This is my first ever fan-fiction of anything... ever!
This will probably will be only around 6 chapters long... they'll get progressively longer though.
Hope you enjoy the ride!
Kylo Ren was absolutely ropeable. Strutting down the mechanical halls he gave little thought to any obstacles or personnel that might get in his way. Alarms and flashing lights were filling the halls of the First Order fortress as Stormtroopers jogged through every chamber, corridor and hangar searching for the escapee.
Marching through the clamour Kylo Ren's senses however, had tuned-out the blur of strobing lights and troopers passing him. His mind was never penetrated by the invasive ringing in the air or hissing accompanied by passing doors. His senses were focusing solely on his prisoner, his ex-prisoner.
"Not again," he thought, "That scavenger will not escape me again."
With a fresh sense of wicked motivation he broke into a sprint, feeling for her through the force. Rounding a corner his menacing presence sent most hurrying away; however, there were a few occasions where a trooper or technician did not get out of the way quickly enough and were blown against a wall by Ren's explosive rage. He could feel his heart pulsing faster and a steady flow of venom growing in his mouth.
"Fuel your anger, use it as your strength, feel the dark side running through you." The memory of Snoke's mantra coaxed in Kylo Ren's mind. A malicious smile spread across his lips. Were his mask off, the look on his face would have sent spine-chilling fear into anyone unfortunate enough to be in his presence.
Kylo Ren ignited his lightsabre and felt once again through the force for the scavenger. He knew he was getting closer, sensing her force signature growing stronger. He knew she could feel him too, her fear increasing and brewing an exhilarated laugh in his chest, escaping his throat.
I'm coming scavenger. He beckoned through the force. Kylo Ren continued on, taking a moment to listen for any response. When none came he called again, You will join me this time, or join your precious Han Solo.
What do you think?
In my opinion I may have made Kylo Ren a bit darker than I had initially wanted. Do you like this darker Kylo Ren or do you think he should get a bit more softer as the chapters go on?
Do not fear! Ren POV in next chapter! Where or where could our favourite scavenger be?
This is my first fanfic so please give me your honest opinions! I'd love to know where I can improve. Thanks.