Sweet scented blood
Hey theres not much to say, just that i hope you like it, i have not tried poetry much
yes i do not know much about poetry but i tried anyway so this is my second piece and please review and tell me what ya think
The girl that passed me
i was amazed
her brown eyes bold
filled with passion
Her heart beating faster
The blood running through her veins
the sweet scent
how i wanted
to let my lips close over her throat
take what i needed
she makes me week
i could fall to my knees
how is it so that this human
before me
before my eyes
has made me test my strengths
i watched her sleep
surprised how peaceful it was
i missed that
she woke
i hid away
she rested her delicate body again
i gave one more look
before leaving that beautiful women
i couldn't loose control
i could not hurt her
i am better than that
monster or not
she deserves better than me
hello again, hope you liked it, loved it , thought it was bad, or hated well i will never know if you don't tell me so can you please review and just tell me what you thought because it will be much loved thank you .__.
xoxoxoxo.
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