Authors Note: Hello there readers! I am a new author on this website, and have not been writing for very long. Please, all I ask are no flamers that will pretty much bash my story for no good reason. I don't mind criticism, but please keep it light.
There is already a poll up for the pairing of this story on my profile page. The choices are:
Natsumi (Narutos' younger twin sister)
Satsuki (Twin sister of Sasuke)
Hinata
Shion
Chie (Fem. Gaara)
Fu
Anko (five years older than him, but still VERY sexually inappropriate.)
Tayuya
Kin
Nagi (Fem. Neji. One year older)
Everyone gets five votes.
Also, I would like to point out that all of the choices other than Anko and Nagi are slightly younger than him. Only by one year at the most, a few minutes at the least. (Natsumi)
This will be a harem story, but there will be a five girl MAXIMUM. There will be no ifs, ands, or buts about it.
I will not be saying the style name for jutsu, or translate them to Japanese. Example: "Futon: Great Breakthrough", or "Wind style: Great Breakthrough".
It will simply be "Great Breakthrough", and the only exception will be for the Rasengan variations.
There will be bashing during the story. It's Konoha, Minato and Kushina in the beginning, but only until he is 13. Civilian council and Danzo bashing later on, right after he becomes a genin.
Anyway, with that out of the way, I would also like to say that this is a Godlike Naruto. That doesn't mean he won't get into difficult fights in the future; it just means that his power is WAY above Kage level. He will also hide his power for a while, with a reason, most likely until the chunin exams. Minato is also stronger than a Kage, but not nearly Narutos' level. There will be others like him though…
Okay then, let's get onto the disclaimer!
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or any other anime or manga I may reference.
Chapter 1: Kyuubi Attack, Neglect, and Bloodlines
Apathy. This is what a now five year old Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze felt towards his mother and father. Five years he has lived with them ignoring him in favor of his twin sister Natsumi. At first it was a great resentment, which in turn leads to hatred. Now, he can't feel anything at all for them. He just doesn't care enough about them to even formulate an opinion on the matter. Of course, such a way of looking at things can only last so long before someone snaps…
Five years ago, on the date of the Uzumaki Namikaze twins birth, the Kyuubi no Kitsune attacked their home, Konohagakure. Many hundreds of men and women died from the great beasts' rampage, but it was eventually defeated thanks to Hiruzen Sarutobi, the third Hokage. He was able to reseal the beast into Natsumi at the cost of his own life, since even though Naruto was born first, both previous holders of the beast were female. Since then, Naruto has been all but entirely forgotten by both the villagers and his parents. He eventually grew apathetic to them as well; not seeing why he should dwell on the way such trivial insects treated him.
His sister was a different matter entirely. He truly does care about her, and knows that it isn't her fault for the blatant favoritism. She is the most innocent person he knows, and doesn't let the attention from both the villagers and parents inflate her ego. He was very protective of her, and sometimes taught her some of the things he had learned on his own. Being a genius, the things he taught her were very simple for him.
You see, even though Naruto does not contain the Kyuubi, his chakra reserves are tremendously high for his age, even for an Uzumaki. He is currently at high jounin reserves. There is also the fact that his intelligence is already on par with his fathers. He has studied every day since he was two years old in their family's library, learning many different things. He has learned the leaf balancing, tree walking, water walking, kunai balancing, and running up a waterfall techniques for chakra control to the degree he can do all of them at once. His control is greater than that of Tsunade Senju.
Next are his sealing abilities. He has already completed his soul seal, and mastered his father's famous Hiraishin no jutsu on both levels. All of the Uzumaki Fuinjutsu have been learned, and even improved by him! Needless to say, he is a prodigy like no other. The seals he created himself were almost all easily S-rank and some were SS-rank.
His ability to use genjutsu was, quite frankly, disturbingly high. Some of his genjutsu actually cause real damage to the victim's body. His most effective genjutsu is an improvement of the mangekyou sharingans' tsukuyomi, which feels like five days to the victim, but is only two seconds in the real world. It could only be broken if they had more chakra than the user of the jutsu. As a side note, his Henge was also a real transformation. He had no idea why, even being a genius, but he wasn't complaining.
