Just a quick poem I thought up when I was bored while waiting to fall asleep. I went to my friends parents funeral and it had a gate on the cover of the funeral card, and I thought about the Promise Land, so I made this. PLEASE DON'T TAKE THIS FOR ANYTHING! I really did think this over, but I would appreciate it if you review and tell me what you think.
The Promise Land
Past the gate
To where the spirits everlasting roam
Where scowls and hate
Are never shown
Let go of the past
Make way for the future
See for the last
This is your life
And it begins here
It was long and cold before
We know
Because we're suffered the same sore
But now that you stand
At your Promise Land
What do you want your new life to be?