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THEN , 2NDLY CHECK CHAPTER 2 ALSO , MY NEW ABHIRIKA DRABBLE.
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KK abhirika drabble competition is finished . But our author ' s brains haven't stopped working yet , have they ? ) At least not mine )
So here is the sweet little home of our adorable Abhirika . Whenever any drabble idea hits my head I'll post them here .
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And now here are the drabbles by me for KK Abhirika Drabble competition .
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AbhiRika Drabbles:09
Angry and cute birds
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A car was going through the silent night road of mumbai . the driver of the car was sitting with a angry face . his eyes were red and a little bit sowlled . seemed like he cried for a long time beside him a girl was sitting with a innocent face and stealing glance of him with a cute smile .
" Abhi ?"
she called out him for the 5th time . but there was no response . only silence and the scratching sound of the wheels on the road sound .
" accha baba sorry.. ye dekho kan pakad lia.. " she said and hold her ears .
but before she could hold her left ear completely she stopped with a low " aahh. " abhijeet looked at her with jeark and then concentrated on driving and said
" drama mat karo . goli lagi hai kandhe pe. zyada hilnese infection ho jata hai . " he said in a rude
voice..
" tum bhi toh man nahi rahe ho na . aur keya karu. , 20 bar sorry bol chuki hu.. ab kan pakar lia , dard bhi hogeyI. aur kitna naraz rahoge apni princess se ? " she said like a kid and started playing with her wedding chain and said to it " jo abhi tumhe meri gale pe bandha tha wo bohot accha tha. ye abhi gandha hai. sirf naraz reheta hai mujse. " she tried to being cute
" tarika just stop this nonsense.. " abhijeet said frustratedely.
" sorry na abhi. " she said in her actual mature tone now forgetting her kiddish tone..
in reply she got only silence from her akdu hubby.. she sighted and rested her head.
after sometime they reached home , abhijeet opened the main door and helped her inside . they entered the bedroom where a giant picture. of their marriage was hung..
he made her sit on the bed and was going. but stopped by
a pull on his wrist .
" I'm sorry my love . per keya karu wo tumhare taraf gun point karke rakha tha.. mujse control nahi hua.. aur apne ankho ke samne tumhe goli khate. hue kaise dekhta main. chup chap bolo ? " tarika said cupping his face..
" tarika yar tum waha bas forensic test ke liye geyi thi.. encounter karneke liye nahi. aur encounter ke liye hard practice chahiye.. han pata hai bas main aur daya honeke wajase thorasa mushkil horaha tha , per we would've managed. tumhe encounter mai aneke liye utna hard practice nahi hai.. tumhe mana kia tha na anese ? tarika samajhte keu nahi tum agar tumhe kuch hogeya toh main jite ji mar jaunga . wo goli mere tha.. keu aye tum bich mai ? " he said and stood far from her turning his back towards her .
she came and made him face her , cupped his face and looked deep into his eyes and started " abhi agar koi mujhe nishana banaye aur gun mujpe point kare toh tum keya karoge ? " this question made abhijeet silent and calm . he looked deep in her eyes then took her in a protective shell carefully enough not to hurt the left side of her chest.
" keu jabab nahi dia ? " tarika asked teasingly but lovingly in his shell .
" shut up tarika. " he said like a kid and burried his face more in her neck and kissed there..
she smiled sweetly and kissed on his head and said lovinglly " toh phir age se mujhe rokna mat . " she said with all her love .
after sometime she felt her shoulder getting wet as well as he . they didn't bother to wipe their tear and prefered staying in the comforting hug .
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AbhiRika Drabbles:14
Your Coffee
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Tarika was making coffee for herself and
for the guest waiting for her in the hall.. wait ,
not guest a regular vistor and owner of her
heart .
she came back in the hall with the steaming
coffee mugs in her hand. she served him his special black
coffee and she sat beside him with her normal coffee with
milk and extra suger..
