Darkness and his light
A/N: This is my first shot at ever writing any kind of story so criticism is welcome and encouraged so long as it is constructive please.
I'm not to sure how good it is but I hope you enjoy it as much as I had fun writing it. I ask again for ways that I can improve please.
If you don't like the plot of the story or how I'm doing you don't have to read it I'm not forcing you too. Thanks.
Disclaimer: I don't own Bleach though I do own my OC's
Prologue Part 1: White
(Outskirts of Town)
"Ahhrg!" came one of the many number cry's that would be heard that night.
"W-what the hell is going on!" came the terrified cry of a red haired woman.
"Mom what's going on?" a young eight year-old child questioned very confused.
"Kuruden! Run! Go find your brother!" The distressed woman screamed terrified for her child's safety.
"What about about everyo-"
"Just go don't worry about us"
"O-ok"
'Be safe Kuruden'
Running up the stairs to his elder siblings room Kuruden flung open the door as fast as he could to find his brother and found him sitting
upright on his bed with headphones on listening to music.
"P-"
(Elder Brother POV)
Looking up to see his younger brother burst through his door was just about to scold him for coming into his room without his permission before widening his eyes in shock and disbelief.
Going through his little brothers stomach was a long black blade.
"Kuruden!"
Running to his little brother the young man looked up to see where the blade came from and was shocked to see an almost completely, save for his mask, black humanoid monster, he had a white skull like mask on with to long, forward-pointing horns protruding from the side of his head, and long white hair that reached to the middle of his back. In the middle of it's chest looked to be an organ or something of that kind protruding from it's chest. He also had long blades instead of forearms.
"Grrr, you bastard, I'll kill you for hurting him"
Grabbing at a pocket knife lying a top his drawer, he lunged at the monster only to meet the same fate as his younger brother.
Thinking quickly, he tried stabbing at the blade going through him only for the blade to snap and leave only the tiniest of scratches behind that only served to annoy the terrifying monster before him.
In an act of desperation the young man grabbed the broken blade and the monsters horn and attempted to hack at it's mask serving to only cut himself instead.
Due to being blinded by rage he never once questioned why the monster had not finished him off during all of this, had he done so he would've noticed the beast eyeing him curiously and slowly opening it's mouth.
Now trying to punch it into oblivion, he finally noticed what the beast was doing, but even though he didn't know what to expect it wouldn't matter anyway because he was slowly bleeding out and getting progressively weaker.
He was slowly dying and there wasn't anything he could do to even hurt this monster before him.
Done watching his prey struggle helplessly, the monster took a small bite of the young man's shoulder.
"Ahh-ck" quietly screaming from the pain and coughing up blood, the boy collapsed down next to his little brother and notice he was still breathing and that the place where he was stabbed wasn't as deep as he thought. 'If he gets help soon he might live'
Mind made up and with new found determination he shakily reached into his pocket and pulled out his phone and dialed 911 and manage to squeak out a call for help before finally bleeding out.
Throughout all this the monster had long since left feeling a much more powerful energy not too far from it's current position.
(At the powerful energy)
(canon)
"Wow!"
"This is Captain Shiba's spiritual pressure..?!"
Captain Shiba is a tall, muscular man with brown hair and has thin facial hair along his jaw-line. He wears the standard shinigami Shihakusho with a captain's haori.
Shaa k
"Agh!"
"Ugh!"
"Damn it!" The Captain shouted "They didn't respond to high spiritual pressure!"
Tho om
"What... ...The hell is that..?!"
A/N: I would continue with the story but I thought it was a really good place to end it, it's currently 1:15am and I'm tired, and I also really want to get it up. So without further ado this is the end of the first prologue I hope you enjoyed and I'll try to get the next one up soon. Feel free to ask questions I'll try to answer them
Oh and here are their ages just in case you want to know.
Kuruden's Mom: 34
(dunno why you'd wanna know this but here it is anyway)
Kuruden: 8
Kuruden's elder Brother: 15
Captain Shiba: I don't actually know and I've been searching on the web for a while now still don't know. He's Ichigo's dad.