Death vs. Immortality.
Chapter One - The Phone Call
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I'd just pulled into the garage, parking between Edwards Volvo and Alice's Porsche, when Edward loped into view, with the phone in his hand. "Charlie", he mouthed to me.
I wondered what my father could possibly want, after all, we had just this minute returned from his house, where Sue had cooked us a wonderful lunch of pasta.
Charlie hadn't eaten his though; he'd caught a bug and was recovering. He told me he felt very tired, and I could see just how pale and weak he looked.
Of course, I had excused myself from lunch; I'd told them Edward was taking me out as soon as I got back. Nessie had eaten hers; she was getting better all the time at eating human food.
At first, she wouldn't touch the stuff, but slowly, she'd gotten used to it, and now even had her favourites. She jumped from the car and ran over to Edward, reaching her palm up to his face, no doubt giving him a word for word recollection of the afternoon spent at Charlie's
. His forehead creased with worry as she showed him Charlie, at least that's what I assumed, not being able to see. I took the phone from his hand, and pressed it against my ear, "Dad? Is everything okay, we've only just gotten back?" I asked.
I could hear Sue in the background saying something to my Dad, he obviously had the receiver covered, but her tone sounded as if she was trying to persuade him about something.
"Um...Bella, actually, no. Well, you see, I'm still not feeling right, and my head has started to ache now. I would have asked whilst you were here but I didn't want to make a fuss, i'm only calling now to shut Sue up," he mumbled, his voice raspy.
If my heart was still beating, it would have sped up right now, because I was becoming panicked, and Edward sensed that. He turned to look at me with a worried expression, as I answered my father, "What can I do, Dad? Anything!" I stammered quickly.
I wouldn't have been so worried, but my father never complained about being ill, he just got on with it. "Well, I don't want to be all dramatic and go to the hospital, but Sue is demanding that I do, but i'd rather be in my own house, I can't stand all the waiting!" he croaked.
I could see where he was going with this, and so I offered before he could ask, so he didn't feel he was taking advantage, "Dad, let me get Carlisle to call over to you and check you over. I'm sure he won't mind one bit, and it's better to be safe than sorry," I said.
Although Edward couldn't read my mind, he could hear my conversation, and he nodded and dashed out of sight. My Dad sighed over the phone, "Thanks Bella, I don't want to be any trouble, but, i am, uh, i am a little worried. I don't think i've ever felt this unwell before," he said, and I could sense a frown in his tone.
"Dad, Carlisle is getting his bag together now, shall I come back with him?" I asked, incase my Dad wanted me there for comfort. "No, no, don't trouble yourself Bella. You've got Nessie to occupy, I'll be fine, and Carlisle can tell you when he gets back. Thanks Bells, and don't worry, I'm sure it's nothing", Charlie added, and put the phone down.
For a minute, I stood as still as a statue. I couldn't help but think terrible things; what if he was really unwell? Would Carlisle be able to cure him, or give him anything for it? I darted into the living room, to see if Carlisle had left yet, and I heard his car speeding down the driveway.
Edward was by my side within the second, and had his arms around me in the next, "I'm sure everything will be fine, love. I think it's probably the flu, from what I saw in Nessie's head." he murmured into my ear, and I rested my head on his chest.
"I hope so. I wouldn't be so worried but Charlie never complains. I remember once, a couple of years ago, he caught the stomach flu from me, which I caught from Mike, and whilst I spent the day and night on the bathroom floor, Charlie went into work, for 12 hours, and got on with his job! That's the reason i'm so worried," I whispered back.
Edward kissed me tenderly, but for once, I couldn't forget what was on my mind. I had a horrible feeling in my gut, like I just knew something was terribly wrong. Charlie was so important to me, to Nessie, to all of us. I wondered if once again, I'd had too much happiness, whether fate was about to step in and balance it out for me, as it did before with the Volturi.
I endured months of pure hopelessness and devastation, and I wondered if I was about to experience it all again. I chewed my lip, and my breath seemed to hitch in my throat.
Renesmee took my hand and led me and Edward over to the piano, where he began to play my lullaby. I watched the clock, and counted the seconds until Carlisle returned.
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