" Abhi tum ye black coffee kaise pitey ho ? I mean itna
karwa test. maine ekbar test karneki koshish ki mere gale
se utarnese pehele hi ugal di. eww.. kaise pitey ho itna
bitter coffee ? " she asked making face and took a sip from
her sweet coffee mug..
" Tarika , ye black coffee healthy hote hai. aur ismai hi toh
coffee ka asli maza hai.. keya milk aur shakker deke
coffee ka test hi badal dete ho. " he said making a face and
took a sip.
" oh really ? " tarika asked with an attitude .
" hmm aur waise bhi milk aur suger mai extra fat hota hai.
isiliye toh itni moti ho tum. "
" what ? Abhijeeetttt chorungi nahi tumhe toh main . " she
said and started running behind abhijeet keeping her
coffee mug who already ran from there..
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" sir apke liye hard black coffee . "
Abhijeet came back from the sweet past by the voice of his
co - inspector in the year long secret mission in satara .
which kept him away from her for 8 months . but only his
body soul Is still back there in mumbai with her..
" umm nahi . rehene do.. arnav ko de do.. mujhe normal
coffee pina hai.. milk with extra suger..
" per sir ap toh nahi pite hai na ? "
" han. per aj se piunga. "
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here.,
far away in mumbai ,
" 3 cappuccino yaha pe.. " shreya ordered .
" umm nahi bhaiya.. 2 cappaccino.. one black coffe.. " tarika
said..
purvi and shreya gave her a horrified look she just
passed a sheepish smile.
after some time , at two different part of the country two
people said at the same time ,
"" utna bhi bury nahi hai test.. "
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AbhiRika Drabbles:20
"Pagal"
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" Abhijeet tab se bas mujhe khich rahe ho. kuch
bol bhi nahi rahe ho. Agar beauro jana hai toh
phone kar dete main ajati. Aur kuch bataoge keu le jarahe
ho tum mujhe beauro? aur salukeh sir anese pehele mujhe
wo... "
she stopped in the midway as she was in beauro now and
her dear dr Salukeh was also there who asked her to
complete the work before he returns. But Abhijeet didn't
listen to her and started dragging her and now they were
present in beauro.
Abhijeet stood infront of her still holding her hand.. he
once looked at tarika then at the team and then gave dr
salukeh and acp a look. Abhijeet looked at tarika again
who was trying to understand what's going on in his mind
then.. suddenly Abhijeet went on his knees and looked
directly in her eyes which were big now at shock. The
whole team also stood stopping their breath . Abhijeet
started
" Tarika , 9 sal hogeyi humari is khamosh rishte ki. per is
rishte ko abtak koi nam nahi mila.. hum ise dosti bolenge
toh sawal uthege lover ke tarha behave leke.. aur.
pe.. peyar bolenge toh sawal uthege agar. peyar hai toh
zuba pe dil ke bat aye keu nahi. per ye sirf samaz ke
mamle mai. sirf hum dono jante hai humare rishte keya
hai. tarika acp sir samajhta hai mujhe. humare rishte ko.
per mujhe. bandhke rakha hai ki agar age badh geye toh
kahi is noukri ki waja se humari zindegi barbad na hojaye.
aur salukeh sir insecure feel karta hai mere sath tumhe
dekhkar keuki main humesha flirt karta hu. likin
Tarika...
Tarika cut him looking into his teary eyes with her blur
version caused by tears
" likin wo sirf flirt nahi abhijeet. tumhare har flirt ke har
lafz ke piche ek ek matlab chupa hota hai. jo sirf main
janti hu. samajhti hu. duniya nahi. aur ye bhi. janti hu.
peyar karte ho mujse. warna itne sal tumhare sath nahi.
reheti. aur support nahi karti. Abhijeet peyar main bhi karti
hu tumse. bas ye noukri salukeh sir aur acp sir ke nazdigi
se darti hu. per...
