Hello everyone! It is with pride I show you what I've been working on the past 2 weeks! Before we begin, I want to mention this story is a blend of the lore of the old comics/tv series, and the newest (and best) Smurfs movie, "Smurfs: The Lost Village." There is more of the latter, I suppose. This is supposed to happen before the 3rd movie, just because it'd be easier to write without having to worry about the other Smurfettes. Depending on the amount of reviews I receive, I may/may not do reviews for every chapter of this little story.
Biggest 4 differences between movie and my writing:
Gargamel wants to catch the Smurfs because they're so happy and keep humiliating him by getting away, besides him also having a worse temperament. In general, Gargamel is a little different in the old 80's comics/tv show. He's more full of hate.
Baker smurf is replaced with Greedy smurf, who is the chef at the village. Sweepy is the guy with the british accent instead. Gargamel's bird Monty also won't exist.
Brainy will be a little more annoying (not as much as he is in 80's series), and in general I want to employ the rule that all smurfs have good hearts. Timber smurf won't talk to trees like he apparently does in the tv series (I was pretty surprised after reading the wiki about him).
I want this to be a blend between both, so some characters may act similar to the movie, and others to the comics/tv series. If you're confused as to how some of smurfs like Timber Smurf look like, just google their name (Timber Smurf has a red coat on).
I should mention again that although these are the biggest differences, my story is a blend of all the smurf content, so there will be a few minor differences. In my opinion, you should go see the original content yourself. has some of the old tv episodes and comics.
Before I go really off topic, I'll just end it here. Please like/favorite if you feel my writing deserves it, disclaimer: The smurfs, Gargamel, Azrael, and Monty belong to Peyo, hope you enjoy reading!
It was an especially crisp Autumn day, with a light breeze blowing the leaves around. While it usually was a happy time for the smurfs to play to leaf piles, gather the harvest, and, best of all, celebrate halloween, this year would be different.
"Oh blast it, Azrael, I hate those rotten little smurfs. Hate them, hate them, HATE THEM!" Gargamel bellowed while slamming his fist against his table
"I've tried every trick in the book. I've tried so many spells, so many potions, so many evil plots. But they somehow always get the best of me, Azrael. It's not fair Azrael, it's not fair!"
Azrael, laying down on the tough stone flooring, listened and agreed with his master. He just wanted to taste a smurf… They smelled so delicious, so much better than the mice that made up most of his diet. The Smurfs always made fun of Gargamel and himself when they failed to catch them, and it really got on his nerves.
"I just want to live in the forest without having to listen and sense their constant joy and laughter, and I've made that very clear, but they refuse to leave. They make me look like a fool Azrael!"
"There must be some way to pit the smurfs against each other… to make them the fools, and when they're too caught up fighting I will finally be able to destroy them once and for all! I've already tried sending a smurfette to do just that, but that didn't work! Those smurf's terribly good hearts accepted that Smurfette, my own creation, and made her good! Such a waste of talented evil… She really could've done so much more… "
Gargamel stopped for awhile, deep in thought. There must be some other way to destroy the smurfs. "Hmm, it's hard to plot with an empty stomach Azrael. Ready for some lunch?" Gargamel asked, walking over to the pantry.
Azrael looked up at his master and nodded with a grin. At least they had some food and a roof over their heads.
"Oh drat Azrael, it's completely empty! I forgot that Bigmouth emptied the pantry again! Curses to that fumbling fool! Now we're going to have to walk all the way to town to get something to eat!" Gargamel screamed.
Azrael gasped in horror. Town was miles away! By the time they got back, they'd be eating dinner!
"I'll just have to grab some of the gold my dear Mummy left me when she visited last." Gargamel said, grabbing a pouch of gold. "Oh no Azrael! The smurfs left me a note, 'Dear Gargamel, we have borrowed the last of your gold coins. We needed it for potions for our halloween festival. Miner smurf will return the lost gold and extra by the end of November.'" Gargamel paused for a second before exploding with anger. "You know what this means, Azrael? It means we can't eat! The damn smurfs stole the last of our money! I. Hate. Those. Smurfs!"
Caught in a rage, Azrael began banging on the floor he was lying on with his paws. He just couldn't take it anymore; over and over again something just had to go wrong. The food was the last straw. He already had to go hungry because of a shortage of food, which in turn was because they could never catch those smurfs and make soup a la smurf.
Gargamel took three deep breaths, knowing he needed to calm down. After thinking again, he said "Actually, Azrael, we will have food to eat."
Azrael poked his head towards Gargamel in confusion. There was food to eat? Where?
"We'll just have to steal from a couple of fools when we get into town Azrael. Say, if we're lucky, I've seen the smurfs around the human villages a few times. Who knows? Maybe with this trip we just might get the leverage we need to finally finish the smurfs off."
And so, with a cackle, Gargamel and Azrael left for town. Gargamel was right about one thing though: He'd find just what he needed to cause havoc in the Smurf's village.
Eventually, when Gargamel and Azrael arrived at town after a long journey, he scowled. The peasants were setting up jack-O-lanterns and other childish garbage in the front of their houses. He preferred the monsters that ate said peasants.
"Keep your eye out Azrael. If we can't snag a few coins, we could at least steal some candy from a few of the unsuspecting parents of these rotten children."
As they neared the market, Gargamel's scowl grew even wider. The whole market had halloween decorations, even though halloween was a full week away. Merchants gave children tasty treats. There was an apple bob, a "haunted" house, and even a stage, with performers. The performers, upon a closer look, were skeletons; the wizard raising them was receiving plenty of free coins from the peasants. Coins Gargamel hoped would be ripe for the taking.
"Azrael, follow me, let's head behind stage. I'm sure this Necromancer has some valuables out back he isn't watching." Gargamel ordered as he and Azrael went behind.
When they went inside, they were surprised: They did see plenty of gold, but also saw a lot of potions, with labels. "What's this Azrael? Some potions to give an evil voice, a bag of powder for healing tummy aches caused by eating too much sugar, rare ingredients found in only in the corners of the world, the wizard's spare staff of resurrection? We should take some of these things too Azrael! Might come in handy."
Just as Gargamel said that, the Necromancer stepped behind stage to give the skeletons another dose of his magic and saw the evil wizard with his cat.
"I don't think you'll be taking anything, stranger. Leave now or I'll turn you into a pile of goo!" The wizard commanded.
"Yikes! Let's get out of here Azrael!" Gargamel shouted, snatching a random potion on the way out. The wizard, noticing the theft, tossed a handful of a green powder at them; but they were long gone. "Stop! Thieves!" the wizard roared, before running after them. But he never found them; if Gargamel was good at anything, it's running for his life.
"Oh Azrael, we may not of gotten any food, but I did take this potion. I wonder if- oh! It comes with a scroll attached! Now what is this?"
The label read, "'Potion of transformation'. Turn your friends into monsters for a night of great fun after following 3 simple steps! Disclaimer: Potion only changes appearance. Ingredient to cure spell sold separately." A grin crept up on Gargamel's face, becoming even wider than a Jack-o-lantern, and he started to cackle. "I have just what I need to finally end the smurfs Azrael! Mhuahahaha! And they won't ever see it coming."
I just want to say that although I didn't originally plan on releasing multiple chapters at once, I felt that it wouldn't be fair to give so little at once. As it stands, I have chapter summaries done, along with the first four chapters (I am currently working on chapter 5). This will be about ten chapters, maybe a little longer, with most of them being about twice as long as this one.