So I got a review for my story On a Plane and I was told that I should make another story this time on a boat so here it is… enjoy and tell me what you think. I've just recently reposted my story On a Plane after editing some grammatical errors and now I'm editing this due to punctuation errors.
"I don't understand why you like sailing so much," Thalia mumbled. "I feel seasick."
"You just have to get used to it," Percy replied.
"Easy for you to say fish boy," Thalia snapped.
"Fish boy?"
"Yah fish are dumb just like you that's why they like the water just like you!"
"Oh no," Annabeth whispered.
"Don't let her talk about us that way!" The fish urged Percy inside his head. "Stand up for yourself."
"Oh I'm sorry," Percy said. "Would you rather us be up in the air? Maybe in, oh I don't know, Apollo's sun chariot?"
"Oh no," Annabeth mumbled.
"FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT" the fish chanted.
"You did not just say that," Thalia yelled standing up.
"What are you going to do about it Pinecone Face?" Percy asked also rising.
"Oh no oh no," Annabeth mumbled looking back and forth between Percy and Thalia.
"You're an idiot!" Thalia yelled.
"No you are!"
"No," Nico interrupted. "You both are."
"Am not!" Thalia and Percy said together.
"Your both acting like children," Nico continued. "Percy you're very protective of your fishy friends we get it."
Thalia giggled.
"Oh-"
"NO!" Nico interrupted. "Annabeth can you please just say something more helpful than 'oh no'? Because quite frankly you aren't helping anyone."
Thalia pressed her hand against her face in an attempt to control her giggling.
"And you," Nico said turning to her with a glare and effectively silencing her. "You're seasick fine but, Keep. It. To. Yourself."
For a moment every one was silent and then-
"Lets throw him overboard!" Thalia yelled.
"Yeah I bet some sharks would be happy to eat him as a favor to me. You know because we're fishy friends, right Nico?" Percy replied as they turned towards him.
"Come on guys we can work this out," Nico said as they closed in on him.
"Can we?"
Okay first off please don't tell me that I didn't write who said the last line I left it open ended on purpose. So tell me, did you like it?