Abhijeet cut her " per zindegi raho mai chalneke liye ek
humsafar ke zarurat hote hai. aur mere humsafar tum ho
tarika . pata hi chala in 9 salo mai kab. tumhe humsafar ke
nazro se dekhne laga. tarika , baonoge meri humsafar ? "
Abhijeet asked and she nodded her head in yes in tears.
abhijeet stood up holding both her hands . they looked at
their senior . dr salukeh removed his. glass and rubbed
his tears with a grin and acp nodded his head in. no.
grinning and mutmering " pagal " and wiped his tears.
The beauro filled with clapping & whistel sound
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Abhirika Drabbles:26
sHE survived
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Abhirika Drabbles:26
sHE survived
( winner at emotional concept )
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"Abhijeet Abhijeet kaha ho? Ghar itne andhera keu karke rakha hai. Aur tum kaha ho awaz toh do. Please.. " Tarika's tensed voice encroached in the silent house of his. She stopped by a pull and bumped into a hard chest. She put her hand on his chest in the dark and tried to see.
" Abhi.. Abhijeet tum thik ho na ? Han ? kaha laga hai chaku, dikhao " she was cupping his face and was trying to check him.
" Uffo. light do na. itni andhere , kuch dikhai bhi nahi deraha.. " she left him and switched on the lights . she was surprised now seeing him. He was perfectly fine
standing before her and smiling stupidly . slowly her surprised expression turned into a angry one and then it turned into a red tomato angry face. She marched to him
and started hitting on his chest and blubbering " How dare you abhijeet ? Tumne mujhe jhut keu kaha ki. Tumhe chaku lagi hai.. keu ? Ek toh meri jaan nikal geyi, upar se flight miss hoegyi. Tum yaha mumbai mai akele ho. Bas kuch din pehele aye ho mission se gahyel hoke.. maine socha , sab case ke sisile delhi geye , tum akele ho.. manage nahi kar paoge. Isliye maine apna conference bhulke flight miss karke yaha dour ayi. Upar se kitni dar geyi. aur tum.. " she stopped with a disbelief look then continued clutching his coller
" yaha toh tum bilkul thik ho. Tumhe pata hai na ye conference kitna important hai. phir ? Aise baccho jaise prank keu kia tumne ? Jhut keu kaha ki chaku lagi hai
tumhe. Aj tumne kuch zyada hi kar dia abhijeet. " she left him with jerk..
Abhijeet calmly hold her hands and looked into her eyes "Tarika main janta hu ki tumhe is tarha jhut bolke bulake maine thik nahi kia. Ek toh tum conference mai jarahi thi. Aur tumhare delhi ke flight adha ghanta pehele fly kar chuka hai. Ab nahi paoge aur koi flight bhi.. per Tarika .. aj aj mujhe kuch thik nahi lagraha hai. mera sixth sense keheraha hai ki tumhe jane na du tarika. ek ghutansa mehesus horaha hai. Bohot bechaini si mehesus horaha hai jab se tum airport ke liye nikle ho. bas dil bolraha tha
ki tumhe rok lu. Ajke pehele mera sixth sense bhi itna strongly kam nahi kia. I'm .. I'm sorry Tarika, but mujhe ..mujhe tumhe rokna tha kisi bhi hal mai. Agar bina wajay
tumhe rokneko bolta toh tum mere sunte nahi. Aur koi tareeka nahi mila. Main bimar hu , isliye mujhe rest mai rakhke sab delhi geye aur is wakt iss jhut ke alaoa aur koi
chara sahi nahi laga. Mujhe pata tha ki agar tum ye sunoge ki mujhe chaku laga hai toh tum mujhe akele chodke ja nahi paoge. bas isliye. I'm.. I'm sorry tarika. " he finished and looked down.
Tarika sighed crossing her arms and shook her head in no.
The doorbell broke the prevailing silence. Abhijeet went and opened the door.