But what really took the cake was that he also had three kekkei genkai. First up was the most expected bloodline, which is the legendary Uzumaki stamina, chakra levels, chakra manipulation, and advanced healing. Natsumi also had this bloodline, so it was completely expected.
Next was the ability to not only a photographic memory, but also understanding everything that he read to amazing degree. If he focused chakra into his eyes, they would zoom in by about 10X the normal sight, eyesight that can predict the person's movements, as well as having night vision and the ability to see the amount of chakra someone has and the tenketsu points. It was almost like a modified version of the fully matured sharingan and byakugan combined.
The last was definitely the most shocking. He had the elemental chakra mixing bloodline, along with all of the elemental affinities. This bloodline limit has not been able to be used since the first Hokage, so that meant one of his parents was related to the Senju clan. So far, he has only mastered wood release and a few jutsu with it. He has kept the last two bloodlines a secret from both of his parents, seeing as he had no real reason to tell them anything about himself anyway. No one was aware of the last, but Narumi did know about the second. He had told her because he didn't trust anyone else yet.
Currently, Naruto was walking through Konohas' streets, the full moon shining down and illuminating the village. It was thanks to this light that he was able to see a shadowed figure running across the rooftops with a small sack across his shoulder. Naruto focused chakra into his eyes and was able to see a Kumo headband. He narrowed his now glowing blue eyes and gave chase to the mysterious figure.
He finally caught up to the now identified Kumo shinobi, and landed in front of him.
The tall man sneered at the sight of a small boy blocking his path.
"Hey brat, you had better move out of my way unless you want to die! I am an elite jounin, and you don't even have a headband. I'm feeling gracious today, so if you leave now, I will let you live," said the man arrogantly.
"…" said Naruto, who was just staring at the man with an emotionless gaze. For some reason, the Kumo shinobi felt unnerved by the boy's gaze.
"Hey brat, either run away or say something! I mean it kid, I will kill you!"
"Why should I speak with an unconscious man?" said Naruto with an unnerving calmness.
"What do you me-AHHH!?"
Naruto had already appeared in front of the man with a katana, and bashing his head with the blunt end, knocking him out.
He ran over to the sack and cut it open to reveal a terrified Hinata Hyuuga. As soon as he cut her bindings open, she leapt up and started crying in his arms. He reassured her that everything was alright when several Anbu appeared along with her mother and father. Hinata ran over to her mother as soon as she saw her. The Anbu commander spoke up, breaking up the tearful reunion.
"Naruto-san, would you please inform us of what happened here? Why is a Kumo-Nin here of all places?"
And so he told them of what happened. To say that the Anbu and Hyuuga were stunned was an understatement. A five year old had just single handedly taken out a jounin, albeit a weak one, with one hit. That had gotten the Hyuuga Patriarch to thinking. He had always wanted his daughters to marry someone stronger than himself, and this boy definitely had the potential to become that strong in just a few years. He wondered if he could set up an arranged marriage with his parents for a brief moment…until he remembered that his wife would kill him for not letting Hinata make her own choices.
Naruto had just finished explaining the incident when Hitomi, Hinatas' mother, bowed and thanked him profusely. Not knowing what to say in this situation, he started telling her that it was okay, and that he just did the right thing. Hiashi spoke up after a few moments, having an idea of how to thank the boy.
"We must thank you somehow, so I propose that we make you an ally to the Hyuuga clan. Any time that you may need assistance in any training or political matters, we will side with you."
The Anbu, Naruto, and even Hitomi were shocked. Something like this had not happened since the third great ninja war when the Hyuuga became allies with the Sarutobi clan. For a five year old to receive this was a true honor.
"Thank you Hyuuga-sama. I am honored that I would even be considered for such a thing."
"It's no problem at all and just call me Hiashi-san. If things go smoothly, you may even call me tou-san one day!"
That got a major blush out of both Naruto and Hinata. Hitomi was once again shocked at her normally stoic husbands' actions. For the past five years, he had been nearly expressionless in public. She just chalked it up to the stress of the day catching up to him.
"Tou-san! W-What are y-you saying!?" squeaked out the tomato red Hinata.
"Ha-ha-ha! I'm just kidding! No need to get worked up about it. I was serious though, Naruto-san. You are hereby a close ally of the Hyuuga clan. Now let's get you home, your parents are probably worried sick about you!"
