Draculaura
I was tingling all over ...
Heath suddenly came closer and trapped me against the pool wall. His hands were on either of me, pressed against the tile. My heart was beating fast, then I slid beneath the water, ducking under his arm and pushing off. I swam the entire length of the pool underwater, with Heath chasing after me. Then he grabbed me by the waist and held me so that couldn't get away. Finally we surfaced. His hair was no longer on fire, it was hanging down in front of his eyes.
He pushed back his hair and looked at me. "You're some swimmer," he said breathing really hard.
"So are you," I said panting. "There aren't many people who can catch up to me underwater, I've had a life's worth of training."
We were standing together at the shallow end of the pool, breathing hard. Heath put his warm arms around me and gently drew me toward him. Then he brought his lips close to mine, I raised my face to meet him. Then he touched are lips. His lips were very warm, and he kissed me so gently that it made my cold wet body tingle all over. I slid my arms around his neck, and his kisses became more demanding.
When we finally drew apart, we just stood there, locked in each others arms, the cool water caressing our bodies.
I just want to let everyone know I'm eleven, I know it's hard to believe, but yeah. Also please leave a review, tell me how I did, and that's all. :)