Disclaimer: I do not own the first part of this chapter, nor the characters therein. I am not trying to make a profit, I am just trying to improve my writing skills.
Thoughts are like this.
Jane turned back to Carlisle with the same vacant expression as before. "It was nice to meet you Carlisle – I'd thought Aro was exaggerating. Well, until we meet again…"
This is it, then, Bree thought. My only regret was that I couldn't tell Fred more about all of this. He's going almost totally blind into this world full of dangerous politics and dirty cops and secret covens. But Fred's smart and careful and talented. What can they do to him if they can't even see him? Maybe the yellow-eyes will meet him some day.
"Take care of that, Felix," Jane said indifferently, nodding at Bree. As she did so, Bree felt a strong sense of revulsion, and she knew Fred was next to her when it went away. Jane's eyes widened, and she looked around. "Where did she go? And my GOD, what is this revolting feeling!"
Recalling what Fred said about the time he could stay 'invisible', Bree looked to him and nodded. He took off away from the battle, keeping close enough so that she was 'invisible' as well. After a while, they climbed a tree, and waited for hours while the vampire cops searched for her, but with no success. Soon, she heard them stop moving.
"Well, with all the overlapping scents, I can't track her. Everything just smells like wolf… like wet dog. I can't seem to use my gift to pinpoint her either. She's long gone by now." Said a nerdy vampire cop in a nasally voice.
Everyone for miles around heard the vampire cops screams of rage at the newborn they could not and would not ever be able to find.
"Well, if it is indeed as pointless as you say, then let us return to Volterra. There is nothing left for us to take care of here," said one of the vampire cops that seemed to be partially in charge. With no waste and great haste, they left, and Bree and Fred climbed down the tree, and went to the yellow-eyed vampires.
"Stay hidden, Fred," She said as she stepped out of his revulsion 'shield' and into plain view. The wind blew in a way that kept the human girls' scent away from her. She giggled at their expressions, most of them startled. Then it was her turn to be startled as Diego ran out of the trees and right up to her, gave her a small kiss on the lips, just a peck really, and said "Later. I'll tell you later." She nodded at him.
Carlisle smiled at her, the other yellow-eyed vampires all had guarded expressions, but worry leaked through. "Well I would ask how you did what you just did, but you probably wouldn't tell me. It's probably better that way anyway. Who are you and what do you want?"
She smiled, and simply said "My name is Bree Tanner. And me and my two friends want answers."