Naruto had a slightly angry look on his face for a moment and said, "Don't worry about it. They probably didn't even notice. I wasn't there for lunch or dinner either, so them not sending anyone out means they did forget me."
The Hyuuga and Anbu looked at him incredulously for a moment, not wanting to believe that their beloved Yondaime Hokage would forget his own son. But it was proven by the fact that none of the Anbu were sent out that night to search. Hitomi looked disgusted by her friend Kushinas' actions. Hiashi looked down-right furious, his sense of fatherly protection renewed with vigor due to the night's events. Even the Anbu, especially the white haired one with a dog mask, looked like they were questioning why he wouldn't care for his son properly. Suddenly, a yellow flash appeared in front of them, halting their thoughts on the matter.
"Alright, I want to know what's going on here. Why is the Kumo delegate on the ground? He was just with me a few hours ago during the peace treaty renewal." Said the now revealed Minato.
The Anbu explained what happened to him, but he just pretty much ignored everything about his son said until they told him he was now the ally of the Hyuuga clan. As clan head, even if there were only four members, he thought of how this could benefit them in many ways. Being an ally of the clan also meant Naruto could marry someone from the clan as well. He could potentially join the two clans to create an even more powerful and dangerous one. After thinking a few moments, he told the Anbu to scout the area to see if there were any more unfamiliar chakra signatures, while he discussed things with Hiashi and his wife.
"Well, seeing as how we are now allies with your clan, I would like to propose an arranged marriage to my son and your eldest daughter."
Hiashi looked at Minato like he had grown a second head, and said, "Who said that your clan was allied with us? Only Naruto has this alliance with us. He is the one who saved my daughter, and he is the one who will receive the reward. My family has had an extremely stressful day Hokage-sama, so if you please, we will be going home now. Come along dears', let's get back to bed."
Hitomi looked at her husband and smiled a beautiful smile at him. It had taken this horrible event, but he was finally returning to the kind man he was when she had first married him. She carried Hinata, who looked over her mother's shoulder and told Naruto thank you again. Now only Naruto and a slightly shocked Minato were standing there. Naruto started whistling and walking away from him when he saw that he wasn't moving from his spot.
For the next week, Naruto had left 200 clones to train in jutsu and create seals while he went to the Hyuuga estate to be with Hinata. She was a really nice girl, but was also incredibly shy around him. She would always get red in the face whenever he gave her compliments or held her hand, and he didn't know what to make of it.
Hey, he might be a super genius in the ninja arts, but he was only five years old. His mother had also cleaned out the homes' library of any "unclean" materials before he was even born, so he didn't have any references to go on. That was the only reason he couldn't use medical techniques yet.
Anyway, the incident with Kumo had been resolved peacefully, with Kumo having to compensate heavily for it. Since the Ninja had been captured alive, they had no choice but to concede when he confessed. It also had helped that they didn't want any potential clients to know that one of their jounin had been beaten by a five year old child. They would be the laughing stock of the elemental nations if that got out to the public.
Naruto was currently sitting on a park bench when he heard a slight sobbing noise. It was coming from behind a tree not far back in the woods. He spotted a girl around his age crying in a fetal position. She had long raven hair and coal black eyes, and in his opinion, she seemed very beautiful.
"Why are you crying? Is there anything I can do to help you?" asked Naruto, trying to get her to stop crying. He always hated to see girls cry, no matter the reason.
"My f-father said that I was an embarrassment to the clan because my twin brother beats me in spars. I only lose because he cheats by using weapons while I can't." said the girl.
Naruto scowled at the blatant show of favoritism towards one child, a twin no less, as he could most certainly identify with her problem. He leaned down and dried her tears with his hand while smiling as warmly as he can at her.
"I can understand what it feels like. My parents always favor my twin sister over me, and sometimes even forget that I exist. I think that people like us should stick together, so would you be my friend?" said the smiling Naruto.
The girl looked at him and blushed, quickly looking away so he wouldn't catch it. She smiled brightly and nodded her head while he grabbed her hand and helped her up.
"By the way, what's your name?" said the girl.
"Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze, what's yours?"
"It's Satsuki, Satsuki Uchiha."
"Well Satsuki, I hope that we can get along great! Let's go play in the trees!" said an enthusiastic Naruto.
