Top three worst fanfictions on the Steven Universe Archive
3. Boy Meets Middle School: "A generic middle school plot where the kids plan to kill the bully." It's mainly about a girl stealing a boy, but the boy chooses another girl. It doesn't even include all of the original characters. It's just a piece of shit OC rambling that barely has a plot of its own. Bad grammar, terrible characters, this story has it all.
2. My Angel: A story where the main character, another OC modeled after the author, is just a Mary Sue. Golden swords, born to God, and overpowered? Yep, we're definitely reading about a Mary Sue here, folks.
Not to mention that the grammar is atrocious, the chapters are short, and there is no plot. It's just another rambling.
And finally 1. Fighting: the atrocity that unfortunately debuted on the Steven Universe Archive. It's also the terrible story that made the author try and quit, but frankly, it just made things worse for her. When she announced on that last chapter that she was quitting, here's what one of her "haters" had to say:
Yeah, not all of us are sad that you're discontinuing. You wanna know why? All you've done was bitch and moan about how we had the audacity to tell you your stories sucked. All the time in the world to improve yourself, and you've spent that time throwing a temper tantrum like a seven-year-old bratty girl who didn't get what she wanted for her birthday. Pitiful.
And seeing how you were so incapable of taking constructive criticism that you had to resort to leaving butthurt messages to your "bullies," I'm glad you're considering quitting fanfiction. Clearly, you never cared about your stories at all because that's how I interpret the hissy fit you had with me when you were PMing me.
If you're really determined to improve yourself as a writer, though, you seriously need to grow up and realize that not everyone is going to like your work. Otherwise, life is wasted on you.
Please come back when you've put on your big-girl panties. Thank you.
Sayonara!
That one review was supposedly the review that "hurt the author's feelings", since she resorted to leaving this one:
Well all of you "happy" for me to discontinue better be happy with my foot in your mouth. Suck my ass bitches cause I don't give one fuck ... No two fucks...hell. I don't give 0.0001 fucks about the shit you've got to say. Take that "constructive criticism"
Seriously, nobody liked her stories to begin with, and no one likes them now. The fact that she couldn't take subtle constructive criticism to help her and had to resort to leaving that atrocity of a response is just a clear showing that life has wasted on her and that she never gived a shit about being a good author.
Seeing how many people have agreed to this, it's a good thing that she left the archive.
Serena, you were a waste of time, energy, and space. If it took you that long to realize it, then it'll take you longer to realize that you mean absolutely nothing to the archive, nor to this world. The day you will finally see that is the day people will show some respect towards you. Until then, you wanna continue to be a big baby, that's fine with everyone here, because in that case, you definitely don't belong here.