" Are kaki ap. Ayie na andar. " he invited his neighbour politely .
" arey nahi beta, wo tumhari dost dr Tarika aj hee rat ki flight mai 8 :00 baje delhi fly karnewali thi na ? flight india m- 2943 mai ? " his neighbour asked nervously .
" han. Per geyi nahi. Yehi hai. Keu kaki ? " Abhijeet asked her worridely.
" yehi hai. Bhagwan ka lakh lakh sukair. wo flight 40 minute pehele fly toh kia tha , per technical malfunction ke waja se crash landing kia. Survival everage 0 % tv pe
dikha raha hai. " his neighbour said which made both froze.
" Chalo shukar hai ki Tarika beti thik hai. kismat achi haii... thik hai beta chalti hu. " she went and Abhijeet stood there like a
statue. Tarika took the remote like a robot and turned the tv on.. it was showing that the flight she missed because of abhijeet landed crashing and nobody survived. Abhijeet also came and stood beside her like a robot. she looked at Abhijeet and hugged him at once with all her force and
started sobbing . The tears were of fear and she was unable to understand if Abhijeet was a normal human in her life or an angel. He too hugged her tight and kissed on her forehead. Their heart was so much scared that they were thumbing badly
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Abhirika Drabbles:40
Sitare: The meaning of love
( 2nd place at romantic cconcept )
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" Taj mahal.. " she saidin an arguing voice crossing her arms and narrowing her eyes.
" nahi sitare. " he said in the same manner.
" Abhijeet tum tab se ladrahe ho. main keherahi hu, duniya mai peyar ke sabse bada aur jita jata nishan taj mahal.. chote chote bacche bhi jante hai.. aur tum bolrahe ho ki. sitare.. " tarika said keeping her hands on hips.
" aur main keheraha hu ki duniya mai peyar ke sabse bada aur unique nishan sitare hai.. aur. tum ho ki mere bat mante hee nahi ho . apne taj mahal mai . " abhijeet said and turned and started looking at the sky .
" abhijeet tum hee jano ke. tum keya bolrahe ho.. lagta hai case ke chakkar mai deemag hee kharab hogeya hai tumhara.. ruko.. main. coffee lati hu. "
tarika said and was going , but abhijeet stopped her holding her weariest and pulled her softly then hold her by waist . she kept her hands on his chest and looked at him..
" sab ye bolte hai ki. duniya mai peyar ke sabse bada nishan taj mahal hai , per tarika , sab toh ye bhi bolte hai na ki duniya mai paiso se zyada peyar bada hota hai.. " he said and looked at her waiting for her answer .
" han toh ? " she asked casually .
" toh madam , main ye bolraha hu ki agar paiso se zyada peyar bada hai , toh duniya mai peyar ke sabse bada nishan toh paiso se hee bane hai. so., iss hisab mai peyar
se zyada. toh paisa hee bada hua na ? keuki taj bananeke liye majdoor rakhe thaey unhe fees aur marble kharideneke liye paisa hee. age aya. so , paisa bada. so
duniya mai peyar ka. sabse bada nishan taj mahal ka existence toh shayed paiso ke. bagair hota hee nahi.. "
" you... paisa..peyar.. arrgg. abhii. youu.. " she was unable to avoid his explanation.
abhijeet let out a small laugh and made her face him.. then pointed towards the sky and said..
" isiliye., humare peyar ke nishan. wo sitare hai.. taki jab hum ek. dusreke paas na. rahe toh phir bhi hum ek dusreko kareeb mehesus kar sake.. " he said and looked
at her smiling with love. she just looked at him with teary eyes and hugged him..
they both started to watch little diamonds above their heads , in each other ' arms..