For the rest of the day, Naruto had played with Satsuki, and had even taught her the tree walking exercise. She was ecstatic to learn it, as it would help her chakra control that was necessary when mastering the Uchiha fire techniques. After an eventful day, they eventually went their separate ways, promising to meet each other whenever possible with the park as their meeting place.
Eight years later.
ABILITY OVERVIEW – SKIP UNTIL NEXT BOLD IF YOU DON'T CARE
Now at age 13, Naruto was currently meditating while floating in the air. Around him were balls of water, rings of fire, currents of lightning, and a light shell of Earth. He had finally mastered all of his affinities, along with the wood, lava, boil, ice, storm, and plasma releases. He has mastered many jutsu for each element to the point he no longer requires hand-signs, as well as creating many jutsu himself.
His Fuinjutsu had gotten to godlike levels in this last year. He created seals that could replicate the effects of jutsu, getting the idea after he met a boy named Rock Lee, who could not mold chakra properly. All they required was a drop of blood from either Naruto or Lee. He only gave them to the boy and for himself, as he didn't want civilians to become more powerful than many ninja due to him selling them. There are too many types of seals he had invented to be listed here actually, but his most noteworthy was finding a way to destroy the Orochimaru curse mark of heaven. Anko was more than pleased, and even tried to 'thank' him in a VERY sexual way. He refused only because he was nine at the time. He also kept this hidden, as he wanted to be on his sisters' genin team.
Other dealings with Lee came when he mastered medical ninjutsu to a degree that would put Tsunade to shame. He combined his seals with the medical techniques, and created a much more efficient means of surgical procedure. He had actually operated, with assistance from his clones to keep his secrecy, and fixed the problem Lee had with his chakra pathways. They became fully functional when Naruto turned 10, but Lee kept the jutsu scrolls, saying he was still a taijutsu specialist, and would like an ace up his sleeve just in case he was ever in a pinch. You should have seen the looks on the faces of the medical examiners when they checked only to find his pathways were completely healed. They claimed that only an act of Kami could have caused this case. How wrong they were, Naruto isn't at god level…YET. He was close, but he still needed to surpass the Kyuubi in terms of raw chakra to become a true GOD.
His chakra chains had also been developed very nicely. He was able to take them to a level Kushina never had before. They no longer had to come out of his back, as he was able to manipulate them anywhere he could see. He had also created a few A-ranks to S-rank techniques by using them. The most powerful one was what he called the "Elemental World of Chains". He considered it to be a SSS-rank technique because it was really a modified version of Chibaku Tensei, which was what the sage of six paths used to create the moon. Its size varied on the amount of chakra he put into it, which was now enough to be ten times as large as Konoha in his case. Chains of chakra would appear in the air and wrap tightly around each other, creating a huge ball. If released from his grasp, the ball would come flying down to Earth, destroying everything in its path. That, coupled with the fact that the chains could be coated in elemental chakra, made it a truly frightening technique.
He almost never used his genjutsu anymore. The last time he used it on a group of thugs; he had actually CREATED demons through mind-power alone. The tortures became real to the point everyone around the victim could see what was happening to him. He was actually afraid he was tampering too far into the realm of the gods by creating new life, so he backed off considerably from learning more in the art. This is how he learned he had somehow recreated Yin-Yang release. He still needed more power before he starts any Godlike work.
Taijutsu was the most difficult for him, as his body still needed to grow. However, he found a way around that by placing seals all over his body to enhance it to incredible levels. His limbs were now each coated in three layers of chakra. The first was the main layer of strengthening chakra. The second had Lightning chakra to stimulate his muscles and nerves even further. The final layer was made up of a fine layer of healing chakra, increasing his regenerative abilities to a level greater than even the Jinchuriki. The gravity seals placed on him were also maxed out at 100 times Earth's atmosphere thanks to the regeneration of the torn muscles. He was extremely fit for his age, but had more of a swimmers body than a bodybuilder.
His chakra pool had grown to what should have been impossible levels thanks to the almost countless seals he had placed around his body, as well as the natural Uzumaki bloodline on top of that. It was around seven tails worth in terms of amount, and its potency was about as great as demonic energy. However, his control had still remained completely perfect due to his Senju blood and constant training. He found out his father was actually the great grandson of the second Hokage, so it made sense he excelled in control.
