter's future mate.

Humphrey's POV

I was just getting washed up in the lake, when my wolf-hound decided it couldn't wait. So I started to stroke myself,imagining Lilly's mouth working her erotic magic.

"Oh…Lilly that feels so good," I moaned.

"Humphrey?"

"AHHH!" I jumped out of the water, startling the birds and causing them to fly off."Oh, it's only you Eve," I managed to breathe out.

"Of course it's me… who else were you expecting?" she asked, curious as to why her daughter's mate would be afraid of someone.

"No one. Thought I was alone. That's the point," I said climbing out of the water and bracing my feet, preparing to dry myself off in the only way a wolf can.

"DON'T YOU EVEN-" Eve started to say, but it was too late – she was soaked.

"Oops… sorry Eve," I said, slinking away from the ever scary Eve.

"I have something I must inform you of," Eve said. Her tone was cold, and it scared me even more.

"Wh-wh-what is it, Eve?" I asked .

"One of the pack laws allows for another male to challenge the soon-to-be mate of a female for the right to marry them," she said.

"WHAT!" I exclaimed.

(A/N) Hope you enjoyed this chapter. Sorry about the cliffhanger but i wanted to leave my readers wanting more

*- did I keep eve in character or did I go overboard please review and tell me how I did

~LoboTheZetaWolf~