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Abhirika Drabbles:48
DON'T AVOID
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Hey guys. I'm trying something Supernatural today. Main conecept devotion in the mind of devote . So , please don't say filmy , illogical etc. Coz Supernatural is nothing but illogic and filmy . And this idea is again and again peeping inside my stupid head , it came from nowhere . This idea is little bit filmy , and may be already had been shown any.
film. I've no idea about this seriously and this idea came to me from nowhere. :p Hope you all enjoy. And KK di don't count this note while counting words. :p . Enjoy. :)
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Abhijeet came to the lab with team to gather information. While they were going back , everybody was infront of Abhijeet and he was at the behind of all. So evdrybody went and He was also going but stopped with Tarika ' s call .
" Han Tarika bolo. " Abhijeet replied casually to her call and Dr Salukeh started looking narrowing eyes. Tarika took something from her bag and came to him.
" Apna daya kalai ( wariest ) age karo na Abhijeet . " She said nervously .
Abhijeet made a confused face but forwarded it towards her. She was holding a red - yellow thread and was going to tie
it on his wariest , but Abhijeet pulled back his arm shocked.
" Are Tarika pagal hogeyi ho keya ? Mere hat mai dhaga keu bandh rahe ho ? main.. main tumhara bhai hu keya? eee. Rajat hai , Daya hai unlogoke hato pe bandho na.
Mere hee keu ? " He said with a crying face .
Dr Salukeh burst out at laughing at this and Abhijeet narrowed his eyes at him.
" Uffo Abhijeet ye rakhi nahi. Dhaga hai. Lao hatt lao. "
She said and hold his wariest and started tying that.
" Per kaise dhaga ? " Abhijeet asked still confused. While tying the thread she said, " Kal madir geyi thi. Toh pandit ji ne mujhe ye dhaga deke bola , ' ye teri pati ke hato mai 5 knot deke bandh dena , wo dirghjib ( long life) hoga . "
Abhijeet smirkd and said , " Accha ? per unhone toh bola tumhare pati ke hato mai bandhneke liye. Tum mujhe keu bandh rahe ho ? "
Her hand stopped and Salukeh looked at them with narrowed eyes.
" Tumhe nahi pata ? " Tarika asked in a low voice and Abhijeet was going to reply but was cut with ACP ' S c voice.
" Abhijeet kaha rehe geye? Jaldi ao . "
" Bye. " Abhijeet hurriedly went .
" Are Abhijeet . " She tried to stop him but he was gone.
" Ye panchwi ( 5th ) knot toh dia hee nahi. " She mumbled and made a worried face.
Then all the while she was feeling too much restless . In the evening Dr Salukeh ' s phone rang . He attended the call and cut it with shocked expression with " Hum ate hai.
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Tarika saw his face and asked worriedly " keya hua sir ? "
" Ab..Abhijeet ko 10 goli laga hai. Use..Use hospital lejaraha hai sab . Halat bohot critical hai. " The old doctor managed and She was shocked. Suddenly she ran and Dr
Salukeh followed her .
At the hospital ,
Everybody was waiting and Tarika was lost in her world. After sometime the doctor came out hurriedly and ACP went to him.
" Dekhiye , he is critical. Humne goliya nikal di hai per bleeding bandh hona zaruri hai. Unhe ab ICU mai shift karna hai. And I can't assure you. Only some miracle can
save him. I'm sorry. Excuse me. " He said and went.
Tarika sat again there without any energy and everyone present there were unable to digest the words. After sometime he was brought out by the stretcher .
Tarika ' s eyes fall on him and then at the thread with 4 knots , and suddenly she shouted " R.. Ruko. " And she ran to him and just tied the 5th knot and he was taken
inside. All were waiting outside with hightension .
After sometimes the doctor came out declared "Congratulations. He is out of danger. This is surely a miracle . You all can meet me. " The doctor
went from there.
Everybody heaved a sight of releife and so she , with a smile on face.
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A / N : As I told before This idea is little bit filmy , and may be already had been shown any film. But I've no idea about this seriously and this idea came to me from
nowhere.. So don't search for logic and film name. here. :P
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