Another technique he created was called the chakra gun. It was very versatile, like the Rasengan, and was an easily modified technique. He simply held his thumb up, and index and middle finger towards the target, and adds however much chakra he wanted for the various techniques. Only he, Natsumi, and his mother could use it because it dealt with chakra shape manipulation. The versions varied from senbon needles, to the regular gun, to his most deadly version so far, the 'Chakra Bomb Barrage'. It was a SS-rank to SSS-rank technique because it could take all of the chakra of the user to make it as powerful as possible. Naruto had enough chakra to level half of fire country if he used all of his chakra.
However, his favorite and most frequently used skill dealt with weapons. He had to hide his true abilities, so he focused on weapons for the past year to throw any suspicion off of his back, as Inu, one of his favorite Anbu, had come very close to catching him train when he was to careless.
He was able to learn weapon crafting from old texts that were, for some reason, stored in the Uzumaki vault. He briefly wondered if Kushina had ever even thought to try and look through all of these scrolls, it was their heritage after all. He quickly learned that the weapons created were VERY special.
He had gotten permission from his mother and father to use the forge on their property, as it hadn't been used in quite a while. They thought that he was just going to try to make kunai or something, so what was the harm?
After practicing the fine art of smithing and mastering it after an entire year of training, he finally created one of the special weapons. It was a scythe with a black blade and five red stripes going down it. It glowed an unsettling red aura, and any weapons master or smith could tell it was sentient. He spoke with the blade, and learned it was called Thanatos, or the harbinger of death. It could be infused with wind chakra to create a move he called the 'Black Wind', which killed any living organism it touched. It was an S-rank technique due to the fact it was a guaranteed kill if the move connected, and it was so fast, it was very difficult to dodge.
His second weapon was no less impressive, and was a katana called Messiah, which was the polar opposite of Thanatos. It emitted a holy blue flame when fire chakra was added. He had mainly used the move 'Divine Judgment', which was when the blue flame was flung into the air and came raining down on a large scale, making it an S-rank technique.
The most unexpected creation of his was that of his violin, Orpheus. It was incredibly rare to see sentient instruments, mainly because they were nearly impossible to create. It was what allowed him to better control the strength of his genjutsu, as it became a medium with a conscious. He could kill an entire battlefield full of soldiers, and not affect any allies due to this new control. His most effective technique for this was a song he called 'Wings of Dread'. It made all of the enemy see black wings coming from their backs, which then proceed to choke them to death with black shadow tendrils coming out of them while showing them the deaths of all those precious to them in the most terrible ways they could think of, causing the brain to shut down after taking continuous physical and mental strain. It became a SS-rank technique, seeing as how only those with a fully mastered Mangekyou sharingan could hope to break it, and affected all enemies who could hear it.
He was able to test these abilities out due to blood clones staying at his home while he goes out to hunt in bandit camps. Minato really should keep the forbidden scroll in a much more secure location.
END ABILITY OVERVIEW
Back to the story, he was now walking towards his normal meeting place at the park with Hinata and Satsuki. The two girls quickly became friends, but he knew that they were vying for his affections. He learned around age nine, when his godfather Jiraiya had to teach him of sex after Anko tried to jump him, and his godmother Tsunade beat the living crap out of said pervert for trying to corrupt him, that they were obviously attracted to him. He finally went to the library and checked out some romance novels, only to find out he was acting that way towards them in some ways already. He wasn't sure if he loved them or not, but he was attracted to them.
Of course, you would have to be gay not to be. They looked just like their mothers did when they were their age, which was like comparing them to goddesses. Hinata had grown her hair out to her lower back, and had developed an impressive B-cup. Satsuki also had her hair at the same length, but had an A-cup instead. Not that it made her any less beautiful than Hinata. Many boys had tried to get their attention, but quickly backed off when they saw that they were with Naruto.
Speaking of Satsuki, he had grown much closer to her after the Uchiha massacre when they were eight. He had rushed in and was able to save her, her mother, and her twin brother Sasuke. He was treated with respect by the remaining three, as he had single handedly defeated Itachi, who was executed later the same day. He thought Sasuke would be jealous, but he just begged Naruto to train him so he could protect his family from this ever happening again. Naruto agreed, and was helping him along, and he was at mid-chunin level already. He only asked that they keep who saved them a secret until after the chunin exams he would compete in, to which they readily agreed.
