Sorry about this story being soooooo short!
I was wondering if I should continue this story or just keep it as it is? Can you please reply and tell me your input on the story?
After being in a dark, scary hole for about what Hidan thought to be a year, but in reality has only been two weeks, Hidan had finally decided it was
time to get out of this scary hole and carry out his revenge on Shikamaru. But first he would have to buy some hair gel. God, did he miss his hair gel!
And hopefully it would be on sale at the "Pretty, Preppy Beauty Salon", his favorite place to go on the weekends. Kakuzu would never like him going
there; he always said it was too expensive and worthless. He said just to use water. Everyone knows water doesn't work! It was about time anyways;
he was getting sick of sacrificing his "secret" stash of Barbie dolls he hid in his cloak. It was bad enough sacrificing Barbie, but then he had to sacrifice
his secret lover, Ken, just so that he could be happy with Barbie up in heaven. It was Ken's wish to die; he said it just wouldn't work out between
them, they came from to separate worlds, and plus Ken was mad at Hidan for making the gay Barbie song! After digging his way out of the hole with
his hands, Hidan remember he could have used his scythe. He stumbled out of the hole and tripped over something, falling face flat in dirt and a mouth
full of cusses. Afterwards, Hidan pulled out his bad-to-the-bone sunglasses that he got half-off at Walmart. After putting on his bad-to-the-bone
sunglasses, Hidan could finally see; after all he has been down in a dark, scary hole for a "year" now and the sun was just so bright! (Authur's note:
No! really, who would have thought the sun was bright! not me! -note the sarcasm-) Anyways, like I was saying before I was rudely interrupted; he
put on his "cool" sunglasses and saw his partner's lifeless body lying on the ground.
"So that's what I tripped over!" Hidan thought.
Even though Hidan and Kakuzu weren't good friends or friends at all, Hidan could still remember the dying words of his lost partner.
"Good news! I just saved a bunch of money on my car insurance!" he said before he dropped dead.
Hidan walked over to his partner's body and took it in his arms. He opened his jacket and took out his wallet proceeding to put it in his pocket.
"Now you got nothing for the afterlife you shithead!" Hidan whispered menacingly.
Hidan then took out his dead, lifeless Barbie doll Ken, and laid him by his fallen partner and walked away, but not before kissing his beloved Ken and
kicking his partners head while screaming
"Hair gel if VERY important!'
Thank you for reading my story!
-Khaori-san