Anyway, Naruto had finally reached the thick wooded area where they usually met up and saw the two angels. He was wearing his usual outfit, which was the basic black Anbu attire for his body, black open toed sandals, and a long black trench coat. They were waiting with smiles on their faces, due to the fact they can stop holding back, and Naruto can at least show more of his strength. They, as well as Natsumi, now knew about his chakra mixing bloodline, but kept it secret for fear that he would be forced into a breeding program by the council.
Today is the day of graduation, and they are now heading towards the academy for a final time after meeting up. Satsuki speaks up to break the silence.
"So you guys, what do you think we should show? I mean Hinata and I are about mid to High Chunin level, and Naruto-kun here is god knows what level, so we have to think this through now."
"I will most likely be placed with Natsumi, not that I mind. I just wish you two would be on my team as well." said the slightly downcast Naruto.
The two looked sad for a minute before perking up, telling him that they will still meet as often as they can when not on missions.
Iruka settled down the class quickly with his 'Big Head Technique' which was standard for all academy teachers. The written tests were easy, all of his friends getting perfect scores. Same with the accuracy tests with ranged weapons. In the taijutsu tournament, Naruto, Sasuke, Natsumi, Satsuki, Hinata, and Kiba advanced. The semifinals contained Naruto, Satsuki, and Sasuke, having won their previous rounds. It was a three way tournament, with the winner being the last one standing. The class gathered around the sparing area to see the most exciting match of the year. All three were tied so far when it came to the rookie of the year title.
"Alright, this will be just like the previous matches. Any moves that are not taijutsu will get you disqualified immediately, and no killing or badly injuring your opponent. Are you all ready? Then Begin!"
Satsuki and Sasuke immediately both went after Naruto, hoping to get an advantage in teamwork. Naruto saw this coming, and simply waited for them to reach him before he lazily bent his body backwards, dodging the punches, and used the momentum to come back at them with his fists, hitting them both in the stomach. Even with all of his restriction seals on, that still hurt like hell. Both tried changing tactics several times, but none worked. Eventually, Naruto got bored and disappeared in a burst of speed the chunin couldn't even see, and knocked them both to the ground with his hands on the backs of their necks. They conceded quickly, and he was declared the winner by an amazed Iruka.
Next up was the Ninjutsu and Genjutsu tests, which they easily passed. The extra jutsu many used were clan techniques, but Naruto used his own Chakra gun at a medium power level to decimate a training dummy in one shot. The entire class was once again amazed, as it was very difficult to create new jutsu.
Naruto got the rookie of the year, while Satsuki received Kunoichi of the year. Neither of them cared about the title because it didn't really matter, as it was usually just an ego booster for the powerful and arrogant.
"Alright students, come back next week to get your team placements. If you're late, then there will be bad first impressions for you from your jounin squad leader. Dismissed!"
'Alright', thought Naruto, 'I still have time to perfect my recreation of Tsunade super strength. That will come in handy for dealing with arrogant people. There's nothing like knocking them down a few pegs by overpowering them with one finger!'
And so, for the next week, he thought that he would be peacefully destroying a training ground. Unfortunately, fate just loves to screw with him when it concerns his relationships with others.
Poor Naruto has to go through some tough crap very soon.
And that's the end!
Also, I would like to tell any of those who are fans of the story, 'Naruto: Kami's Benevolence', I have some bad news. I know the author, ace9607, and tragedy has struck. He died in a car crash three weeks ago, but I know his account information. He did give me permission verbally to adopt it if anything ever forced him to stop writing on the site for any reason. I will work on it after I finish writing this story, so expect to wait around half a year for it to start again.
On a lighter note, this is my first fanfiction, so no flamers. I think my first chapter turned out fairly well considering there is a ton of material needed for later reference in the story. Chapter 2 will be focused on the beginning of the teams, more training, relationship building, and the beginning of the wave arc. Chapter 3 is where the real violence and action take place. The poll will also close about 1 week after chapter three comes out, so CHOOSE!
Now to end my chapter just like my friend did.
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